SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: aditi07
Superb 4S... so passionate & intense!!
Its been so many days since u hv updated it... pls update it soon!
gosh they are burning the chapters 😳.. cant wait to read further 🤪

Hi Aditi

Thanks again for dropping by 😛 ..😳 I know it had been many days I have updated but juggling between few commitments I am trying to find some time to pen it down ..will try to update soon

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hey Lucky Darling,🤗🤗
When will u update ch-2??😳 I'm eagerly waiting for it.😉
With love,
Aheli.

Sweet heart ..Need some more time ..will try for weekend though can't commit on same .caught midst few commitments but your excitement and eagerness for the update keeps me going

Love

Lucky

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Sweet heart ..Need some more time ..will try for weekend though can't commit on same .caught midst few commitments but your excitement and eagerness for the update keeps me going

Love
Lucky

Oukk darling.😃 Take as much time u want.😃 Will wait patiently, coz its worth waiting.😉 Yes, I always eagerly wait for ur updates.😉 Actually I always eagerly wait for the stories on my fav couples.😛 And SwaSan is the one among them.😳 Will eagerly wait dearest.🤗

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#74

Hey all

Chapter 2 updated ..Will look forward to your views😛.Thanks for keeping up with delay.Pm's will be late😊

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res

Nynu 🤗

See your idea worked😛 ..I took it seriously😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#76

Res 😊

Yehi hai fitoor mera 😉😃

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nynu 🤗

See your idea worked😛 ..I took it seriously😉

Lucky🤗 🤗🤗

And how do you expect me to go to sleep in peace - My heart goes Mmm Mmm❤️ - Such a lovely dreamy update - Nijam ga - it was so heart warming.

Will get back with a detailed take. Any chance of Fanaa update ????- (well greedy me😉)

And now all I need is Fida - seriously - at least an OS - lovely trilogy: Fanaa (SS), Fitoor (4S) and Fida (OS).

love,

Nyna

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#78

Res for ch-2 Lucky. 😳
Unresed dearest. 😃
Awesome update. 👏 Swara, Anjali and Akash part was really nice. Swara-Anjali's friendship is good. 😊 And Swara-Akash convo was awesome. 😉 Poor Akash! He couldn't believe that Swara didn't like almost 10 guys as her match! 😆 I really enjoyed their convo. They became good friends even. 😛 And they way Swara and Anjali were leg pulling Akash was quite funny! 😆 Really he became a bechara infront of the 2 girls. 😛 Then so many revelation about Swaragini, Shekhar-Shomi, Dida-Dadi, Mr. Anirban Bose, Janki...This part was was nicely penned by u. It kept me intrigued throught the chapter. 😉 And finally Swaragini reunited Shekhar-Shomi and Dadi and Ragini accepted Swara-Shomi and Swara accepted Shekhar wholeheartedly. 😃 Then Swara-RagLak part was nice. Swara teasing RagLak and RagLak teasing Swara. 😆 And Sanskar part was also nice. How he was admiring Swara and her song by watching her video. Awesome!! 😉 Update soon dear. 😳 Eagerly waiting to know more about SwaSan. 😉 And thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

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blindassassin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#79

Lucky

Today I had posted a look out notice for few of my friends including you and here you re with the next chapter.I am happy to see at least one back from the exile.And what an entry. Your Fitoor has got me addicted to it. I loved how swara explained to anjali s fiancee about forcefully changing a person and wanting to change out of love. That was pure wisdom. Waiting with fingers crossed for the sparks to fly.

The romance in Fanaa is so gentle like a breeze, whereas here we are sure to get a whirlwind affair.

Only request is please don't limit this to 4S.

Hope the next updates will be regular, still waiting for Fanaa next chapter.

Love, Veena.

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#80

Res lucky

Unres dearie...😊

So lucky..chapter 2 was superb...i missed swasan alot in it..😉

Swara..anjali n akash n their convo was nicely planned..it revealled much about swara..her personality n thinking...her family background n struggle to unite her scattered family was cleverly penned down..n reason for her inclination n love for music n flowerz was quite reasonable .swara teasing raglak was so cute...loved your writing alot...👏

Well swara rejected many boys..but just one eyes she could not forget...n even sanky got mesmerised seeing her..or listening her..that recording part was awesome...waiting to know how his love at fight sight becomes his fitoor...excited😃😳

Love🤗

Talia

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