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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Messed up

Part 8

Swara POV-

An year have passed.. peace is what is back in my life...

I am very much out of his torture .. the torture rajat gave me .. his beatings ... He forcing me... My eyes again formed moisture.. just a memory of that man n I feel like hell. ... I wrapped my arms around myself tightly when I remembered about lakh Bhai... He won't be happy to see me like This n Rajat is not a man to waste tears upon... I wipped them off n drank water when my phone ringed... It was sanskaar... My lips curled into a smile..

Sw- hello sanskaar

Sa- ji swara ji

Sw- aaj kya hua h...

Sa- swara ji kal aapka interview h toh humne socha aapko yaad diladien ki bina Raye dhiye sojayega..

My face fell he always knew that I was crying or laughing...

Tears .. not because of Rajat but because of sanskaar... He the person whom a hurted badly n worstly he didn't even need to exchange words to know weather I am crying or laughing...

Sa- oh hello swara .. kya hua re. Y u fell silent. .

Sw-(choked voice)- kuch nahi

Sa-hmm... Okay

N just then I heard my gate knocking .

Sw-Sanskaar. . woh gate p koi h .. ek minute hold karna..

Sa- ji swara ji

Sw- shut up n stop calling me that..

I opened it door n found him...

I smiled in b/w tears... He didn't remove the phone from his ears n so did I kept it there...

Sa- Han swara tumhare guest ko andar nahi bulaogi..

Sw- nah.. not interested..

Sa- oh..

I disconnected the call..

SW-(wiping tears+ Wet voice)- kya hua ..

Sa- (entering inside)- that toh u tell me y r u crying

Sw- nothing ...

Sa- okay so u won't tell Na...

Sw-(avoiding eye contact )- nahi... Kuch hua hi nahi

Sa- chalo

Sw- kanhan...

He didn't say anything took the lock dragged me out n locked the door ...

Sa- yeh lo keep the keys .

Sw- mera bag room mein h..

Sa- oh ..

Sw- yes...

Sa- then okay..

He kept the keys with him n dragged me to his car..

Sw- Sanskaar.. yr Dheere chalo...

Sa- uff swara u r an oldy n not me...

Sw- shut up...

Sa- Chalo...

Sw- uff...

He opned the door of his car... N made me sit...

He entered from the other side...

Yes his car some 11 months back he got a job.. it had a really high starting

I am so happy for him... I still remember his happiness when he informed me...

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3rd person pov..

Sanskaar was very very happy when he recivedhis appointment letter... He an in to his parents... N then immediately called swara...

Sa- swara..

Sw-(smiling)- bolo sanskaar y so happy ...

Sa- swara I got job..

Sw- what really

Sa- yes shona...

Sw-omg omg I am so happy for u ..Wait wait let's celebrate... Party toh banti h ...

Sa- sure Chalo aaj sham ko 6 baje ...

Sw- sure ..par mujhe Na puchka n ice cream party chahiye...

Sa- sure swara... But pls make ur Epic rasgullas for me.. I love them..

Sw- okay... Now I am going to make them...

Sa- yes I cannot wait...

Sw- me too...

Fb ends------

I smiled remembering my moments..

Sanskaar stopped the car..

Sw- Sanskaar yeh kanhan laye ho..

Sa- chalo...

(Ye kaisi jagah le aaye ho tum

Ye kaisi nayi dil gaaye hai dhun

Main Meera si deewani ho gayi

Iss duniya se begaani ho gayi)

He came to my side ..N opened the door ...

I came out n saw..we were on the banks of river... It was green. .. water was slowly flowing.. he held my hand n took closer to the water body... We sat on the bank... It was so peaceful...

Sa- kesa laga...

Sw-(watery eyes)- bahut acha...

He kept his hand on my shoulder... Like he used to do earlier...

N rested my head on his shoulder like I used to earlier ..

(Mere honthon pe jo bhatke

Kayi janmon ki pyaas hai

Mere amrit ka wo pyala bas tere paas hai

Ye kaisi jagah le aaye ho tum

Ye kaisi nayi dil gaaye hai dhunn)

It seemed I had forgotten to smile ... But now I feel happy n calm Everytime I meet him... He is slowly becoming the reason I smile .. the reason ... I have learnt to live again...

The slowly flowing winds touched my face... My hair again n again flew n covered my face... He tug them behind my ear...

(Raat meri aankhon aankhon me kat gayi

Roshni mein teri subah si ho gayi

Raat mere aankhon aankhon me kat gayi

Roshni mein teri subah si ho gayi

Chehra hoo main, mera roop ho tum

Ye kaisi jagah le aaye ho tum)

I Lifted my eyes ...to see him... He was looking at me... I was confused ...I waved my hand n broke his trance...

His blinked his eyes n suddenly shaked his body .. I laughed at his reaction... He too smiled...

Sa- has kyun rahi ho..

Sw- Na hasun...

Sa- nahi hadti raho... U look very ugly when u cry...

Sw- thanks... (But then I realised what he said) kya...what u said...

