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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 8 years ago

Bawre-swasan

A/N- I am really sorry for introducing another concept when not yet completed with the others but kya karun dimag h ki rukta nahi... So really a big appology.. but u can still I am giving updates in a circle.. so will I try to upload on Time.. n ..N ..N no worries only 3 or 4 updates of Fangirl n Obsessive not more than that.. n same for Sharma Saab... Sooo will update it once done with them .. pls do read n leave loads of replies...

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Harshita...

Concept- 2 non virgins...2 idiots .. two casonovas.. what will happen when they will meet... How will these two learn the meaning of true love... How will these two be loyal to each other.. will the 2 spoilt brats be able to learn to be good... Will time teach them to love.. to respect... To care.. atleast for eachother...

Character sketch-

Swara Gadodia- a non vergin... A spoilt brat... A Casanova.. a drunkard .. a smoker... Fewh... Now I come to this... She is the daughter of Shekhar Gadodia n sharmishta gadodia... Ragini is her sister... These 4 live with Parvati .. her dadi... Swara is careless... Free bird does what she feels like doing...never cared about anything or anyone else... Unknown with the meaning of true love ... But familiar with the feelings she experienced.. lust n attraction... Has a long list of boy friends.. excluding sanskaar

Gadodia's- a slightly rich family... Shekhar n sharmishta loves their daughters... unaware of swara's reality.. ragini married to laksh.. an year back..helps swara hide her true face... Completely opposite to her sister swara... Parvati is the Hitler n dictator. .. very strict marwadi woman...

Sanskaar Maheshwari- a non vergin ... A casonova .. a drunkard.. a smoker.. n here to I think now I will tell further about him.. he is the son of ram Prasad Maheshwari and sujta Maheshwari... Lives with his brother laksh ..his Bhabhi ragini... N his bade Papa n badi Maa.. Durga Prasad Maheshwari and Annapurna Maheshwari... Feelings of actual love have not even touched his heart once.. carefree.. careless.. free bird.. does what his heart says... Only knows about lust n attraction... Have fooled himself 1000 s of time that he is in love... But ended up realising he isn't.. it was mere attraction.. has a long list of girl friends... Excluding swara..

Maheshwari Family- ram Sujata Annapurna n Durga Prasad loves their kids alot..no difference between sanskaar n laksh... Laksh knows about his brother n sali .. n so does ragini... They help him hide his true face from his family... Laksh is opposite of his brother sanskaar who is completely asanskari...

Prologue-

"Swara Sanskaar. .. what is this...???" Shouted... Sujata... On finding swara's bag still packed up.. n y not to do so... A week these 2 were married but still she had not kept her luggage in the Almera...

"Y have u not kept ur luggage in the Almera yet... N sanskaar can't u give her some space..." She asked furiously...

The looked at eachother .. n then looked down as if don't know how to speak... Their heads hung down... Sujata was shocked but non the less ... Their silence answered many of the questions poping up in her heart...

She was shocked or rather beyond that...

She dragged both of them down to the Room of Durga Prasad n Annapurna... All the family the Maheshwaris n Gadodias (who were asked to.meet urgently) stood numb n shocked on knowing everything... They didn't speak anything .. nnt he next moment dadi requested to excuse swara for a minute as she wanted to talk... Durga Prasad agreed... N looked at sanskaar passing death glares he too folded his hands and requested the Gadodia family to excuse sanskaar for a talk...

Dadi held her hand tightly n pulled her along... She like a lifeless body all.numb moved with her... Follwed by her Maa n baba who ran along with Ragini to save her from the earth of Mrs. Parvati Gadodia... Sanskaar looked at her from a corner of his eyes... But he himself was too scared from his bade Papa...not able to utter a word or move a limb... He turned his head to see her untill dadi took her out n they went out of sight... The moment she left all the glares shifted to him... He again hung his head down... stairing at his feet he didn't knew what was coming up next...

