Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30) - Page 8

Originally posted by: jess_27

Wonderful story.. i was waiting for your update.. loved it to the care..

Like i said, i have become fan of your writing..

Looking forward to reading more..

Love,

Jessica..

Originally posted by: iamreader

Dearest Lucky,

I read this in afternoon but was so caught up in working on my own. Also my thoughts were incoherent that time! Chapter 3 clouded my intellect to that extent! Untamed emotions, untamed self restraints, untamed desires... How I loved Sujoy, for knocking some sense in that thick skulled lover! He tried so hard to stay away yet ached for her one glimpse, one touch, one word! And Swara! She could sense Sanskar's every untold emotions, every heartbeat, every uneasiness. She moved out to gazebo from the restaurant to remove his unease... and that sweet gesture was rewarded. ... in form of bliss... of being aware how much love and smoldering passion was stored in his heart for her!

See? I'm still rambling!!! I'm afraid! God knows what type of crap I've typed today! I think I should stop writing detailed comments for you people's story! At the end of the day I only embarrass myself!

Love you a lot! And update soon!

Dyuti

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome 😊

Originally posted by: showrav24

Hello lucky dear
thanks a lot for the update u know how impatiently waiting for know what happen head & what an update u bring to u make me emotional & fall in love swasan again.
you know I like infact loved every bit of it.
sujoy such a sweetheart loved his conversation with sanskar & At last put some brain in sanskar head.
& after that the much awaited part the swasan moments u know whenever I read some beautiful writing on swasan I visualise them infront of my eyes like I watching vahe as a swasan on my screen & this part one of this I connect myself every emotions of swasan their fight with their innerself & last their heart to heart talking sharing everything with each other.
& at last their confession & romance let their emotions flow with kisses & need for each other.
Now I waiting for their hot romance like sanskar said so don't u dare to cut it like cvs who always cessor swasan scenes like they don't show what sanskar video records for swara & many more so u not trying to do this.
hehehe I want swasan romance.
Bye
Take care dear
loved u buddy

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Wow awesome update

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Lucky..dear

Chapter 3 was brilliant...

Sanky's denial n swara constant showing n giving hints to him..it was cute...

Sujoy n sanky part was great...i loved jeeja n saala bond..sanky caught his matchmaking scheme...sujoy knocked some sense in him...but somewhere i did not like when sujoy left..i felt something bad will happen now in his absence...fingers crossed...

raglak date n swasan stolen moments were amazing..confrontation lead to a soul stirring passionate confession..i soo enjoyed n loved it...waiting for next..

Love u

Talia

Originally posted by: ria2794

Hi Lucky,

I read this chapter in Wattpad and then came here. It's so beautiful their raw emotions her heartache to have him for her, his love and longing for her. I sometimes think if this kind of love exists in real world, so soft yet fierce, delicate yet powerful clear yet confounding, total contrast. Then I think this is what love is, the supreme emotion which can make anyone do anything.

Coming to the story it's finally relieving to see Sanskar giving chance to them. It would be interesting to see why Swara tricked him to marry as you mentioned in chapter 2 when he was giving them a chance.

Thanks for writing dear loved it. please update next chapter soon.

PS: Please update Fanaa as well.

Love,

Ria

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And finally I am here, work is slowly let up and so I decided to catch up.

Warning: complete incoherent rambling, read at your risk and please do not let it affect your ability to update.

What I loved about this story is the way you have twisted both the protagonists in the shades of grey. Both are Hades and Persephone here.

😳I Loved your incoherent rambling to bits😳🤗bangaram. Twists ..I told its tale with twist😉

In the beginning, or rather the first part, it appears to be a straight forward adaptation of the tale, Sanskaar as Hades, consigned to the darkness by his birth and circumstances, convinced that he would never be able to gain the light he loves and craves. And just like Hades, is actually not dark (the worst were his two brothers - Zues, who was famous for his erotic escapades - is there any maiden - mortal, immortal or goddess whom he did not seduce and is there any form he did not take to do so? Psoiden was no better, as ruler of seas and earthquakes he created terror all around. Hades is actually quite tame compared to them - all he did was to guard the souls who entered his realm. It was so dark, how can anyone blame him for wanting a ray of sunshine?)

