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Posted: 8 years ago
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Harshita darling...
I dont know why people donot comment...but i know one thing that im loving your story n do not find anything wrong...plzz do continue for me..im enjoying it...

Comingto update..it was awesome...part of prologue included...i soo connected with their gulit ..pain n fear of losing everything...but want them to talk...being friendly...not main problem but anything..atleast talk...want an healing scene.both applying first aid on each other..it would be...fantastic..hoping..update soon...

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Harshita darling...

I dont know why people donot comment...but i know one thing that im loving your story n do not find anything wrong...plzz do continue for me..im enjoying it...

Comingto update..it was awesome...part of prologue included...i soo connected with their gulit ..pain n fear of losing everything...but want them to talk...being friendly...not main problem but anything..atleast talk...want an healing scene.both applying first aid on each other..it would be...fantastic..hoping..update soon...

Talia

Thanks Talia..
Glad u liked it..
Well I won't stop the story bit still felt dishearted with low response.. nothing else...
But still when u all comment it feels good...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Nice update dear. I m loving the story ,its new n unique concept. What to say...it's just amazing.👏 the title of the story is just perfect 'bawre'. They both r bawre. Thank for pm. Sorry harshita these days i m little bit busy n not commenting on any of your story. I just click like after reading ur updates. I m apologizing u again not for not giving u comments on ur updates. Sorry🥱
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hii harshita.
Nice part dear.
Waiting for their love gerny start.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Baawre part-6
A/N
Hi all this the next part...
So a question which came was...
what did each other's family guessed about them that they started to beat SwaSan??
Ans)So it is more about how the families (Hitlers ) wanted things to be... N they aren't.. earlier also I have said ki dp n dadi r Hitlers n those who rebell them have to face consequences.. here they wanted them to be happy infact they assumed them happy.. but when sujata notices the bags which were still packed this means a slight problem.. here swasan didn't spoke up anything to cover up...N also sujata came to their room before on their 1st n8 n she sensed that they weren't comfortable.. also the family have also noticed that they aren't talking to eachother.. avoiding eachother.. this all have forced them to think that swasan aren't living like husband and wife... They r still strangers to eachother.. n this leads to do n dadi again think that someone rebell them this makes them loose temper.. n on top of that swasan silence was giving approval that all they r thinking is correct.. if one thinks they aren't living like a Normal couple.. then it is r8.. if dadi n dp think they r rebelling them then yes they r ... Hence they faced the consequence...
So ask if any questions regarding the story I will answer them... Also this is the much awaited part.. the confession...one...hope u will like it...


~Jee Le Zara~
Sanskaar POV-
I held her shoulders... I made her sit but then I moved to the first aid box... It might be paining badly... Her cheeks were red blue n black.. her family had beaten her badly...I was the reason for her pain.. my heart filled with guilt.. I moved to her .. I had no guts to speak up.. n hence I simply lifted her face n applied the tube on the corner of her lip .. n on her forehead.. but what to do about the cheeks.that still reflected pain.. I simply applied ice pack.. slowly.. she winced in pain.. I stopped for a second n then applied it again more lightly... She tried to look into my eyes but no I lacked courage to meet hers.. I was only concentrating on her wound.. her long open hair came on her forehead.. I shifted them back using my index finger.. I applied detol there n she again winced in pain.. "sorry" I instantly whispered an appology...
"It's okay..." She too replied in a low voice... N looked down... Making it though for me to apply medicine... I simply turned her face towards me...N finally bangaged her forehead...
I took a deep breath when I completed her dressing... I patted her cheek n got up ..keep the first aid box on a table asked her to rest..
"Swara" I said slowly " u take rest"...
Her eyes... I met those ... Big beautiful eyes...
"Woh ur.." she tried to say something indicating.. to my bleeding lip n wounds when I cut..
"It's okay I will manage.." I cut her n gestured her to sleep.. she slightly smiled n pulled her legs up... I covered her with the blanket... N slowly caressed her cheek.. "I am sorry" I slowly whispered n then turned to the other side... N moved to my Almera.. I took out my comfortable lowers n shirt... N left for the washroom...


