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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww harshu...
Sweetest update..painfull in begining but fun till end...i just loved swasan first aid part...n the comfort they share as husband n wife...close but still far from each other...morning scene from sujju was annoying...just let them live..atleast they are talking through eyes..but noo..all that taunt...ahhh but sansku did good..took her out..n that confession of true personality n past..it was fab..loved that final kiss..waiting for next eagerly...

Love
Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update dear. .Waiting for next update harshita.
Love your work.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsome updates
finally both speak to each other & support each other
loved it ...
cont soon eagrly waiting for nxt update

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Daru Pe Charcha - Bawre Discussions
-with Harshita Loomba

Hi all I welcome u all here in the "Bawre" Discussions namely -"Daru Pe Charcha".
Here we will interact on the story "Bawre" .. u can ask questions,doubts and also leave ur opinions and suggestions. I will answer them all. Because before I continue with the story any further I want to clear all the vacuum from the earlier part. Pls do participate leave ur replies. I am egar to know n answer them. U can even criticize the story , characterization n evn the Author (Harshita). This is really essential for me to know all the negative and positive points. I would love to improve the quality of my stories on the basis of ur remarks.

Loads of love
Harshita..


Answer index

Novinjo- pg10
Sanaya17 - pg10
Krisshu - pg10
Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Harshita the whole plot is really superb. I can't even see any fault in it. But I have a query that why are dadi and Dp are always very strict. I mean how can they be mean to their own grand daughter and son respectively. Why can't they show some humanity towards swasan.
I hope u r not offended by my doubts.
With lots of love
Nivi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Oukk Harshi, will surely ask u, but till now, I don't have any doubts.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well I loved this story but I wish in the future there will be a situation where dadi and dp realize their mistakes how wrong they are in behaving so badly with their kids actually I want all elders to realize their mistake
In the first part I can't understand why they behave so badly with swasan I mean I know that was about swasan relation and they can't tolerate when things did not happen according to their wish but I don't understand why dp and dadi can't understand that swasan are married whatever hpns between them it is their personal matter they should not interfere between them and instead of giving them their space they started beating them😲 OK I understand they want them to be happy but khushia kya mar mar kar pit pit kar khun nikal nikalkar dilwayage I love how swasan did not told anything they have the sense that it is their personal matter which the elders didn't. the elders behaviour was creepy inhuman criminal against the morals and even against common sense ab suhagraat kya mar mar k karwayge I want punishment for them I really want them to feel really guilty about their behaviour
And I think instead of showing no reason why swasan turned out to be like this it will be very good if you show that dp and dadis behaviour is the reason why swasan turned out like this
Because it is a very simple and known matter of psychology that if parents are too rude with kids if they beats them without any reason the kids become stubborn they start doing the opposit of what parents told them to do and then a situation comes when the beatings don't have any effect on them they kept doing what they are doing


I hope I didn't hurt or offend you in any way but I really wanted to tell all this
Edited by Sanya17 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Harshu..
One thing i didnot understand...raglak were married n swasan must have met in their wedding..as dp n dadi are strict..how is it possible thatvthey know nothing about other..if he is casanova or no???or she is quite free n no bhooli bhali???anyone can judge..or raglak never talked about their siblings...

Overall..i loved this story..update soon..plzzz

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nivijo

Harshita the whole plot is really superb. I can't even see any fault in it. But I have a query that why are dadi and Dp are always very strict. I mean how can they be mean to their own grand daughter and son respectively. Why can't they show some humanity towards swasan.

I hope u r not offended by my doubts.
With lots of love
Nivi


Hm this is the most often asked question ... Well dadi n dp are strict because it is more or less their characterisation

Dp n dadi are two very egoist people those who rebell them have to pay the consequences.. n swasan have Rebelled their biggest decision. Like they want everyone to do as they say .. swasan did not only regect the marriage but also reflected eachother in a way this had lead to them being merciless on swasan.
Moreover the actions of dp and dadi are wrong . And yes they are the cause of Swasan being spoilt in a way. The conclusion of the story might lead to do n dadi realising their mistakes along with Swasan who too r at fault more or less
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanya17

Well I loved this story but I wish in the future there will be a situation where dadi and dp realize their mistakes how wrong they are in behaving so badly with their kids actually I want all elders to realize their mistake

In the first part I can't understand why they behave so badly with swasan I mean I know that was about swasan relation and they can't tolerate when things did not happen according to their wish but I don't understand why dp and dadi can't understand that swasan are married whatever hpns between them it is their personal matter they should not interfere between them and instead of giving them their space they started beating them😲 OK I understand they want them to be happy but khushia kya mar mar kar pit pit kar khun nikal nikalkar dilwayage I love how swasan did not told anything they have the sense that it is their personal matter which the elders didn't. the elders behaviour was creepy inhuman criminal against the morals and even against common sense ab suhagraat kya mar mar k karwayge I want punishment for them I really want them to feel really guilty about their behaviour
And I think instead of showing no reason why swasan turned out to be like this it will be very good if you show that dp and dadis behaviour is the reason why swasan turned out like this
Because it is a very simple and known matter of psychology that if parents are too rude with kids if they beats them without any reason the kids become stubborn they start doing the opposit of what parents told them to do and then a situation comes when the beatings don't have any effect on them they kept doing what they are doing


I hope I didn't hurt or offend you in any way but I really wanted to tell all this


Buddy thansk for asking the questions
Well the actions of dp and dadi are never justified
They have behaved real rude n bad with their kids
Swasan required time n space
Which dp n dadi did not give them.
Aur it's true u cannot force this or any relationship on anyone
But the cause of beating the kids was their silence which clearly indicated their rebellion to the family n rejection to eachother
Swasan belived in actions speak louder than words
Hence when the families might have thought to break the relationship sanskaar n swara just supported eachother n surprised them...
Offcourse ur suggestion of this rude behavior being the cause if swasan stubbornness is very natural and already taken
May be the events towards the end of the story will make elders realise their mistakes

But before this dp n dadi need to know that due to them swasan have turned into drunkards n smokers the truth which is unknown to them

This might hurt the elders deeply when they will come to know the truth of their lives.. the hidden truth which is dark

Dadi n dp are thinking that they r tmr8 in being Strict and beating their children because for them it seems that swasan are good boy n good girl but they are unaware of ttheir realities

These shocking truths will definately force them to change their views... And actions

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