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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


Welcome as well as thank u so much Harshi!!🤗


Update soon coz its becoming very interesting.😳
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Harshita darling...👏
Hot ..hot hot...
I just loved swasan hot romance..n u included SRK...OMG..im sooo happiee...i love him sooo much...thank u for this treat...🤗

Well swasan are behaiving weird ..atleast one should disclose their past n other one will do the same immedialtely...but enjoyed seeing them suport each other.😉.their intimacy is incomplete..due to burden on their heart...😳hoping it lift soon..

Talia😃
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Awsome update
loved it
cont soon


thnks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
All part are awesome.
New concept &never imagine Sanskaar &swara like that.
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Baawre part 5
A/N-
Hi all this part is for those handfull of readers who liked the ff..read n reply.. I think the story isn't that good..But I recieved no comments stating the problems.. hence I continue to take the story like I feel.. thansk to all those who replied.. pls do Continue leaving them..
Hope u will like the story...
With love
Harshita


~The Silent Pit~
Swara POV-
How do normal couples behave.. first day they Don't talk.. they feel shy.. then slowly n gradually they open up... N with in a week or so they start getting comfortable... But mine and Sanskaar's case is different.. day one we shared a bed n few talks.. day 2 words escaped.. we communicated through signs... Day 3 signs eloped n only thing we did was to communicate through eyes... Day 4 our eye contact was broken .. we weren't only silent but couldn't even look at eachother .. Day 5 he left for office before I woke up n came after I slept... I too felt relived.. I did not have to face him.. n now thia is a routine..
Today is Sunday... I am loving on the bed idk how to face him ...
He is sleeping on the couch... He looks so cute.. can I say him my IITian... My breath sticks... When I say this "My IITian.." I so much wanted to say my cute IITian... But I can't.. I don't want to get attached to him... Because all this is temporary... U know what have increased is my nightmares... He throwing me out... I living like an orphan... I am saving all my neg.. n all the money I receive... But for how long.. how long will we be silent... I turned n looked at him... How long will I hide the secret... But I have no courage to disclose it either...
I turned the other side n slept again...
Sanskaar POV-
Far.. far.. far.. we r going with each passing day .. gap of all sorts r increasing n so are increasing my my nightmares.. my dad throwing me out.. slapping me...But then I saw her getting disturbed by the sun rays.. I moved n drew the curtains.. I turned.. her face was same angelic...
I was moving back to the couch when she shifted to the edge of the bed... She was about to fall I ran n held her by her waist... We had an eyelock after so long... Her hair covered her face ..I removed them... I was lost in mmher eyes... I Lifted her up n then placed her on the bed back..
"R u Okay" I quized
She smiled n nodded.. well again I felt happy but still as the day began we were avoiding eachother .. I went to my study room after the bf .. I was working when bade Papa asked for some files...
Laksh Bhai said he will bring .. I should tell him.. I know this is one of his vain efforts to talk to me.. I just gestured.. I will bring... N got up n left..
I entered n saw what was elast expected... She was sitting on the floor n taking out things from her bag...I felt bad.. but had no guts to talk I took my file.. she turned n saw me.. n again searched for something...
I stood their ... I think it's high time.. we should talk... Atleast her bag should be on proper place...
But just when she turned... N saw me.. I was about to speak.. but she looked down n started to.move n crossed... Me... I gathered courage to say something..But just then..
Sanskaar POV-ends