Main hoon gumsum tu bhi khamosh hai
Sach hai samay ka hi sab dosh hai
Dhadkan dhadkan ik gham rehta hai
Jaane kyu phir bhi dil kehta hai
Jee le zara, jee le zaraa
Kehta hai dil jee le zara
Aye humsafar, aye humnawa
Aa paas aa jee le zara



Swara POV-
I have guilt never experienced this much guilt ever in life... I am guilty for hurting him. He did nothing to me... N today he was scolded beaten up n what nots... I hate myself for this... I hate myself... He is so caring bit I don't deserve it... Not today bit yes soon I will tell Him everything... Soon v.v.soon...
He came out .. I woke up n held his hand ...He turned... I gestured him to sit on the bed.. n then I slowly unbuttoned his shirt... N Removed ... My IITian visibly gulped his saliva.. I smiled... Uff he looks so cute... But as soon as my eyes left his face they were stuck on his clean shaved..well built muscular chest... I stopped to breathe... He too smirked at my reaction but then my heart filled with guilt he had beating marks all over the body... I slowly applied medicine.. he was looking at me.. I couldn't meet his gaze... I turned at his back n applied medicine their... I was feeling equivalent pain.. it felt his wounds are mine... A tear escaped my eye n it dropped on his wound.. he winced in pain... "Sorry"I quickly apologized... "It's okay " he replied..
"But y r u crying" he quized..
"No i am not woh something entered my eye..." I lied...
N he turned his face...
"Hogaya..." I said after completing the dressing...
"Thanks" he said...
He was getting up.when I slowly said " u pls sleep here.."
"But u.." he said...
"I will sleep on the couch if u feel uncomfortable with me.." i assured took a pillow n left.. to couch...
He was wearing his shirt.."aah" he cried in pain..
"Sanskaar ... R u okay" I asked...
" Haan woh.. " he was trying to say something...when I again spoke up
..
"It's okay no need to wear this shirt... " I advised.
"No but .. " he was saying more when I a widdened my eyes n left with his shirt... I slept..
He slept without it... I turned my back towards him... Aah.. I don't to loose control... He is soo hot.. shut up swara y r u drooling over this IITian.. but no.. I turned ... N saw him... He was sleeping .. his hand under his head... N one was on his chest... His body moving slowly up n down as he breathed.. oh god.. I won't be able to control I thought but then .. I too knew what is the next tommorow i will tell him everything n I will be out... Oh sorry thrown out .. I was crying I turned my face the other side... No what all happened today it happened but I can't go close to him...

Sanskaar POV-
Oh.. my darling wife was drooling over me.. I smiled.. well what to say.. swara I never knew a girl can so easily drool over me the IITian... Uff I looked at her.. I knew she was crying... But y .. I wanted to know... I know like me she too is hidding something...N I will make her say that...
N I know how to make u speak... I affect you Na.. so here u see ... Tomorrow sanskaar will be at his best baby...
I smiled n I slept...
12 midnight...
I was sleeping but then I was disturbed by the notice of utensils.. I saw her ...I think she took a bath..n was drinking water .. her hair were wet ... N she wore her pink knee length night dress... I must say... She was looking breath taking... She was moving to the couch..But then I held her habd n pulled her over me .. she banged on my chest..
"I don't have any problem .. u can sleep here... "
Before she could answer I rolled over her n came on top of her.. I moved close n pecked her cheeks n then I came to her side...I covered her with my blanket and wrapped my arm around her waist.. I hide my face in her neck.. my one leg was over her... In short.. I had completely captured her.. hijacked her.. she had to sleep like that...
Swara POV-.
Oh my god.. IITian pls ese mat karo.. after knowing me..U would hate every moment with me... A tear escaped my eye... But Okay I want to capture every moment with him.. I turned n embraced him... My hand rested on his chest.. n I hide my face in the crook of his neck...
We slept .. n I must say it was the best of ever time with him... These probably my last few hours with him...
Next mrng-...
We woke up n I tried to go when he pecked my forehead n left me... He released his weight from me... I woke up n git ready so did.. he.. I wanted to speak with him but just then mom called me... I ran down... All seemed angry upon.me... N those who weren't angry on me I was angry with them..
Mom was taunting me today... I saw this face of hers... Today only... My heart ached but I did as she indicated... I made tea.. n when I was serving it.. mom asked me not to take pains as ragini can do that... I felt bad...N infact went more silent... Like yesterday.. when sanskaar came I kept looking down.. no eye contact nothing... I so much wanted to cry... N talk to him but couldn't.. mom again taunted me.. when he came to my defence... N asked her not to say anything.. n there she Began scolding him.. he silently was listening to it.. n I was the cause for everything I thought... N served all.. mom still refused to accept any serving from me.. i felt bad.. no one was looking at me.. n all were at his back scolding him...
He got up in the middle of the meal n started walking when mom called him..
"Sanskaar don't go anywhere... we need to visit the temple.." she said..
"Okay I am here.. swara psl get me my bf here.." he replied...N I took the plates n served the remaining tea n bf there... He gestured me to eat when I nodded saying I don't want to...
He took a deep breath...
"Na juban toh dono Di hi Na h bhagwan ne.. Puri jindagi ese hi isaron mein baat kar kar k nikal Dena.. gunge bache honge dono k... " Mom again scolded us when she noticed us...
"Aapke rehte nahi honge .. kyun chinta karti ho yrr. " He replied... N mom started babling..
"See him jiji .. He is replying his mom like that... Swara come here... " She ordered me.. I went close...
" U have a vocal box.. can u speak... " She quized
N I nodded...
" Then ask sanskaar to come here n sit with us..." I nodded... N looked at him. .. I needed courage for conversing with him...
"Sa.. " I took a deep breath.. " sanskaar.. woh mom ... " I couldn't speak more...
I couldn't complete n again was being scolded ..Mom asked me to talk. ..But with every attempt of hers to make me.speak. ... I was getting more n more silent... Not a single word escaped my mouth... I just kept looking down...