In the guest room-

Dadi was shaking swara from her shoulders n asked her to answer what was all this y she n sanskaar aren't living together like a husband and wife should... But she stood numb... Dadi was continuously shouting n scolding her but she stood numb... N didn't answer any of her questions...

"Can speak up.. swara ... Since last 15 minutes I am asking something" but she said nothing...N here she lost her temper badly n the next moment swara's right cheek turned red... She lost her balance n banged her head on the table blood ozed out from her head n corner of lips yet she was silent...dadi had slapped her hard... Ragini held her shoulders but dadi came closed n pushed ragini away...

"Speak up... Swara what is this ..Haan...??" Dadi again quized but she was silent.. this increased her rage n their came another ear ringing slap from dadi on her cheek... N again n again... Her cheeks turned badly red ..black n blue ..But no... Not even a single word escaped her mouth... Dadi tiered from trying all ways sat on the bed n started crying.. her heart ached seeing her dadi like that .. her sad consoled dadi... N her Maa asked her the same questions .. politely again which she again left unanswered...

Sharmishta again n again tired but failed ... shekhar came their n disappointed with his daughter asked her to leave her ...

Meanwhile In the other room-

Dp didn't started with words but a slap on sanskaar's cheek... He lost his balance... Laksh held him n signalled to be strong... He again was forced to turn when do held his elbow n turned him.. rqge dripping from his eyes he asked him y wasn't he n swara living n behaving like a Normal couple... He left it answered... Dp RP Annapurna n sujata tried 100 s of ways but no was no less than his wife.. subdorn.. he didn't answer the question n stood lifelessly... Dp skipped to the harsher way .. he took a stick n started beating him... But no sanskaar was Sanskaar.not the one who will answer it...never... He stood silent... dp gave up when his own hands started to pain ... Sanskaar's blazer lied on the ground n his shirt was torn from a few places... His body turned blue n black n red due to beating... All were looking at him in utter shock .. disbelief n with eyes reflecting disappointment

Both the families didn't knew how to face eachother... Swara saw her dadi crying she moved to She n wipped her tears... This melt Parvati she caressed her hair n asked again y she n sanskaar weren't accepting eachother .. she refused to answer... Dadi pushed her in disappointment n she fell on the table n broke a vase...

The Maheshwaris ran to the other room... Sanskaar was the 1st one to rush... He entered guest room...Swasan saw eachother ..They had a sorry look on their faces... He came close to her n held her by shoulders...

He himself wasn't able to walk.. she supported him n vice versa... They looked down again n hung their heads... They left...the guest room... Leaving the whole family shocked n more confused... All moved out n the only thing they could do was to let them be...

They both moved out n limping ..climbed the stairs with eachother's support... N reached their room they entered n closed the door behind...

Index-

Prologue- up

CS-. Up

Index- here😉

Part-1- Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi - down

Part-2- The Nightmare - page3

Part-3- Shadi Mubarak- page 4

Part-4-The Past That Affects-page5

Part-5- The Silent Pit- page 6

Part-6- Jee le Zara - page 7

Daru Pe Charcha - With Harshita Loomba - page 9

Part7- BoyFriend Puran-pg11

Part-8-GirlFriend Puran- pg12

Part-9- Do Not Disturb- pg13

Part-10-Pyaar Manga H Tumhi Se- pg15

Part-11- Mom Knows It All - pg17

Part -12-Dhat Tere Ki - pg 18

Part- 13 - Biwi H MERI - pg20

Part-14- New Twist - pg21

Part-15 - The Fight- Round -1- pg23

Part-16- Round-2 ~Neki Kar Dariya Mein Dal~ pg24

Teaser-

Part-17- Faded- pg26

Part-18- Black&White - PG 28

A/N

Hello everyone.

Harshita here. I want to inform you all that my stories will be updated further only after March 3 2017.

I am hell stuck with my courses which seem never ending.

