Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30) - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nynu 🤗

Take your time .. I am yet to reply to your comments on previous chapters😊

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Lucky
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Posted: 8 years ago

Take your time dyuti😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@Viji

I just missed u so much ..we all missed you iss liye 😕. hope things got better and pressure had come down..and now you are slolwy coming back .. bas I cant ask for more🤗🤗

Love u
Lucky


Lucky 🤗🤗

Things are a bit better, hope it stays that way. 😕😳 Missed you, Nynu, Saku and the others so very much, too!

Now what can I say about Untamed...spent a fascinating time reading through all the chaps yesterday night. One unintended advantage of my sabbatical was being able to read all the chaps so far at one go. 😃

Captivating ebb and flow to the story, Lucky. Sunny here, like I mentioned in my brief post above, is such a stark, wonderful portrayal. Much like an uncut, unpolished ruby in the rough----not being chiseled to an artificial perfection, perhaps, but who is multi faceted all the same; and whose value and intrinsic, sterling brilliance are all the more captivating because of that. A real force of nature you have portrayed him to be.

I love Swara's sheer force of will in this fic, her steady mind and heart and her determined confidence in the sheer power of her love for Sanskaar, and in his adoration for her. She is truly the Shakti to Sanskaar's Shankar here----if you have seen Baahubali--The Conclusion (which I am sure you must have by now 😃)-- the SwaSan bond here evoked for me, all the feels of the magical Amarendra---Devasena equation there. A cosmic union of equals, elemental, powerful and undeniable.

The tempestuous flow of the story, the eddy and flow of the current and the tidal wave of challenges which the lead pair meet and surmount---gave this fic an epic flavor which I really liked. Sunny's pain and insecurities of being an orphan, his sense of being beholden to the family that had taken him in, his insecurity that Swara might deserve a better life than what he could give her---all portrayed very well indeed. Swara's yearning to assure him that he was all she needed, no material comforts or their absence could matter so long as she had him by her side---sigh. She is trying so very hard to make him see that, but Shomi's cutting words, layered on Sunny's own insecurities have made him too ambitious and driven for success----success which he imagines will make him, finally, 'worthy' of the woman he adores so fiercely. If he only accepted how much she loved him unconditionally in return, without all the trappings of wealth...😭

As was sullen role played by Ragini, driven by her own jealousy and insecurity, which gave way to her intrinsic love for her sister and her very real repentance. It was all so logical, the way her love for Lucky and Lucky's own clear sighted perspective on the SwaSan bond made Ragini see the error of her ways. And Sujoy was a delight, reminded me of my own beloved elder bro. Bade Bhai's are always a very precious part of one's life. 😊

You know how much I love corporate intrigue and reading about Sunny's clinical, brilliant plans here was a pleasure! And Saahil 😆---Ooh, what a joy it was to have a 3 dimensional antagonist whom one could love to hate---not the teak wood almirah we got on the show. 😆 😈

(BTW you do have a flair with your villains----but my beloved one remains Ronnie the Komodo Dragon/ Veronica Viper---you choose the title! 😈)

Anyway, I could go on and on about this tale---but I am breathlessly waiting to see how SwaSan surmount the latest challenge now to face them. Swara isn't going to tell him about the risks to their prospective pregnancy, I'm sure. 😕 Fingers crossed that all goes well----you won't give us too much pain, will you? 😳

Loads of Love, and Have a marvelous weekend!

----Viji


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Posted: 8 years ago
@ Viji🤗🤗
Ok First let me sync in the feeling that you are here .. you read all in go and I got a comment from you ..Oh how much I missed your insightful perspective comments you know they are love and how much it means to me ... Now I am all charged up .Let me go read, re read your comment ..soak in delight ..then come back ..

😳

Love
Lucky

PS; I am so so waiting to read your take on Fanaa .. Literally dying😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Lucky,
It was an update about better late than never realisation, letting go of grudges, acceptance, mending relations. It was about Swara geting back her real Sanskar, with whom she fell into love. For Sanskar it was geting back his most precious jewel he was about to lose for being careless and egoistic. This tamed Sanskar is adorable. But last lines made me apprehensive. I hope Sanskar don't hAve to go through his personal hell and we get a happy ending.

Have I said you never fail to amaze me? How can you manage to make a hospital scene great to read? I wrote one and it was crappie.

Love,
Dyuti
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello lucky dear
How are you my sweet buddy
Update as usual beautiful & etc.
a emotional lovydovy chapter but last u came another twist let see what store for us.
is that will be last chapter oh no I will miss this.
Loved hospital scenes how he believed that nothing happen to his swara & sharmistha realisation listening FIL & daamad convo. u make shekhar here respectable & his wife total opposite though at last everything become good between sanskar & sharmistha.
& swara ka sanskar bhi wapas ageya.
Waiting for next update dear how unfold the twist.
Take care
Bye
love u my pal
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Dyuti and showrav🤗
Thanks guys .. will revert tomorrow😊

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Lucky
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi All🤗
Updated Chapter 12 of untamed.Please do read and let me know your thoughts.Pm's late.We are concluding in next part and an epilogue to follow.

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Lucky
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lucky darling..
Chapter 11 was magical...loads of high points..which just made my heart swell...Swara survived somehow just for sanskaar...as both are two body and one soul...made for each other...I enjoyed the pace of swara's recovery...all the beautiful moment swasan shared...I loved how whole family reconcile...forget and forgiven each other's mistake and making fresh start. ...but twist was something unexpected. ..happy moments justt came after the dark phase and again bad news came..it was shocking. ..but im positive everything will be fine soon...

Read 12 already too...reverting soon..

Love u
Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lucky dear...
Chapter 12 was heartwrenchingly awesome...as expected swara hid the news of complications in her future pregnancy...which if Sanky would foundout he will not take lightly...he would distance himself from swara for her safety..which she can never approve...distance from Sanky in any form is hard for her...I loved his cheer excitement after hearing her pregnancy announcement. .all preparations for their future child/children. ...but truth can not stay hidden and alas he found out...I agree with his reasons in regards with swara's health...but killing their own child is not easy..for both of them...swara decided to leave him...which i agree.with too...she took big risk just for their happiness. ..I'm just praying she succeeds ..or Sanky will be out of control...if anything bad happens...

Loved reading whole chapter...

Thank u for this...

Love
Talia

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