Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Hi All

Updated Chapter 4 😊. Pm's late . Happy reading and do let me know your views

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Lucky,

Unres page 9😊

😛🤗😳

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Nupur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

W-O-W! So SwaSan got married in a sense!
Bt who was the shadow? (I think I know who is this maahan aatma is)

Res:

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nk26106

@nk26106

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Where is chapter 4? I can't see it!!!

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phoenix27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Lovely update lucky so so beautiful portrayal.

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Lucky dearest,

What a fantastic chapter the 4th one was! The life after confession was rosy and colourful for Swasan. Swara was the one who ignited the explosives of Passion in Sanskar. And that's why I love this Swara, who forgets the world... who is ready with all solutions for all the problems they may have... Although she is dreamy, but Sanskar is the grounded one.He knows the arrows he may face for having a princess, so preparing himself to get a shield and fight back.

Ragini... I guess she hated to see Swasan together because she craved to have the same kind of attention Swara had been getting... perhaps from Sanskar himself...

I think that property transfer will upheaval a storm... between SwaSan... and of course inside Gadodia family..

Last but not the least... that Holi scene was so beautiful... almost gave me goosebumps...

I think it's season of confessions for you!

Love,
Dyuti

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Res - will be late to unres

Finally here to unres for Chapter 4 after you have posted Chapter 7 and promise to post the next one soon.😊

I wanted to start much earlier but got caught up in reading the earlier ones😳 (BTW loved that quote you used, I had used it too for my Amaranthine , it suits Sanskaar so well, does it not?)

Well, finally Swara learns when Sanskaar fell for her, she had his heartstrings knotted the very instant he felt his presence, maybe that was why he so yearned to see her. And his pushing her away that only fanned the flames in her heart. Such a blissful confession - I too did not want it to end😳😳😳

And the lovely cat and mouse game in the storeroom (or was it a catch and kiss game??) and the fight with colours (left me feeling fuzzy😳)

Sometimes we hesitate for a little too long, do we not? If only Sanskaar had spoken to Shekar about his feelings for Shona and his intention of becoming independent, the way would have been smoother. That shadow in the end would not have loomed so large.

But then as it is said, the road to hell is paved with good intentions. 😭

Loved their blissful encounters and the gradual build up to the next chapter.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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srividhya87

@srividhya87

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Such a beautiful concept.

Loving our swasan bonds.

Their love for each other is so beautifully said.

Wtng for next part

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Unres at page 12

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Lucky dear...

Brilliant update yar...

All swasan moments were carefully n amazingly penned...i was drooling...in awe of it all...high light was laksh knowing that something is between swasan..both are meant for each other...shekhar giving half property to sanky...n swara taking sanky hand n fills her mang...ohh i just loved this update so much..

But im scared now...i guess ragini also loves sanky...she will do something bad now..nooo

How many part are left???now

Excited for next ...

Love

Talia