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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: oceanbubble

OMG...
This had me on the edge...quite literally...i m sitting alone in my cabin right now...& i am afraid to look back...
That is the impact a good piece of writing should leave on the readers...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰
I had expected that in this update it will turn out to be Bihaan...but i should have learnt it by now...you always surprise us...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Ok...looking at the B 4 Bhoot stuff...i was sure it was Bihaan...he must be using some other phone i guess..
All the blood curdling scenes you described...i was literally covering my eyes...& just peeping through my fingers to read it...oh...how i hate Horror...
I had really not expected Thapki to get up at all...i would have sunk into the couch if that was possible...poor girl...she couldn't handle that...
I loved Bihaan's care & concern over her...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
he went & stood behind her...just like in the msg...plus...he was apologising to her about something when he was interrupted by preeti...right...?? So that has to be him...isn't it...??
Pls Muneera...update this one quickly & pls pls a little bit less horror in the next one...i don't think i can take anymore of it...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


Aww, Sakshi, I'm really sorry to get you all scared like that, I hope you're feeling better now.
Seems like horror is a big no-no for you, but trust me, this isn't even a scratch of the kind I read or watch ๐Ÿ˜†
I was just trying to explore this genre, and though, I could have made it hell a lot more scary, I didn't do it on purpose; I guess it's not the right place ๐Ÿ˜› I've only added a touch of horror to it, and I can see how people are on to the edge of their seats ๐Ÿคฃ
I've noticed, most readers here, crave for romance. Even I love writing it, but this one was just for a change ๐Ÿ˜‰
So, chill. The upcoming part will be entirely romantic ๐Ÿ˜ณ I have it all stuffed up in my head, its just the writing bit that needs time.
I'm going to update it as soon as I can, and thank you for reading it, even when it was horrifying you crazily!
โค๏ธ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Loved the second part as equally as the first one...โค๏ธ...just loved the different take you have given to this OS...do update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Yaar muneera...i totally chicken out of a horror flick...or a story...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† i m not brave that way...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
i am reading this just coz it is u who is writing it & i know that it won't really have all those spooky ghost type things coming up in it...or atleast i have been hoping for that...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by oceanbubble - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Upadate soon..
This is too good..
Plx update soon..
I am unable to compose my words for this , but I totally like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: fun4ever89

Loved the second part as equally as the first one...โค๏ธ...just loved the different take you have given to this OS...do update soon.


Thank you! โค๏ธ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: manaan

Upadate soon..
This is too good..
Plx update soon..
I am unable to compose my words for this , but I totally like it.


Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ
For thspki last dialogue..
Plx pity on us and update soon..
Love every chapter you are too good in suspense thing..well I don't know you skills in other stuff..but this I m enjoying alot..
And the whole bihaan trauma in seeing thapki like this bcx of him was tje best part..well all parts are equally best.
I so confused..
P.s.so lets ignore the shit I write above..
It just I love it..update asap..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
The last part was too good!! However I wish to see Bihaan's dumb found face!!! Can we get a update soon please? Pretty please????
Edited by Dplee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Haha awesome one! Thapki played a prank on her pati dev? Superb๐Ÿคฃ
Surely a match made in heaven! Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Omg!!!dear what a concept..in fact I was scared though I guessed that it would be Bihaan..but the things followed made me sacred...and at the end uff...she too played prank...omg!!!couldn't stop laughing...awesome...awesome...
I read the three parts in one flow...nice...do continue with naughty night with revenging bihan...lol...

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