SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17)

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nooo ..Bcos you res and run away😆..I am working on it 😉

Ohh! Sorry!!😭 Achha I'll unres, ruko abhi!😆

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Chapter 3 posted😊 Pm's late

Edited by lucky.m - 8 years ago

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Res lucky dear...

Yapiee im first...

Unres...

Lucky sweetie...

Now i know what does burst out with happiness mean...☺️ im soo overwhelmed beyond measure after reading this...😳 it was captivating update...👏

Nowa days mostly every swasan ff n SS are going through temporary seperation phase...but fitoor just covered it all with this part..swasan n swasan at every scene..i was just blushing...grinning ..smiling...colgate smile...etc..i literally enjoyed it alot...👏

Each n every swasan moments took my heart away...whether it was their first meet...first cheek peck...first dance...first hug when sanky got emotional remembering his mum...their first lunch sharing moments n their first kiss...ahhh it was carefully n amazingly penned down..i was enchanted seriously...😳just simply loved it.

Waiting for after kiss part like crazy...super excited..😃

swasan becoming my fitoor...🤪

Love

Talia

Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 8 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Res 😊

Quick un res below...😉

Lucky darling...what was that...steamy, intense, passionate, electrifying update. 😳☺️ Giving such a flutter first thing in the morning...how am I supposed to focus on the mountain of work now? 😆😆

Sunny boy in black vest...muscles rippling. 😉😆 Lucky...you certainly are living the images close to your heart, through this 4S. Chalta phirtha hotness ka dukaan huh? 😆😉 He he...Lucky now I know exactly what your real life Sunny should do, to sweep you off your feet. 😉😆😊

The way Sanskaar kept his Maheshwari identity secret, donning the "Sunny" avatar till such time he got to know Swara better...nice touch. He was so used to girls 'with dollar signs in their eyes' throwing themselves at him . 😆😉 Very wittily put.

So the charmer intends to charm Swara...but gets thoroughly charmed in his turn. 😳☺️ Loved the way you described his fascination with her guileless, genuine smile. Swara's smile can truly light up the world, no? 😊 That gesture of Swara cooking for Sanskaar...despite not normally liking to even enter the kitchen: that was so cute. 😉 Love is in the air...😳☺️ and Ragini realised it immediately. 😉

That glimpse into Sunny's vulnerable side...how he still misses his mom...and the way Swara comforted him. That was such a special moment. Very poignant and emotional, without being melodramatic. A subtle and deft touch there.

The atmosphere between them is crackling with chemistry, physics, biology. 😳☺️ It's going to result in some thermodynamic, thermonuclear reactions. 😉 And in the end...Sunny says "Say Yes..." 😉 and of course, how could Swara ever say anything else. Soulmates after all.

So now...jab miya biwi razi...dher kyon karega qazi...😊😉 But alas things aren't so simple...Sunny still has to get his thoughts cleared up, on his "fear of love". Has been scarred so badly by losing his mom, seeing his Dad become a shell of his former self owing to that tragedy, he feels a deep seated reluctance to "acknowledge " the feeling of Love. He is, I guess, very comfortable with terming his emotions as "want" or "chemistry" or "attraction" or "like". Perhaps even as "affection".

Dumbo doesn't realize that a love as potent and intense as this would infuse both Swara and him with strength and peace of mind. Never mind...Swara (aka your plot flow and dialogues 😉) will soon make him aware. 😳

And it was lovely to read about Sunny's close bond with his Adarsh bhaiyya and Pari Bhabhi. The way Adarsh grumbles that his younger bro is the laadla devar of his wife...😆😆 Was grinning to myself, imagining this nice version of Pari, ganging up with her devar to tease her pati (nice version of Adarsh). Such a warm, familial picture that was. Probably Adarsh--Pari will play some role in nudging Sunny towards accepting the truth of what he really feels for Swara? And his realization that he need not be wary of that bond? 😊

All in all, I am fairly sure qazi thodi dher karega, zyada nahi 😉☺️

Love ya loads for this Thursday morning gift, sweetheart 🤗

Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Res for 3

Quick unres

Thoroughly understand Swara finding him a hotness ki dukan. I am a puddle myself. Damn - you are supposed to give a warning - I am reading it in office, and luckily no one is watching me.

