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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: raaz19

Dear Sharon..

Awesome update...loved the meeting and evil Karen I just hate her..

Lakhs was cute and I like the mystery that sanskaar carriers..
Seems he was just in her resume...

The plot seems to thicken yet it draws me to wonder what lays a head for our young shona...

The handshake was a sweet yet cute swasan moment...look foward to the next part...

Must say sharon love the element of mystery in your writing...

Update soon...

Take care


Raz


Hi Raz,

Lot of adventures await Swara in the future. For now, she needs to know where she stands in this scheme.

Glad that you are liking the mystery. I hope you will continue to enjoy reading this one.

Cheers
Sharon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay, I res for chapter 4 and will continue with my detailed comment and long overdue one for Chapter 3 in the next post.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sparkler8


Hi Nyna, glad you find it interesting. More SwaSan moments coming up. 😉


Dear Sharon,

Back for the long overdue comment. I am a bit ashamed to admit that I got carried away with updating my own FF😳.

First, I like the wry sense of humour that underlies this tale - Karen lacking the elementary grammatical skills (that is so true - sometimes it makes cringe - I have had both types of bosses - those who fit into Karen category and one boss who would focus more on grammar than numbers, which at times would make it quite frustrating considering that for an audit firm, numbers should be important😆)And that conversation between Swara and Karen - was the perfect balance between sarcasm and frustration. The best part, Swara ends up expressing her interest, in a job that will change her life and outlook.

Her train of thoughts - "I had a pepper spray and Ragini on speed dial" Somehow I am liking this Ragini whom we see more from Swara's perspective. For that matter Uttara too - when Swara states that if she had Uttara's self control or rather the lack of it, she would have tripped over nothing to fall into Sanskaar's arms

Coffee is irresistible - the best way to resist that tempting coffee - drink it. And when Sanskaar says, "Do you realise how rare ordinary is?" , all I felt was a spine tingling anticipation of what is to come.

And voila, we get Chapter 4 - today?

Best,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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i just caught up with ff. very interesting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Dear Sharon,

Back for the long overdue comment. I am a bit ashamed to admit that I got carried away with updating my own FF😳.
No probs dear.. we are all selfish.

First, I like the wry sense of humour that underlies this tale - Karen lacking the elementary grammatical skills (that is so true - sometimes it makes cringe - I have had both types of bosses - those who fit into Karen category and one boss who would focus more on grammar than numbers, which at times would make it quite frustrating considering that for an audit firm, numbers should be important😆)And that conversation between Swara and Karen - was the perfect balance between sarcasm and frustration. The best part, Swara ends up expressing her interest, in a job that will change her life and outlook.
I wasnt sure how it would turn out. But this is also her first step to break the chains and find her destined job.

Her train of thoughts - "I had a pepper spray and Ragini on speed dial" Somehow I am liking this Ragini whom we see more from Swara's perspective. For that matter Uttara too - when Swara states that if she had Uttara's self control or rather the lack of it, she would have tripped over nothing to fall into Sanskaar's arms
Haha.. That was something where I had to digress from the book. In the book, she considers herself weak and powerless. She has the brains but it takes MSI to show her she has got the brains. However our Swara is a fighter. So that scene wouldnt suit her.

Coffee is irresistible - the best way to resist that tempting coffee - drink it.
I am a coffee addict so I might have got carried away over there. 😉

And when Sanskaar says, "Do you realise how rare ordinary is?" , all I felt was a spine tingling anticipation of what is to come.
Its symbolic to what lies ahead for "them".😳

And voila, we get Chapter 4 - today?
I will try.. But not confirmed.. Wanted a fresh page, so just reserved.

Best,
Nyna


Hi Nyna,

I have just left a note on your FF. I will get back to it once I am done with this.

I have the story woven in my mind now, so all I am left with is putting it to paper, or typing it on screen😛 I am targeting for 2 updates by this weekend.. Lets see how the progress goes.

Cheers
Sharon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: suwas

i just caught up with ff. very interesting


Thank you dear 😊 Glad that you find it interesting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice update.. 👍🏼


Thank you Sneha 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for ch-3 Sharon. 😳


Aheli dear, please complete your exams 😳 Hope SwaSan dont hinder your preparations.😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Sharon..

Read prologue and chapter 1.. It was really interesting.. Would love to catch up with the rest soon.. But just want to let you know chapter one was awesome and it has made me really curious about this FF.. Will try to catch up with the rest soon it always an treat to got nice FF to read once you got time.. So I am looking forward to it..


Love

Nita

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