Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30)

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#231

Res for 12 - not even read it, too rushed but had to reserve😭

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#232

You may read my reply on wattpad & that's true I gonna killed u someday itna torture karbate ho emotionally 😭
though sanskar reaction & swara decision is imaginable or predictable kitna dard dete ho swasan ko.

Take care buddy
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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Hi All

Updated final part. Pm's late ..Happy reading😛

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#234

Res for final too - I still have to catch up with the two previous ones - hopefully tomorrow I might be able to do so.

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res for final too - I still have to catch up with the two previous ones - hopefully tomorrow I might be able to do so.

Bangaram

Take your time .. I read you are cramped up..no worries..no hurries😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#236

@Talia 🤗

Thanks a lot sweety ...will reply in detail tomorrow ..

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#237

Beautiful update dear fully enjoy it pain separation care emotions full Paisa vasol.
In this journey they stay separate or angry more than happy times
I told u earlier also dear you are just awesome how u portrait them just amazing I never feel disconnected from them & emotional & love scenes u just nailed I just imagine vahe as swasan those scenes how they just nailed emotions scenes in the serial that just printed my heart & whenever I read any good swasan stories likes yours I just imagine them infact it come automatically
Waiting for epilogue
Take care buddy
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Love you

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#238

Dear lucky...

Finally caught up withthe remain parts of this story and keg me say you had me hooked yo the very end...at one moment I thought it was all over till lakhs came and held him...just perfect...

One thing I will say..." the fear of losing is far greater then the fear of realising that if one has faith all shall be okay...sometimes we just need to have faith...faith to love and dare to dream"

Love it that both dated to dream and had faith on there love but most importantly they both came together as one...perfect and balanced with no flames to harm knew another...

Just perfectly scripted...loved it loads...

Sorry for late reply...

Razia

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: iamreader
And res again for finale

Dyuti🤗

take your time😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: raaz19
Dear lucky...
Finally caught up withthe remain parts of this story and keg me say you had me hooked yo the very end...at one moment I thought it was all over till lakhs came and held him...just perfect...

One thing I will say..." the fear of losing is far greater then the fear of realising that if one has faith all shall be okay...sometimes we just need to have faith...faith to love and dare to dream"

Love it that both dated to dream and had faith on there love but most importantly they both came together as one...perfect and balanced with no flames to harm knew another...

Just perfectly scripted...loved it loads...

Sorry for late reply...

Razia

Hey Razia🤗

Thanks a lot ..Glad this story had you hooked

@bold ; perfectly said ..its all about trust and faith they both had in each other for each other ,then the end is bound to be a happy one ..

Thanks for mention of script .means a lot 😛

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Lucky