Sunny boy - true to his name - how long did Swara think she could last without melting. And how did he think she would not charm him?

Loved it both the hot passion between them and the loving bond Sanskaar shares with Adarsh Bhaiya and Pari Bhabhi.

Will get back with a detailed unres soon (no promises as to timeframe, though - too hectic still)

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

@ Viji & Nynu

..I am all☺️😳 ..

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

@ Viji 🤗🤗

Darlin .. Now I want to hide somewhere 😆..😳 my fantasies on Sunny boy with Swara they are boundless .. . What a fab start to day with your comment .😛

You made swasan miya biwi and me qazi 😆..Btw I added a dance number on fitoor song 😳 Ye fitoor mera..

Will revert by EOD ..😊

Love

Lucky

PS; I made him salman atleast partly 😆😉

Edited by lucky.m - 8 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res for 3
Quick unres

Thoroughly understand Swara finding him a hotness ki dukan. I am a puddle myself. Damn - you are supposed to give a warning - I am reading it in office, and luckily no one is watching me.

Sunny boy - true to his name - how long did Swara think she could last without melting. And how did he think she would not charm him?

Loved it both the hot passion between them and the loving bond Sanskaar shares with Adarsh Bhaiya and Pari Bhabhi.

Will get back with a detailed unres soon (no promises as to timeframe, though - too hectic still)

love,
Nyna

@ Nynu Bangaram

Where do you manage get those emos .. they are uber cute.

Hotness ki dhukaan ..😳 Sunny Boy..You can totally imagine my haalat when penning this down ☺️.I couldn't get him shirtless in Fanna ..so ripped his shirt off in Fitoor🤣.. My gutter mind nynu seems active these days😆..Well Fitoor was never with good intentions😉

Take you time ..Will wait just to let you know loved your short quick un res as well😳

Love

Lucky

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@ Viji 🤗🤗
Darlin .. Now I want to hide somewhere 😆..😳 my fantasies on Sunny boy with Swara they are boundless .. . What a fab start to day with your comment .😛

You made swasan miya biwi and me qazi 😆..Btw I added a dance number on fitoor song 😳 Ye fitoor mera..

Will revert by EOD ..😊

Love
Lucky

PS; I made him salman atleast partly 😆😉

Lucky 🤗🤗

Dance number...😳 ☺️ I know, I was crooning that to myself. 😆

Why rip the shirt off and leave vest, Lucky? 😉 Give Swara a proper treat na... the sight of Sunny, full on Salman style. 😉 We know that his arms are better than Sallu's. 😆 (The evidence from Fanaa is applicable to Fitoor too!) 😉 ☺️

Also Lucky----isn't the standard for dhole shole these days in Bollywood, set by Siddharth Malhotra / Varun Dhawan/ Hrithik Roshan? 😉 Sunny may beat them too, na? 😳

Okies...I better stop blushing and grinning like an idiot and get back to work. 😆

Love,

----Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@ Nynu Bangaram

Where do you manage get those emos .. they are uber cute.

Hotness ki dhukaan ..😳 Sunny Boy..You can totally imagine my haalat when penning this down ☺️.I couldn't get him shirtless in Fanna ..so ripped his shirt off in Fitoor🤣.. My gutter mind nynu seems active these days😆..Well Fitoor was never with good intentions😉

Take you time ..Will wait just to let you know loved your short quick un res as well😳

Love
Lucky

Those emos, they are nice, right? No secret, simply google for them (you need a little patience though😃)

One more request from greedy me - i think there is a vest wala scene in the serial, please, please please make a banner for this chapter - I am then going to open the post in two tabs - and alternate between the pic and the post: drooling over Sunny boy