The coming Valantines day I am busy with my exams. Seems funny, I know.

I will be right back and give all the updates as per the decided slots after March 3.

Sorry to keep you waiting.

Regards

Harshita.

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Baawre part-1~Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi~

A/N- hi all the update is small but pls I Can't type it more longer... Well here I would like to tell u the 1st part is completely from the POV of Ragini... This part will help u understand the importance of Raglak in creating swasan... N their role in their lives as the elder siblings... N few things about swasan attitude...

Moreover I have got only 2 types of questions regarding the story- 1) y r swasan so stubdorn...?.

They r so because they are no reason for it .. childhood problem h in dono ka...

2) y arnt they Normal...???

Well this is the story guys read n u will come to know soon...

With love

Harshita...

Ragini POV-

Me n laksh were close ... He was moving closer ... My heart was racing faster .. I started breathing heavily... I felt shy I looked down.. he lifted my face up n traced his finger along my jaw line... My eyes met his ... They were full of love.. I felt happy.. he moved closer... My heart skipped beats.. I was about to turn when he pulled me by my waist ... N moved his head to N fro indicating not today... I felt shy.. I clutched his shirt... He moved clsoer.. the little gap between us was filled completely... I closed my eyes giving a positive response but he moved n 1st pecked my forehead ... I opened my eyes... "If u aren't ready yet I won't come close to u..." He said in a low voice his heart n eyes all reflected love... He losened his grip on my waist.. but no not today ..yes I was scared but ... I too love him.. it has been so long that we are married now we have to take a step further n more than that ..I was ready n so was he... Our love n relationship has grown in these 8 months.. I simply halted his hand on my waist n moved a step closer... "Are u sure" he quized .. I nodded in a yes...

He pulled me close n then slowly captured my lips in his... Our tounges touched.. he entered my mouth... We explored eachother's mouth... N then he slowly traced his fingers on my back opening the dori of my blouse... We broke the kiss he peaked my cheeks .. I hugged him. .. n hided my face in his chest... I was blushing... He simply smiled at me n pecked my forehead again .. n there was I.. I slowly moved my fingers on his chest n then softly pecked his chest... He was smiling at me... He turned my back towards him n I crashed on his chest... He slowly moved closer.. n my blouse was loosening more n more... He unpinned my sari from the shoulder n was melting under his touch.. he moved closer to my shoulder n his warm breath touched my shoulder.. the next moment he started leaving at trait of wet kisses on my shoulder... He moved to my neck n gulped my skin.. I forgot to breathe.. he lifted me up... N placed me on the bed.. he moved closer n came on top of me.. we make out...

12 mid night...

We were sleeping in eachother's embrace... When his phone rang.. already exhausted he slowly moved n picked it up...

"Bhai.. aap kanhan ho... " Came a drunk voice from the phone..

"Where are you sanskaar" laksh Ji asked in a sleepy tone..

" Mere room k neeche wali window p ... Pls help me climb up.. I can see 2 ladder... Here ... " He said n laksh got it he was too drunk to find out which ladder is he imagining n which is real..

" Wait coming .." laksh Ji pecked my forehead and immediately got up ...

He ran to sanskaar who needed his help urgently...

Laksh helped him enter his room... He came back n we slept again

2 am..

My phone rang.. I picked it up...

"Di pls help... " It was swara on the phone..

"Ka hua Babu.." I asked softly .

" Room mein jana h... Pls" she requested

N the next was me n laksh helping her reach her room n sleep...

...

In our car

L- when will they change Ragini..

Me- idk laksh... May be a responsible life partner can help them...

L- yes u r r8 ragini...

R- I think we should talk about this thing with our families.

...

Few days later-

Me n laksh Ji were having tea at the breakfast... Our brother n sister weren't talking to us.. because we were the once who injected a wild idea of their marriages in their minds... But we were happy to do something good for them... Little did we know that we will get the biggest shock of our lives the next moment..