Zeus and his Khaand..less we talk about him,the better😡 .. I sometimes feel Hades was wronged by his own loved ones ..and true to that one cant blame him for wanting a ray of light in his dark world .

But the Hades here, does not want to taint his Persephone with his darkness, he believes that he can claim the light only if she partakes of the darkness. But Swara is no Persephone, right? Her brother is Zeus here, gives his silent blessing and she goes about seducing her Hades (moi is presuming that😉) And her parents, similar to Demeter, as she has already partaken of the food of the underworld, agree for the wedding.

I just wanted to play around with characters..While I started off tale I was sure Swara is gonna be Hades😆😉..Just a thought of what if Swara abducts Sanskaar🤣 role reversal and Sujoy .open blessings unlike Zeus in tale😆 and Demeter will come into play as well ..

But how and why Swara had to play her cards to trick .. you will know in next parts ..Chala simple story line banagaram .. asalu complicated kaadu😉 ..

And Sanskaar displays the light within him - for in this world of contradiction, the darkest skies show the brightest stars and Sanskaar lets loose his righteous rage (I am copy writing this phrase - have used it in FM too😆😆)

😳 Line of FM for Untamed ..😛 @ bold .. how true

So Swara is now Hades, waiting for her Persephone to come back - for like him she also believes, that he must have loved her to have surrendered himself, as Hades believes that Persephone ate the pomegranate willingly enough. There is a lovely poem by Lee Ann Schaffer: From Hades to Persephone -

Tell me your were not hungry that day,

Tell me that's not what got you to stay.

Seven seeds don't seem like quite enough

Reason to leave a mother's deep love.

I want to believe you had the choice,

I was hearing more than my own voice,

That you opened the palms of your hands,

To offer your heart, not meet my demands.

Convince me that you want to be here,

It's not my trick that keeps you so near.

You chose me. You love me. This is real.

No silly seven seeds sealed the deal.

Miss your mother when the door must shut,

Love and hurt when you must leave, but

Come back wearing our hearts on your sleeve,

Yearn to stay here and I will believe.

No need to say, I know why you go,

I won't block your way, make a big show.

Just tell me you weren't hungry that day,

Just tell me I'm the reason you stay.

Again Your treasure of quotes and poems ..👏⭐️👏 I adore and love them to bits and this one ... wow ..How lovely ...brings out Hades ardent wish , his longing how he wants to believe that Persephone choose him out of will..beautiful .. no thanks but thanks for introducing me such gems😛🤗

Somehow, I feel this is what Swara would tell Sanskaar when he leaves her (another of my presumtions😉) and like Hades will wait for him - He will be back, like Persephone, and like I want to believe, he will be come back not because he has to, but because he wants to.

Its a mix and match and like you mentioned in first lines .. Swara and Sanskaar will switch between shades of Hades and Persephone.

Okay, I have ranted enough.

And I loved it to bits🤗

lots of love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: lucky.m

[BR][DIV]H<font size="2">ey Showrav ..Thanks for the such a lovely comment .Making you fall in love with Swasan again..aww .. Thank you .. Happy to hear that</font>[/DIV][BR][DIV]<font size="2">Give me HI5..Whenever I write Swasan scenes I imagine and visualise them[:)]</font>[/DIV][BR][DIV]<font size="2">Swasan Romance will come in later parts..once Sanskaar leaves his anger towards swara and they will be together[;)]you have to wait a bit[LOL]</font>[/DIV][BR][DIV]<font size="2">Love</font>[/DIV][DIV]<font size="2">Lucky</font>[/DIV]