FF: Whimsical Corporation [Completed] {New cover by Nyna}

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thank you dear 😊

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Teddy94

@Teddy94

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Awesome update dear..😊

I hope Swara joins msi soon... Waiting for Swasan interaction..

I think Sanskar is gng to convince her...

Waiting for the nxt update.. Diff concept... Loved it

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Hey sharon...great update...

So we have witness two...no three official entries..ragini n lakshya...uttara...liked your background detailing of uttara..how the trio met...liked their bonding..ragini seemed mature..n is lawyer...guess she will help swara in future...uttara had her bubbly self...was cute.a fashion desiner..she will be needed too..soo lucky introduced himself..swara though is scared by this stalking..stays calm n compose in front of him...now literally excited about sanky entry...excited..wondering how they will convince her????

Waiting for next...

Talia

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Dear sharon finally managed to catch with all the updates and let me say wow the story is both intriguing and thrilling seems like it's going to be one intense journey...

I am loving the build up of the bond of the girls and the career driven lives they lead...loved the whole concept of swara bring stuck in a job she hates and more then that the fustration she feels that she has no way out...

Mmm why do I get the impression that the job opportunity is not just her golden ticket but also her encounter with our one and only sanskaar...

Loved laskhs angle in this story...He seems both interesting and different...why do I feel that this job offer is yet to create more drama...

Look forward to reading more...and as always loving the creativity you bring to all your stories...

Thanks for the pm and sorry for the late response...

Take care...

Raz

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Res Sharon for ch-2. 😳
Unresed dearest. 😃
Okk..so got introduced to Swara's room mates. 😃 Uttara, a fashion designer by profession and a bubbly and sweet girl and Ragini, a lawyer by profession and a very mature girl and interesting character. 😉 I loved the trio's bonding. 😃 Whoa! Laksh stalking Swara for offering her the job! 😲 Haahaa! Uttara and Ragini's reaction by seeing Laksh was interesting. 😉 So did Ragini already fell for Laksh's charm?? 😳 And Swara, though being scared inside for being stalked, she put up a calm and compose expression in front of Laksh. 😊 But why is he so desperate to hire Swara for his company?? 😕 But here, Laksh's charater is interesting too. 😛 Waiting for Sanskar's entry and SwaSan face off. 😉 I think Sanskar is going to to play the part of convincing Swara for the job. 😉 Also waiting for the revelation of 'Miss Fairy'. 😳 Update soon. 😳 I'm loving this story very much with a different concept. 😃 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice update.. 👍🏼

Thank you dear😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Teddy94
Awesome update dear..😊
I hope Swara joins msi soon... Waiting for Swasan interaction..
I think Sanskar is gng to convince her...
Waiting for the nxt update.. Diff concept... Loved it

Thank you dear.. yes she will.. Sanskaar would be part of the convincing.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Loved it

Thank you dear😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Dear Sharon,

I will be back for a detailed take but could not resist this short note.

The story is now building up - finally evil Karen manages to reduce Swara to tears (it is not a loss of identity or a change in nature, at times the constant battle takes its toll, too) and it a bout of frustration, she decides to accept the offer. Good for her.

Mr. Handsome Sanskaar - if his handshake could be that warm and endearing obviously his hugs are going to be heated and tingling

Best,

Nyna