SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17)

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Res... You made Sunday much brighter with this update,, I love love love loved the update .. Will unres ASAP..

Unres 🥳

Hi Lucky 🤗

See how soon i unres 😭..Sorry about that dear ..And Chapter 2 was an glimpse into Swara Bose and me loved it ..I only want Swara Bose lucky..I hate Swara Gadodia ..😆..I am sure Sanskar would feel the same 😆..

So Swara cant find her perfect guy, well she just met him right 😉.. Since i read the next chapter i knew how perfect he is for her ... And i liked her speaking her heart out and following her dreams.. It was such a amazing chapter that made me love Swara.. Anjali and Akaash seems like an nice characters. Somehow i liked this two friends of hers

Though i didnt get much of Sanskar 😭.. I still got lots of Swara and i loved it ,her whole story about her parents ,her passion ,her sister and everything was interesting to read ..I really loved it Lucky dear..

And i would need few more days for me to unres on chapter 3,sorry about that but just so you know i really loved it a lot

Love

Nita

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res 😊
Yehi hai fitoor mera 😉😃

Viji🤗🤗

Will wait for your unres😛

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Lucky🤗 🤗🤗

And how do you expect me to go to sleep in peace - My heart goes Mmm Mmm❤️ - Such a lovely dreamy update - Nijam ga - it was so heart warming.

Will get back with a detailed take. Any chance of Fanaa update ????- (well greedy me😉)

And now all I need is Fida - seriously - at least an OS - lovely trilogy: Fanaa (SS), Fitoor (4S) and Fida (OS).

love,
Nyna

Nynu🤗🤗

thanks bangaram😳.❤️ . Fanaa ...work in progress but I guess by end of week or earlier

Trilogy - All I can think of is Nora Roberts😆but from your words it sounds exciting .My own Trilogy.Now since the title is already finalized - FIDA - let me see If something pops in my mind.. will give it a shot😛🤗

I am relieved reading your comment😳 I was not sure of readers reaction since there's so less of swasan in this update 😛

Will wait for your detailed take.Yet to unres for Amarathine ..😕.

Love

Lucky

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res for ch-2 Lucky. 😳

Aheli🤗🤗

Will wait for your unres sweety😛

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: blindassassin
Lucky
Today I had posted a look out notice for few of my friends including you and here you re with the next chapter.I am happy to see at least one back from the exile.And what an entry. Your Fitoor has got me addicted to it. I loved how swara explained to anjali s fiancee about forcefully changing a person and wanting to change out of love. That was pure wisdom. Waiting with fingers crossed for the sparks to fly.
The romance in Fanaa is so gentle like a breeze, whereas here we are sure to get a whirlwind affair.
Only request is please don't limit this to 4S.
Hope the next updates will be regular, still waiting for Fanaa next chapter.
Love, Veena.

Hey Veena🤗🤗

Guess you pulled me back from exile and yes I caught up on look out notice 😉.I cant tell you how good it feels being a small part of wanted writers in forum 😳☺️ Thanks a lot

I am glad I could get you addicted and yes , you are right on part of Fitoor being totally different from Fanaa on lines of romance . Sparks will definitely fly ,soar high once swasan meet😳😉

This was supposed to be a 4S ..May be a 5S max as per plot . I hope it keeps you hooked further😛

@ Bold ; Thanks once again .Glad you could connect with that line of thought

I will try to be regular yaar but in midst of commitments ,finding it a bit tough . Will try to get better on update part and not to go missing😆

Love

Lucky

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Res lucky

Talia

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Res... You made Sunday much brighter with this update,, I love love love loved the update .. Will unres ASAP..

Love

Nita

Nita🤗

Thanks dearie😳😳

You guys made my day much much brighter😳 and you are giving us restless nights with your killer in thriller..not fair yaar . When do we get to know ?😲

Will wait for your unres

Love

Lucky

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nita🤗

Thanks dearie😳😳

You guys made my day much much brighter😳 and you are giving us restless nights with your killer in thriller..not fair yaar . When do we get to know ?😲

Will wait for your unres

Love
Lucky

Update might happen today or tomorrow.. Still I am not going to stop giving you restless nights 😉

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Aheli🤗🤗

Will wait for your unres sweety😛

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Lucky

Unresed @ pg 11 sweetheart. 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res for ch-2 Lucky. 😳
Unresed dearest. 😃
Awesome update. 👏
Thanks sweet heart😛🤗

Swara, Anjali and Akash part was really nice. Swara-Anjali's friendship is good. 😊 And Swara-Akash convo was awesome. 😉 Poor Akash! He couldn't believe that Swara didn't like almost 10 guys as her match! 😆
I really enjoyed their convo. They became good friends even. 😛 And they way Swara and Anjali were leg pulling Akash was quite funny! 😆 Really he became a bechara infront of the 2 girls. 😛

I wanted swara's pov to be brought out in a different setting which would be fun to read and will give important inputs about swara's character ,hence aakash and anajli ..they will play role in future as well ,a minor one ..you will know how in coming updates. Akash ..😆 Poor guy ..Caught up between two ladies 😆. Yeah He couldn't swara refused 10 guys .

Then so many revelation about Swaragini, Shekhar-Shomi, Dida-Dadi, Mr. Anirban Bose, Janki...This part was was nicely penned by u. It kept me intrigued throught the chapter. 😉 And finally Swaragini reunited Shekhar-Shomi and Dadi and Ragini accepted Swara-Shomi and Swara accepted Shekhar wholeheartedly. 😃 Then Swara-RagLak part was nice. Swara teasing RagLak and RagLak teasing Swara. 😆

Phew I am relived when I read that part kept you intrigued ..I was not very sure about reception with very less swasan in this update but I guess It held your interest. Thanks a lot Ragini and Laksh are going to be sweet nice ones in this story 😳

And Sanskar part was also nice. How he was admiring Swara and her song by watching her video. Awesome!! 😉 Update soon dear. 😳 Eagerly waiting to know more about SwaSan. 😉 And thanks for the pm. 😃

How Can I miss Sanskaar .😳He is already attracted towards swara ..Very soon they will be meeting😛

With love,
Aheli.