Soon he came n asked me to come with him..
We sat in the car the driver started it...
We both left the mansion...
Swara POV-ends
Sw- Sanskaar I want to talk to you...
Sa- bolo swara..U know I feel there is something you are hidding from me...h Na...
Sw- haan...Pls I want to talk...
He asked the driver to get out... He parked the car.. n left...
Sa- ab bolo .. he cuoed her face...
Sw- Sanskaar .. woh u should leave..me...
Sa-what...
Sw- yes sanskaar I am not good for u... I am not ur perfect match...
Sa- kya but kyun.. y...
Sw- because... because... I. ... I (gathering courage) .. I a. A drunkard smoker .. n a non vergin...
Swara POV-... The next i expected was a slap... But all he did was to hug me...I was shocked...
Sanskaar POV- okay it took me few seconds to understand what she said... But then... I hugged her n y not she is my soul mate ...
End of pov

Sa- swara...no u r perfect... U r just my perfect match...
Sw- Sanskaar but u know I am ...
Sa-it's Okay...U r not a virgin Na..bas.. toh mein konsa sudhra hua hoon yyrrr..
Sw- matalab...
Sa- see I had 11 gfs before ...U .. n I was going to be the father of a kid too...
Sw- what...
Sa- yes... N n n .. I too drink ... Smoke n what nots...fheww.. I thought. .. ki I will spoil ur life..
Sw- wow...wow.. thank God I got u... Par what about tuat kid...
Sa- lambi kahani h...
Sw- toh kab sunaoge.. wese abhi h kya wob baby..
Sa- (a bit sad) nahi Na baby h Na momy h..
Sw- matalab...
Sa- hmm.. she died ... We were going to marry but then... In an accident she died...
Sw- oh.. so u both were serious..
Sa- idk .. but Jo bhi tha ..I had to be because of the baby..
Sw- Sanskaar u know ek baat h ..bas don't slap.me..
Sa- bolo...
Sw- I too had 11 bfs before u...
Sa- it's okay... Ab ghar challenge ya Mandir...
Sw- kanhan man ho..
Sa- club chalen...
Sw- ese..
Sa- okay tonight be ready... Hum Puri baat karenge..fine...
Sw- yo...
Sa- bas ek cheez...
Sw- what..
Sa- I want a kiss..
N the next moment.. swara locked her lips with his...



Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Harshita it's awesome yaar. Main to soch bhi nahi sakti ki koi apne beta beti ko aise maar sakta hai. Glad that they both were supporting each other. This is wonderful ki unhone ek dusre ka sach bata diya. Thank u so much for the pm.
Mujhe maaf kar dena actually main apne cousin ki shadi mein gayi thi aur waha pe Internet nahi tha to main comment nahi kar payi.
Love u
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for part 6.😳
Unresed Harshi!!!!🤗
Awesome update!!👏 So beautifully written!👍🏼
Awww!! Loved both Swara's and Sanskar's POV.😳 Both took care of each other's wound!😳 Both r so caring towards each other, that's why they r scared to hurt each other.😉 Swara was drooling at him and Sanskar noticed it.😆 Both slept together in the bed. They way Sanskar captured her in the bed and they way they were sleeping with each other.☺️☺️ When Sujata taunted SwaSan, they supported each other.😃 And finally the most awaited part, both Swara and Sanskar told each other about their past.😳 And both were shocked with the either one's supportive behaviour towards each other coz they thought that they would be slapped and thrown out from each oher's lives.😃 SwaSan supported each other. Loved their kiss at the ending.☺️ Update soon.😳 I'm very excited for the next part😉 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Nivijo

Harshita it's awesome yaar. Main to soch bhi nahi sakti ki koi apne beta beti ko aise maar sakta hai. Glad that they both were supporting each other. This is wonderful ki unhone ek dusre ka sach bata diya. Thank u so much for the pm.

Mujhe maaf kar dena actually main apne cousin ki shadi mein gayi thi aur waha pe Internet nahi tha to main comment nahi kar payi.
Love u
Nivi

Hey thanks for commenting..N it's okay..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Ao finally they came to know about each other

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