SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Res lucky
Unres dearie...😊

So lucky..chapter 2 was superb...i missed swasan alot in it..😉

Talia 🤗🤗.Thanks a lot dearie I know ..Less of swasan but in coming chapters it will all be swasan😳This chapter was important to establish the characters😛

Swara..anjali n akash n their convo was nicely planned..it revealled much about swara..her personality n thinking...her family background n struggle to unite her scattered family was cleverly penned down..n reason for her inclination n love for music n flowerz was quite reasonable .swara teasing raglak was so cute...loved your writing alot...👏

Thanks again ..😛 Mission accomplished then ..I wanted readers to connect on why swara chose to go for gardening ..and I am super glad U found it reasonable enough😛

Well swara rejected many boys..but just one eyes she could not forget...n even sanky got mesmerised seeing her..or listening her..that recording part was awesome...waiting to know how his love at fight sight becomes his fitoor...excited😃😳

Well swasan cant resist ecah other ..Can they?😆😳 ..How they become fitoor of each other ..You will see in coming parts😛

Love🤗
Talia

Talia 🤗

Thanks for such a lovely comment ..Replied in colour above

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Unresed @ pg 11 sweetheart. 😃

Replied with love on pg 13 🤗

Love you

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Lucky..
Unres @ 11..muahhh

Talia

Replied with love on pg 13

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Replied with love on pg 13🤗

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Lucky

Love u too Lucky dearest. 🤗 ❤️

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res 😊
Yehi hai fitoor mera 😉😃

Lucky 🤗🤗🤗

I just love the way you have sketched Swara and Sunny's characters here. Swara sounds so very sorted, a balanced girl with a very sensible head on her shoulders. The way she described her stand on relationships, marriage and her ideals for the perfect man in her life---it was such a wonderful perspective. Filled with self respect, a sense of her own identity, and yet indicating her absolute commitment to give her all and more, to the bond once she enters it. Such is the stuff of which beautiful marriages are made after all---a mutual trust and regard between the partners. Kudos for this wonderful, mature perspective of Swara's character here. 👏👏👏

And Sunny...now what do I say. 😉 We've already had that PM exchange where I mentioned how that interesting quote from The Ballad of the Sad Cafe, made me think of how you have vividly portrayed Sunny here. A man who feels so intensely, who will do anything and everything for Swara; but will still feel wary of acknowledging he is "in love". Maybe he treats it as a vulnerability, perhaps the way his father failed to cope with the loss of his mother made him think that love is something which enfeebles a person, rather than strengthening and liberating them, filling them with a new confidence. But sherni Swara will soon set him to rights huh? 😉

You know I have a special soft corner for your Sunny from Fanaa...He still remains my utmost favorite. 😉 But this one is very tantalizing as well! (Here we go again, discussing the different shades of Sunny in fics. 😆)

This love story in Fitoor is going to be tempestuous, filled with electrons and protons whizzing around, sparkling electrical flashes everywhere! 😳😆 I have buckled myself in for the ride, bring it on, Lucky, bring it on...🤗🤗

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

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Darlin You definitely know how to lift up a sour mood..😳 I love u for this ..Will reply soon and we are never gonna get tired of sunny 😳☺️

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darcyholic

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Hi
Thank you so much for the pm 😊 .
The story is fascinating.The intensity of the kiss was 😳 .The iconic song chura liya hai tumne Jo dil ko was a superb addition.the song is made for romance .thank you for using it on swasan. 😊
The second chapter sets atmosphere for the introduction of the prince.swara's view are very modern and unlike the serial one.but I liked your swara more.
You are a wonderful writer. 😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: darcyholic
Hi
Thank you so much for the pm 😊 .
The story is fascinating.The intensity of the kiss was 😳 .The iconic song chura liya hai tumne Jo dil ko was a superb addition.the song is made for romance .thank you for using it on swasan. 😊
The second chapter sets atmosphere for the introduction of the prince.swara's view are very modern and unlike the serial one.but I liked your swara more.
You are a wonderful writer. 😊

Hi Minerva,😛I guess I am right there

Thanks a lot for dropping by .It always good to find new readers around and know their views . I am happy that this tale could fascinate you 😳.

Churaliya hain is one of my Fav songs and I though it would be apt for the scenario .Blame my imagination of swara singing that song and sunny watching her😆 and the kiss..many more to come😳😉

I wanted a slightly different swara ..yet she is similar to the one in show many ways .Glad to know you found her more interesting 😛 Yes the stage is set ,Prince will be making an entry soon😛

Thanks again for such a lovely comment , wish to see you more around here

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Lucky