"Swara Sanskaar. .. what is this...???" Shouted... Sujata... On finding swara's bag still packed up.. n y not to do so... A week these 2 were married but still she had not kept her luggage in the Almera...
"Y have u not kept ur luggage in the Almera yet... N sanskaar can't u give her some space..." She asked furiously...
The looked at eachother .. n then looked down as if don't know how to speak... Their heads hung down... Sujata was shocked but non the less ... Their silence answered many of the questions poping up in her heart...
She was shocked or rather beyond that...
She dragged both of them down to the Room of Durga Prasad n Annapurna... All the family the Maheshwaris n Gadodias (who were asked to.meet urgently) stood numb n shocked on knowing everything... They didn't speak anything .. nnt he next moment dadi requested to excuse swara for a minute as she wanted to talk... Durga Prasad agreed... N looked at sanskaar passing death glares he too folded his hands and requested the Gadodia family to excuse sanskaar for a talk...
Dadi held her hand tightly n pulled her along... She like a lifeless body all.numb moved with her... Follwed by her Maa n baba who ran along with Ragini to save her from the earth of Mrs. Parvati Gadodia... Sanskaar looked at her from a corner of his eyes... But he himself was too scared from his bade Papa...not able to utter a word or move a limb... He turned his head to see her untill dadi took her out n they went out of sight... The moment she left all the glares shifted to him... He again hung his head down... stairing at his feet he didn't knew what was coming up next...
In the guest room-
Dadi was shaking swara from her shoulders n asked her to answer what was all this y she n sanskaar aren't living together like a husband and wife should... But she stood numb... Dadi was continuously shouting n scolding her but she stood numb... N didn't answer any of her questions...
"Can speak up.. swara ... Since last 15 minutes I am asking something" but she said nothing...N here she lost her temper badly n the next moment swara's right cheek turned red... She lost her balance n banged her head on the table blood ozed out from her head n corner of lips yet she was silent...dadi had slapped her hard... Ragini held her shoulders but dadi came closed n pushed ragini away...
"Speak up... Swara what is this ..Haan...??" Dadi again quized but she was silent.. this increased her rage n their came another ear ringing slap from dadi on her cheek... N again n again... Her cheeks turned badly red ..black n blue ..But no... Not even a single word escaped her mouth... Dadi tiered from trying all ways sat on the bed n started crying.. her heart ached seeing her dadi like that .. her sad consoled dadi... N her Maa asked her the same questions .. politely again which she again left unanswered...
Sharmishta again n again tired but failed ... shekhar came their n disappointed with his daughter asked her to leave her ...
Meanwhile In the other room-
Dp didn't started with words but a slap on sanskaar's cheek... He lost his balance... Laksh held him n signalled to be strong... He again was forced to turn when do held his elbow n turned him.. rqge dripping from his eyes he asked him y wasn't he n swara living n behaving like a Normal couple... He left it answered... Dp RP Annapurna n sujata tried 100 s of ways but no was no less than his wife.. subdorn.. he didn't answer the question n stood lifelessly... Dp skipped to the harsher way .. he took a stick n started beating him... But no sanskaar was Sanskaar.not the one who will answer it...never... He stood silent... dp gave up when his own hands started to pain ... Sanskaar's blazer lied on the ground n his shirt was torn from a few places... His body turned blue n black n red due to beating... All were looking at him in utter shock .. disbelief n with eyes reflecting disappointment
Both the families didn't knew how to face eachother... Swara saw her dadi crying she moved to She n wipped her tears... This melt Parvati she caressed her hair n asked again y she n sanskaar weren't accepting eachother .. she refused to answer... Dadi pushed her in disappointment n she fell on the table n broke a vase...
The Maheshwaris ran to the other room... Sanskaar was the 1st one to rush... He entered guest room...Swasan saw eachother ..They had a sorry look on their faces... He came close to her n held her by shoulders...
He himself wasn't able to walk.. she supported him n vice versa... They looked down again n hung their heads... They left...the guest room... Leaving the whole family shocked n more confused... They moved out n the only thing they could do was to let them be...
All moved out n limping ..climbed the stairs with eachother's support... N reached their room they entered n closed the door behind...
The gadodia family folded hand n with hung heads left..
The Maheshwaris could not say a word they too sat... There numb..
None knew what was the next.. how to say something... How to understand them... They had confused all...

Swasan entered into he room ..They could not do anything but sit.. sanskaar made her sit.. they were silent.. what could they speak... What could they tell...
With every passing second they were falling more n more into "The Silent Pit."...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for part 5.😳
Unresed.😃
Awesome update!!👏 Both Swara and Sanskar r scared to fall in love with each other and r scared to hurt each other.😳 They r still unaware of each other's lifestyle.😕 Loved their POV's.😳 But when will they open up to each other??😕 Felt bad for both of them when they were getting beaten up!😭 But one thing I'm confused that what did each other's family guessed about them that they started to beat SwaSan??😕 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for part 5.😳
Unresed.😃
Awesome update!!👏 Both Swara and Sanskar r scared to fall in love with each other and r scared to hurt each other.😳 They r still unaware of each other's lifestyle.😕 Loved their POV's.😳 But when will they open up to each other??😕 Felt bad for both of them when they were getting beaten up!😭 But one thing I'm confused that what did each other's family guessed about them that they started to beat SwaSan??😕 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Hi aheli glad u liked the update here I answer ur question
@ bold ..
So it is more about how the families (Hitlers ) wanted things to be... N they aren't.. earlier also I have said ki dp n dadi r Hitlers n those who rebell them have to face consequences.. here they wanted them to be happy infact they assumed them happy.. but when sujata notices the bags which were still packed this means a slight problem.. here swasan didn't spoke up anything to cover up...N also sujata came to their room before on their 1st n8 n she sensed that they weren't comfortable.. also the family have also noticed that they aren't talking to eachother.. avoiding eachother.. this all have forced them to think that swasan aren't living like husband and wife... They r still strangers to eachother.. n this leads to do n dadi again think that someone rebell them this makes them loose temper.. n on top of that swasan silence was giving approval that all they r thinking is correct.. if one thinks they aren't living like a Normal couple.. then it is r8.. if dadi n dp think they r rebelling them then yes they r ... Hence they faced the consequence...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Hi aheli glad u liked the update here I answer ur question
@ bold ..
So it is more about how the families (Hitlers ) wanted things to be... N they aren't.. earlier also I have said ki dp n dadi r Hitlers n those who rebell them have to face consequences.. here they wanted them to be happy infact they assumed them happy.. but when sujata notices the bags which were still packed this means a slight problem.. here swasan didn't spoke up anything to cover up...N also sujata came to their room before on their 1st n8 n she sensed that they weren't comfortable.. also the family have also noticed that they aren't talking to eachother.. avoiding eachother.. this all have forced them to think that swasan aren't living like husband and wife... They r still strangers to eachother.. n this leads to do n dadi again think that someone rebell them this makes them loose temper.. n on top of that swasan silence was giving approval that all they r thinking is correct.. if one thinks they aren't living like a Normal couple.. then it is r8.. if dadi n dp think they r rebelling them then yes they r ... Hence they faced the consequence...


Ohkk...Now I got it...Thank u so much for clearing my doubt siso.😃

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