Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30)

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Hello lucky dear
Hope you are fine & good. Update as usual beautiful dear & full of swasan moments & don't you dare to separate them again I want they fight whatever come face that with each other.I have a confusion isn't they are already married.pls clear this confusion sojoy already know that right infact he made sanskar understand what he meant to swara & his love for swara. & now they fearing family come to know about their relation & haath mangna what is this look like I ghotala everything need to reread it again.I like shekhar here & no talk about nagini & her haqji. aur nagin ko swasan se dur rakho & evil eyes se bhi.
Waiting what u store for us.Update soon dear Bye Take care buddy.

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Just a promise I will catch up with this when the vacation comes...and that is only two weeks away!

Love,

Saku

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Rumadiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Dear Lucky,

Its nice that you have started other story. Am sorry if you had written alteady. Just now i had read the story. As usual you have penned the story very well. I idea of story from the concept narrated before the starting of story us amazing. Its the first time i have read and came to know how the seasons occured. And the concept you have taken and started narrating in our favourite character swara and sanskar makes the story more intersting.

Coming to story again sanskar is madly and deeply in love swara and vice versa. Sanskar afraid of society and dadi. But swara not caring about anyone and following what her heart telling. Its interesting how they overcome and fight for their love. And sujoy what a supportive brother and a best friend to sanskar. Ragini again a puppet to dadi. But cant blame her as she feels insecured with her own sister. She envoy Swara and sanskar relationship as she din find friend like sanskar. Dadi taking advantage brainwashes ragini and ragini getting influenced is adding spicy to story.

Laksh being cool and fianc of ragini tat too in arrange marriage by family is different. He his also feeling the bond and love Swara a and sanskar share. Its nice in this way. Am curious who is that person listening the conversation between swara and sanskar. Its Ragini or dadi..??? Or someone who hear and suport them. It can be sujoy or someone else. Waiting to know who it is and how the story proceeds and how swara and sanskar fight for their love. Who is going to tame the untame.

Hope you will update this story and others asap.

With love,
Divya.

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

hey folks🤗

Thanks a lot for all nice ad kind words.Thanks for taking out time dropping by and letting me know your views.As mentioned earlier travelling hence delay in revert

Please bear with me.Just to let you guys know your words are treasured😛❤️

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Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Just a promise I will catch up with this when the vacation comes...and that is only two weeks away!
Love,
Saku

Saku🤗

I cant wait for two weeks to fly..bcos I am so so waiting for Yuvraaj and his chamak choriyan in Vajra 😳and I am gonna chase you down for your SS Chasing the Sun.

You better be prepared😉

Love Loads

Lucky