Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30)

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hey Razia🤗

Thanks a lot ..Glad this story had you hooked
@bold ; perfectly said ..its all about trust and faith they both had in each other for each other ,then the end is bound to be a happy one ..

Thanks for mention of script .means a lot 😛

Love
Lucky

Pleasure and thanks for the response it made me smile 😛 as for this any praise given is truly nor enough...just love this tale 😊

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#242

Hey lucky...

Final chapter was outstanding...it was a combination of whirlpool of emotions...loved it...

Well it break my heart seeing swara and especially sanky in so much pain...though both were right in their own ways.but still had to bear separation for quite long ..i loved how laksh lashed at swara after seeing sanky in terrible condition. ..her family handled the situation ...swasan reunion was relief..I cried at that scene...heart touching...climax was again very heavy...when sanky choose the baby..I was like..no ...ok..plz ..don't..choose her..u will get another baby in future..choose swara..and in the end in ended nicely...swara n baby both survived..it as the best part..I imagined sanky condition..n it was the best feeling after hearing laksh...that both are fine...thank u for update..dear really...loved it

Will wait for epilogue. ..

Love

Talia

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Hey lucky...

Final chapter was outstanding...it was a combination of whirlpool of emotions...loved it...
Well it break my heart seeing swara and especially sanky in so much pain...though both were right in their own ways.but still had to bear separation for quite long ..i loved how laksh lashed at swara after seeing sanky in terrible condition. ..her family handled the situation ...swasan reunion was relief..I cried at that scene...heart touching...climax was again very heavy...when sanky choose the baby..I was like..no ...ok..plz ..don't..choose her..u will get another baby in future..choose swara..and in the end in ended nicely...swara n baby both survived..it as the best part..I imagined sanky condition..n it was the best feeling after hearing laksh...that both are fine...thank u for update..dear really...loved it

Will wait for epilogue. ..

Love
Talia

Talia🤗

Thanks a lot sweety ..Glad you loved it a lot 😊.Epilogue just posted .😉

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#244

Hi all🤗

So we come to an end of this tale .. Epilogue posted.Do read and let me know your thoughts

😳

Love

Lucky

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#245

Res for epilogue... BTW it was beautiful...

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#246

And res for the epilogue

Part unres - now that I have read the epilogue and confirmed it is a beautiful and happy ending, I went back to read the previous chapter and though it was emotionally upsetting, I liked how neither turned judgemental or preachy (I did not read them earlier, I read the comments and was too scared - I somehow do not trust you not give them and in turn me - loads of pain😡)

But with the ending and the way both realised they were right and wrong (lovely twist on the serial canon of Swara walking out).

I will get back with a detailed comment on the chapters I missed but had to let you know.

love

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
And res for the epilogue

Part unres - now that I have read the epilogue and confirmed it is a beautiful and happy ending, I went back to read the previous chapter and though it was emotionally upsetting, I liked how neither turned judgemental or preachy (I did not read them earlier, I read the comments and was too scared - I somehow do not trust you not give them and in turn me - loads of pain😡)

But with the ending and the way both realised they were right and wrong (lovely twist on the serial canon of Swara walking out).

I will get back with a detailed comment on the chapters I missed but had to let you know.

love
Nyna

Ok Now I am very much concerned .. 😆 about emotional quotient in my stories . they seem to go beyond normal tolerable levels.I read people saying ..My stories depress them..I was like .. oh Ok ..😲😲

There's no doubt that I connect more with pain agony and heat break may be because I had my share of them ..and I am glad one way people could connect and feel the story but .. I am getting concerned now ..

and coming to untamed nynu ..We had enough of preaching in serial by mahaan aatma's😡 Here I wanted Swasan to be as flawed as possible .. and realise they can be wrong too .I am happy it got noted Take your time banagaram.

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Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: iamreader
Res for epilogue... BTW it was beautiful...

😳Thanks dyuti

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showrav

@showrav24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#249

nothing new to say already let u know my take on it & u also read that on wattpad.
just saying thank you to you for this story I know it's against sanskar rules but sometimes thanks banta hai.
& one more thing ur stories not depressed me or us so bindass tension free continue your works.
Bye
Take care buddy

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#250

Hi lucky

first of in want to say thank you so much for sharing this amazing story loved it and a big 🤗 for the epic ending it was just perfect...

As I read I could truly say swasan have come full circle from friends to lovers to proud parents...truly a unique journey as you have put it so well " sometimes we seek for greatness without realising that we have all we need with us at present...The need to prove can remove the light we hold...fire is like a darkness which not only seeks to burn but destroys as that it seeks in its wake. ...I'd only we realise that all we need is love...love to trust...love to believe... faith..."

Its a 5 letter word but it's perfect for swasan I feel as they have managed to come back to this every time they have faced a challenge and that's only because of the trust they hold in each other...

Must say the other thing I loved is the family bonding bit I especially cherished the bond between lakhs and sanskaar that was a nice treat to read as I feel we all knew he would find love and companionship in award but in lucky I say he found his soul brother a family of his own which he never had. ...

I can truly say that the tamed one has family be tamed for he has not only been rewarded with love bur destiny has also allowed him to have a family a identity of his own. ..

Beautiful journey dear and one I will treasure for years to come definitely marked for a reread in the future ...

Loved it loads. ...

Take care

Razia