The tea in our cups burnt our tounges when chachi ji said she wanted swara's alliance for sanskaar...

Sanskaar was already irritated n hence he left without listening to what chachi was saying or not...

"Sanskaar tujhe problem h toh bolde beta..." Chachi said...

"Mom I feel confused about it do what u want" he said with his back at us n left...

In our room-

Me- laksh humne toh socha tha ki these two will get responsible life partners but yeh toh ekjese h..

L- ragini I think it's okay they will understand eachother atleast the habbits n actions of one won't be sinful for the other... Let it be... If chachi wants then go get married Lego.. aur trust God... He does everything for a reason...

Me-laksh par agar kuch gadbad hui toh..

L- toh ek badhiya si story banegi with huge twist...

I hit him on his chest playfully.. well we both were tensed about them... Two like idiots met means a disaster any Time any where... Let's see what plans does God have for them...

Ragini POV-ends

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago

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Verda_768

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Posted: 8 years ago

A great start. I just luv the concept n why swara n sanskaar is so stubborn. I m waiting for next update to clear my confusion. N thanks for pm harshita😊

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Nivedita

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Posted: 8 years ago

Harshita very interesting concept. Pls updt soon and love u so much for sending me pm.

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Nivi

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spatika

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Posted: 8 years ago

interesting concept..
continue soon..
thanks for PM..

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Sanya17

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Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting story update soon n if possible plz pm me

Well I was thinking why swasan has turned into such spoilt brats but I think I got the answer in the first part itself the way both of their family behaved with them they are bound to be turn spoilt brats such type of behaviour forces children to go into wrong sides and make them stubborn and after reading the first part it looks like they are habituated to the beatings and abuses from their family since childhood and it is a common human behaviour to do the opposite of what these type of parents told them to do that's why they turned into spoilt brats and about their mrg it seems they were forced to get married they don't have problem with each other they seem good friends but their family force them to accept each other that's why they like their habits of always doing the opposite are not accepting each other I already hate both the families too much they are pathitic and disgusting raglak seem good sibling both laksh and ragini seems to care about their brother and sister I dont know but I think swasan knows about each others reality

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi Harshi,😊
Loved the concept very much!!! So SwaSan r married to each other but r totally casanova, drunkard, smoker and what not? Oh yes, they r stubborn!!!😕 They don't live n behave like a normal couple.😕 Their truth is only known to Ragini and Laksh, SwaSan siblings. Interesting cs and prologue.😉 Update soonish.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

Harshu dear...

Prologue n chaptrr 1 was mind blowing..but im little confused ..raglak helped swasan..so swara lived in mm???why??will wait for next ..clear my confusion...

Talia

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Harshu dear...
Prologue n chaptrr 1 was mind blowing..but im little confused ..raglak helped swasan..so swara lived in mm???why??will wait for next ..clear my confusion...

Talia

No dear swara doesn't stay in mm.. Raglak went to her place at n8 2 am to help her...

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sanya17
Interesting story update soon n if possible plz pm me
Well I was thinking why swasan has turned into such spoilt brats but I think I got the answer in the first part itself the way both of their family behaved with them they are bound to be turn spoilt brats such type of behaviour forces children to go into wrong sides and make them stubborn and after reading the first part it looks like they are habituated to the beatings and abuses from their family since childhood and it is a common human behaviour to do the opposite of what these type of parents told them to do that's why they turned into spoilt brats and about their mrg it seems they were forced to get married they don't have problem with each other they seem good friends but their family force them to accept each other that's why they like their habits of always doing the opposite are not accepting each other I already hate both the families too much they are pathitic and disgusting raglak seem good sibling both laksh and ragini seems to care about their brother and sister I dont know but I think swasan knows about each others reality

Yeah r8 sanaya .. to u have understood the story quite correctly...

Yes sanskaar n swara know eachother but not this ...ki the other person is a drunkard n smoker etc.. etc...