Sa- ki u look beautiful when u laugh...

Sw- no no usse pehle...

Sa- u look very cute when u r angry...

I jerked his hand... N started hitting him.

Sw- abhi batati hoon... U jerk... What did u say I look ugky when I cry...

Sa- Han ji...

Sw- shut up...

I was hitting him when he shouted ..

Sa- aaah...

Sw- Sanskaar ... R u okay ..

N I started checking his ... Hands where it could have been hurt...

He was looking at me giving a side smile...I got it he is a prank master...

He played it again...

(Aaj uss Khuda se mujhe kuch na chahiye

Sirf tere aage sar jhukna chahiye

Aaj uss Khuda se mujhe kuch na chahiye

Sirf tere aage sar jhukna chahiye

Meri har duaa mein ho tum hi tum

Ye kaisi jagah le aaye ho tum)

I turned my face away...

Sa- sorry baba..

Sw- get lost...

He did not respond for a few seconds...

I turned to see if he really left.

He was still there looking at...me..

Sa- sorry...

Sw- u know I was scared..N I again rested my head on his shoulder... I again smiled... He smiled back...

N I didn't knew when in the beautiful peaceful surroundings sleep embraced me...

Sanskaar POV-

Swara she looked angelic while sleeping... I saw her face lit with oale silvery moonlight... I Lifted moved closer... I checked she was sleeping...

I moved closer...N pecked her forehead...

I don't know weather I have the r8 or not... But still I pecked her forehead...

I caressed her face...

There is a limit beyond which feelings Can't be controlled... Love can't be hidden..

U love me or not swara I love you.. yes I still do.. n will keep loving you untill my last breath .. no matter u respond back or not ... Nut I promise swara I won't force my love on u... I love you enough to let u go... Agar mera pyar Sacha hoga.. toh u will back we will definitely meet ... I am just giving you time... I know u need loads of it... To come out ... Out of the trauma...

To heal the scars completely ...

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Awsome update
loved it

thnks for pm

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Awesome update dear.. Loved it.. Can't wait to read the next update..

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Res for part 8.😳
Unresed.😃
Hey Harshi,😃
The act 1 and act 2 decision is nice.👏
Act 1 summery was good.😊
Now coming to act 2 part 8, the update was so light hearted and heart touching one.😳 Hope that Sanskar pulls out Swara from her past and also Swara falls in love with him in the process so that Sanskar also gets all the love he deserves.😃😉 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Harshu...

Amazing update...

Summary was good to read...again...liked how you divided the part...Act 1 n Act 2...changed title to messedup then healed..it will suit more...

Coming to Act 2...enjoyed reading it...looking forward to lot of swasan moments...these small n cute teasing moments i cherished loads. Swasan are close so much..want swara to realize soon...waiting for next

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Harshu...
Amazing update...

Summary was good to read...again...liked how you divided the part...Act 1 n Act 2...changed title to messedup then healed..it will suit more...

Coming to Act 2...enjoyed reading it...looking forward to lot of swasan moments...these small n cute teasing moments i cherished loads. Swasan are close so much..want swara to realize soon...waiting for next

Nice suggestion

Talia

Will edit it soon

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Messed Up

Part 9

A/N- Hi all Harshita here sorry for the delay. Pls do respond to the update. I feel like halting or discontinuing the story due to low response. Pls do take two minutes to read n share ur views.

Sanskaar POV-

She slept on my shoulder. Tommorow is her interview n I want to see her succeed. Hope she gets this job. I moved closer n pecked her forehead. Idk if I can do that or not but swara I really love u n want u to succeed. I want to see u fly high make money. I want u to be independent n thousand times more successful than me. If I succeeded in that then I will think my love is completed. I don't want to force u to accept my love. Be who u r swara fly high. N remember if u will ever tremble I am there for u. I won't let u fall down.

I Lifted her up. N placed her on the seat of my car tied the seat belt. She seems to be in a deep sleep. Ahh this peace on her face, it was missing, this much needed deep sleep it was far away from her eyes. But finally I can see her get her peace of mind n that's the best.

I turned to my side of the seat n in a few minutes we were at her place. I again lifted her slowly n turned around. I started to move in side the main gate when I saw laksh Bhai. Okay it was quite embarrassing. But what was he going here at this hour n along with Ragini. I looked at them perplexed n so they glared me. Idk how to react when Bhai moved to me n moved his hand in incomplete circles indicating that he wants keys I turned a bit n shifted my gaze to my pockets. He took them.

I went to her bedroom n Bhai followed there were 100s of questions in our minds but we kept silent, afterall how can we woke up the gem of our eyes in b/w her sleep. I placed her on the bed Ragini adjusted her conforter. I turned to Bhai , my eyes drilled holes on the floor. He moved to her caressed her hair with moist eyes. He pecked her forehead.

We moved out n broke the silence.

Sa- Bhai woh

L- what ? Han. What was that ?

Sa- Bhai swara had an interview so I thought to calm her down ... N...

