Messed up....Swasan story. Part 11,12,13,14 pg17 no PMs Completed

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Res. me first 😳
Unres

Harshita,
This is amazing dear. Sanskar's pov in the begining was really emotional. He truly loves swara. Aww sanskar lifting swara . Laksh is a bit possessive of swara as a brother, I think. Even the raglak scene was 😳. Why the hell do their parents have problem with raglak 😡. Last raglak scene was so hawwt. Waiting for swasan's mutual love confession. Plz don't discontinue it dear. U can ur own time but plz do update it. Can't lose such an amazing writer.
Love u loads
Nivi

Hi nivi thanks for your soothing words idk how much true it is but continuation of a story depends upon response which is exceptionally low on this ff since beginning

I can't waste my time for this n force others to waste their

Thanks once again for the comment thanks for taking time n going through my crap n leaving a reply

Loads of love

Tons of thanks

Harshita

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Never say like that harshita. U are seriously an amazing writer and ur works are really fantastic. Never say its crap because it is not. Dont lose heart dear. And there is no thanks and sorry between friends, right. So now give me a 🤗.

Love u loads and ur works too

Nivi

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Never say like that harshita. U are seriously an amazing writer and ur works are really fantastic. Never say its crap because it is not. Dont lose heart dear. And there is no thanks and sorry between friends, right. So now give me a 🤗.
Love u loads and ur works too
Nivi

Nivi what should I say u see no comments leads to heart break n deprivation if u want I can actually pm u the parts but I don't want to post here n gather fake hopes for any replies.

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#94

If u want to pm me. I am absolutely fine with it. But take this story till the end. I love it very much. Don't end it so soon. I love u and ur works so much. Don't be depressed. Just enjoy writing. This is such a wonderful boon bestowed upon u by the god. So never underestimate it.

Love u loads

Nivi

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#95

HArshu...

What the hell...why are you discontinuing...im angry...

Im reading this story n enjoying too...just got little busy..could not comment...but i does not mean u end it...im very angry..

Coming to update...it was very nice.felt you were rushing the story...though swasan were there...raglak empowered..liked their part...romance too...their struggle ...even swara got job...was just waitingfor swasan confession..but you suddenly thought to end it...im sad...but its your ff u have every right...what canwe say.just...tc

Talia

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: krishuuu
HArshu...
What the hell...why are you discontinuing...im angry...

Im reading this story n enjoying too...just got little busy..could not comment...but i does not mean u end it...im very angry..

Coming to update...it was very nice.felt you were rushing the story...though swasan were there...raglak empowered..liked their part...romance too...their struggle ...even swara got job...was just waitingfor swasan confession..but you suddenly thought to end it...im sad...but its your ff u have every right...what canwe say.just...tc

Talia

It's absolutely fine Talia I can understand u were buy might not be able to reply.

Thanks for taking time,going through the update and sharing ur views.

Well u see i have only two options either to end the story or to rush n end it.

For one update it takes around 3-4 hrs. N number of readers is less than this so u say y should I continue. Btw if u want I can pm u the update but I won't post any update on. This thread from now on.

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Hi Harshita dear,

I am sorry because i cant say i was very regular with comments or feedbacks ..But i do love this story of yours and was really waiting to read more of it, while i do have last two updates to read yet..But that most likely for most of the stories..I have a backlog of updates i have to catch up on and messed up was one among them i was eager to read ..

..So the discontinuation tag kind of made me bit sad.. I know the hours that go through in an update and when you feel the feedback is low i get you might become upset about it ..I get you dear.. It just that though i am not a loyal reader who took time to let the writer know about how much i liked the update..Atleast i just want to let you know i really liked this SS ..I hope it not too late and you change your mind and continue writing it but at the end of the day it your choice and i respect it ..

With Love

Nita

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Res for part 9 Harshi. 😳
I'm so sorry dear, I was out of town during Durga Puja vacation, so couldn't read it. 😭
And plzz don't stop this story. 😭
Finally unresed Harshi dearest. 😃
Awww! SwaSan part was so cuteee!! Swara sleeping by keeping her head on Sanskar's shoulder. 😃 Bechara got scared when he saw that RagLak have seen him carrying sleeping beauty Swara to her room and their questions. 😆 Felt bad for RagLak. Swara-Laksh's parents r such a creep! 😡 🤢 SwaSan moments at 'Swami' was awesome! Finally Swara got a job! Yaayy!! 😃 Sanskar loves her but Swara still thinks him as her best friend. 😭 Hope she falls in love with him soon. 😉 RagLak part was so hot!!! waiting for SwaSan confession. 😉 And plzz don't discontinue this story plzzz!!!!! 😭 Update soon plzzz. 😳 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago