Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Hi all🤗

Updated Chapter 5 , Pm's late ..Well I am not sure how many of you read this through my pm ..Most of pm;s remain un read.I know list of fellas who are in my buddy list who follow this story ,meticulously❤️ and thanks to everyone who follow this despite no pm ..

I am gonna pm only those who have been an active part ..Though I would love to Pm, on other hand I hate to clutter inboxes .So do let me know If you need one.

Happy reading and do let me know your thoughts😛

Love

Lucky

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Res lucky...

Unres..

Hey dear...

Im late lucky..or you were quick in updating...hehe

But im nervous after reading chapter 5..it was mind numbing and blowing...

It had loads of sweet swasan moments...but climax made me all mad.and panicky...why the hell he backed off...im annoyed..now i know the reason...i guess sharmistha must have asked sanky to break swara heart...im scared now...what will happen...???how will they unite??

Waiting for more..

Talia

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Res, will unres for both 4 and 5

Okay, done for 4😊

I knew that shadow was Ragini (though it earns me no brownies points for Chapter 7 is out) well, jealous as usual. And Sharmishta must have seen them in a new light after Ragini spilled the beans. She managed to manipulate Swara quite easily too - poor impulsive and so lost in her thoughts that she jumped to conclusions. And when she confronts Sanskaar, who pushes her away, she half believes that he does not love her. ***sigh*** I know it is tough to believe when there is so much overwhelming proof against it but that is where you need faith, and Swara was always a little wonky when it came to faith on Sanskaar. Rather than read his eyes and heed her heart, she chose to see the things only on the surface, causing her and him misery.

And I did guess it was Sharmista, Dadi would have used the opportunity to kick Sanskaar out of the house, but in your replies when you said that the suspense was quite nicely maintained I had my doubts😆

Lovely update, as usual.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Res lucky...

Talia🤗

Take your time😛

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res, will unres for both 4 and 5

Nynu🤗

Take your time , I am yet to un res for FM last two chapters😕

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Nishap499

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

God!! This was crazy!! You can't let their world shattered like this. You know more than Swara my heart was beating so hard that it would come out any moment when Shekhar was discussing the Rishta. I so knew it would not be Sanskar😵!! And I think the lady is Sharmishtha. Well itna dard na diya karo hamare SwaSan ko. They don't deserve it. Looking forward to upcoming updates. Post soon!!

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

And u dn't get anyother name.. Seriously that hippo?!

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Lucky (No dear this time 😡 ),

ARRRGHHH!!! 😡 I'm seriously angry with you... This is why I took time to unres. This Sekhar is just like pregnant ladies, having mood swings. He can decide to give Sanskar 50% property, but can't approve his relationship with Swara. Or is there some other play taking place behind the curtains?

Sanskar is truly stupid. He is concerned about the words he had given to Sekhar... What about his love who is ready to push any mountain that blocks their journey? How could he ignore the commitment they shared through the colours of holi? I'm loving Swara's fierce drive to be with her Sanskar no matter what may come... But she's a bit immature... Doesn't fully understand the need of Sanskar to be self dependent... I hope she do someday.

We know Swasan would get married... but still I feel like killing Sahil for being a dirt in the eye... And Ragini!!! Fed up with her!

Waiting for your next update.

Love,
Dyuti

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago