Messed up....Swasan story. Part 11,12,13,14 pg17 no PMs Completed - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Harshita kamaal ka chapter hai. The whole sis bro bond is so emotional. Loved the part where swara was barsaoing thapads on rajat. Continue soon. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Superb👏 what a slap by swara to that disgusting rajat. Just luv the update n thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
awesome update.
continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Harshi!!!!😊
So awesome!!!👏 Swara cut her hand??😲 That part was very emotional!!😭 Loved SanRagLak's care for her.😃 Rajat and his mom!!!!😡 Eeeuuuwww!!🤢 Finally Swara was granted divorce.😉 And her slap to Rajat!😆😛 Loved it.😉 Update soon. Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Superb update
loved swalak bond & finally swara show true place to rajat
loved it ...
cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Harshu...
Powerfull update...emotional at start...but i loved how swara slapped rajat after divorse...i felt proud...lucky ..ragini n sansku supported her in difficult time..n given her much needed boost..loved their bonding...now waiting for swasan track ..from friends to more than friends...waiting...

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally Swara is free from that jerk..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Dear Harshita ,

First of i am so sorry for not being able to read all of your works ,And i am very thankful for the PM..Do keep sending it to me .. I promise to catch up with them asap...Just like how i caught up with messed up today..


I started from chapter one till chapter 7.. The story was interesting from the start till now, i really loved it dear. First when you made Swara marry Rajat i was like he might be a good guy that why you didnt name him sahil ..Boy i was wrong..I so hate that idiot ..How dare he make Swara suffer like that..



I am so happy she finally got her divorce and love the concept of lakhsya being an supportive brother and Ragini being Lucky GF.. I hope Sanskar was able to make Swara forget those horrible moments..


Also harshida dear, i know Swara has a big heart but dont let her forgive her mother.. She was so cruel..Damad this ,damad that.. I so hate her more than Rajat now..



I really liked this story, hope to catch up with your others asap..


Love

Nita



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NitaReid

Dear Harshita ,

First of i am so sorry for not being able to read all of your works ,And i am very thankful for the PM..Do keep sending it to me .. I promise to catch up with them asap...Just like how i caught up with messed up today..


I started from chapter one till chapter 7.. The story was interesting from the start till now, i really loved it dear. First when you made Swara marry Rajat i was like he might be a good guy that why you didnt name him sahil ..Boy i was wrong..I so hate that idiot ..How dare he make Swara suffer like that..



I am so happy she finally got her divorce and love the concept of lakhsya being an supportive brother and Ragini being Lucky GF.. I hope Sanskar was able to make Swara forget those horrible moments..


Also harshida dear, i know Swara has a big heart but dont let her forgive her mother.. She was so cruel..Damad this ,damad that.. I so hate her more than Rajat now..



I really liked this story, hope to catch up with your others asap..


Love

Nita



Ty Neeta for reading
Glad u liked it

Yes I also agree that swara should never forgive her parents for making her suffer
Also they aren't tahe once who will care for her.. so most of their role is up
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Posted: 8 years ago
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.Messed up A1
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Hi all Harshita here this story has been on a halt for sometime.. well I am back after a break.. I decided to break the story into some Acts ..
With the end of the first 7 parts we end act one.. so here is a summary of it..
I am ready with part 8 ie. Act 2
I have named Act -1 as ~The Great Mess~
The name of the next act will be released after words...
So here is the summary for those who missed it...

~Summary~
Swara n sanskaar are two best friends who met at College their first meeting was on road when swara's BMU hit this guy walking on the road. Sanskaar wanted to shout n get mad on the person but seeing a girl he kept calm. Swasan met again when Sanskaar's friend was scolding him n giving him first aid... Swara saw it felt sorry n then they became Friends.
Time passed n slowly they became best friends n then unknowingly Sanskaar crossed the fine line between/w friendship n love. He fell for her. He confessed his feelings but then swara asked him she doesn't want anything like that , but doesn't even want their friendship to be broken. They both decided that they will stay like friends.
Swara reached home n there found out that her marriage is being fixed with Rajat Kapoor. She was confused, marrying Rajat who was a big business man in Mumbai . She then went to her mother like any daughter. She disclosed her feelings n told about Sanskaar n her. She confessed that she isn't sure about Sanskaar n also this was too early to marry. But poor girl approached the wrong person. Her mother filled her vulnerable mind with all the crap. She made her understand that love is just a mere attraction n sanskaar moreover was a middle class boy who will turn her into a housemaid after her marriage. N Rajat was a person who was well established n could give her a luxurious life. Even when she wasn't fully convenienced but she agreed to marry Rajat. After all what a 19 years old could do accept for trusting her parents.
One man who wasn't happy with this marriage was Laksh Boss, her brother. His questions on this marriage were surprised by his parents.
After his love confession sanskaar meets swara when she hands over him her marriage card. He was heartbroken. But didn't questioned her decision n decided to move on.
Also Rajat proposed swara n kept her parents happy with his behavior n gifts.
Swara feels happy for trusting her parents but all her misconceptions were cleared on the first n8 of their marriage. She wanted to talk to him, she wasn't ready for a physical relationship but Rajat forced her into it. She tried to forgive him ,he apologized to her for his behavior last night but the next moment showed that he was a cruel animal. He forced her again.
Never the less was his mother who scolded swara for small things n Rajat who used to beat her like animals. She defended her self but in vain. She was far away from her family in Mumbai n could not just go back like that. She waited for him to change, but he didn't. He forced her slapped her every night.
This continued for more than an year n finally after one and a half years of marriage she divorced him.
Her mother and father denied support but her brother n her lawyer Ragini (laksh's lover) supported her.
She left to Kolkata where she again met sanskaar. Their Bonding did not change even a bit. They were open to eachother like before. Sanskaar brought the smile on her face back. He tried a lot but neither he could get angry at her nor could stop loving her.
Swara's past haunts her. Rajat again n again came n tried to hurt her when laksh n sanskaar saved her. She with the help of all three mange to get hopes for living but then a thought entered her mind that along with her decisions n her messed up life she is messing everyone's life hence she tries committing suicide.
Fortunately Laksh n sanskaar save him. They all scold her for her cowardly step but then soon forgive her.
After some days the date for final judgement comes.. Raglak come with swara. She is ready to face Rajat n his mom . They arrive . Rajat stares at her making her feel uncomfortable and his mother badly taunts her. Laksh protested this behaviour swara glared back at her mother in law when Rajat suddenly slapped her for this. In return Laksh defends swara creating a scene over there.
All the people stop them n judge scolds for the behaviour. Later swara denies for.alimony n finally divorce is granted.
She by chance hears Rajat's phone convo which reveals that he had an affair before getting divorced from swara. From last 10 months he was in a relationship with some other girl.
Swara hardly bothered about it. But then she got up n followed Rajat out of the court . When he saw her she moved to him n slapped him uncomfortable times untill she was stopped by her brother n ragini.

This marks an end to the Act -1. Now an Intro to Act 2
~Act 2~
Unlike Act One where it is about creation n removal of mess. This act is about Swasan their developing feelings n union. But will the things go so smooth. Will everyone n society accept this relationship. Will the world support them. Will they let these two unit . Let's see...

Loads of love
Harshita



Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago

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