L- and what

I narrated how she slept n all the stuff. Phew it was tough.

Sa- Bhai if u don't mind can I ask u one question

L- hm..

Sanskaar - how come u n Ragini here ? I mean ...

L- we r thrown out sanskaar.

I was shocked for a second n lifted my eyes. I could see his eyes moist. Helplessness dripped from it. His eyes had pain.

Sa- what ... Came an instant replay .. I mean how. N y.

I could see him breaking down. His state was that of a hurt broken man. I made him n Ragini sit on the sofa.

Sa- now say it..

He opened his mouth to speak but couldn't . He felt chocked .

I brought some water. He slowly sipped it. I stayed silent. Ragini she was standing still her face only reflected the pain she felt seeing Laksh Bhai in this state. I felt more confused but chose to stay silent untill laksh Bhai gets composed n pulls me out of this mist of confusion.

Oh yes the slow intuition of my heart was correct. Uncle n aunty refused to accept Ragini, they can't accept the girl who broke their daughter's home. Laksh Bhai when could not explain them more Left his home n money. He was himself not sure about how n what to do but Ragini assured him she will manage the things.

Hope so all gets fine. They had hotel bookings n I dropped them. Bhai didn't want swara to know about all this mess before her interview atleast.

2 Months Later

I sat in my cubical when my phone Buzzed.

I picked it up

Phone convo-

Sa- hello

Sw- Mr Maheshwari I want to tell u something

Sa- ji miss Bose say it

Sw- not like this come to Swami at ur lunch don't be late

Sa- y

Sw- shut up just be there ..

Sa- okay.

I kept it back . N Continued to glnce at my screen. Swami don't be confused its a humble restaurant for the working class like us. I am egar to know what she wants to tell.

Hmm well laksh Bhai n ragini have walked in together. Marriage they are still trying to convince laksh Bhai's parents. N Ragini's dad who refused to accept laksh Bhai until he gets settled again. Ughh.. they r now in a mess. Laksh Bhai is struggling for a start up but u know he is too good at this. He is getting success slowly n steadily.

2:30 pm

It's lunch . I asap packed my stuff n rushed my bike to "Swami" there swara was waiting for me.

I ran to her.

Sa- so what's up

Sw- so Mr Maheshwari I am going tell a few things listen carefully.

Sa- ji Madam.

Sw- okay so I have ordered Masala dosa for us. N u have to pay for it.

Sa- ji Han

Sw- n yes along with ice cream.

Sa- I will pay for that as well but ..

Sw- n Mr Maheshwari record the amount I will pay u back the next month

Sa- but y

Sw- because this is a treat to my best friend from my side for.

Sa- for.

Sw- I got a job yarr.

Sa- omg I knew you will get it.

Sw- thanks sanskaar for being there when I needed u the most.

Sa- I am always there for u swara. But did u tell Bhai.

Sw- no not yet Bhai n Bhabhi would be busy. U know an almost start up is tough to handle..

Sa- yeah I can understand. N when my buddy is joining

Sw- next week.

Sa- that's great wish u loads of success.

Sw- I am just an intern.

Sa- it's k things will be settled soon.

Sunday @ RagLak apartment

Ragini POV-

I slowly opened my eyes. Just to Burry myself more into the bed. Hmm my bare body is covered by the comforter. I could see my clothes lieing on the floor. I turned to the other side. My hand sreached for Laksh.i could'nt find him. I turned to see him on the couch all engrossed in his laptop.

"Laksh " I called him in a sleepy yet irritated voice ...

L- bolo Ragini. He replied still glued to that idiot lappy.

Eghh.. hat u lappy. I Murmured.

R- Mr Bose I think someone promised no work this Sunday to his gf n sister as well.

L- I remember yrr..

R- then.

I took his shirt n wore it .

I moved to him.n shut his lovely laptop.

L- pls ragini two minutes.

R- oho.. Mr Bose see ur eyes they r red n tell me since when r u dating with this laptop. N no lies..

I asked with narrowed eyes.

He exhaled n replied.

L- since 3.

R- now go n get me a coffee.

L- Jo Hukum.

R- yeah that's ur punishment.

He smiled woke up n went to the kitchen.

Just 10 minutes n here he is with two cups of sizzling coffee.

I sipped some from my mug.

R- so laksh what u think about swara n sanskaar.

L- idk ragini . I think it's much more than being just friends atleast from his side.

R- n swara

L- not clear yet.

R-did you talk to her.

L- nope dear.i want her to be independent first. Let her search her own self n then I will talk to her.

R- the. Talk to sanskaar atleast.

L- let's see.

I pecked his lips. N kept the cups on the drawers next to our bed.

He pulled me.

R- what n not again.

L- y don't u like it.

R- but it's mrng.

L- sh.. it hardly matters.

He rolled over me. I closed my eyes. Soon our room filled with our pleasure filled moans.

We made love.

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Res. me first 😳

Unres

Harshita,

This is amazing dear. Sanskar's pov in the begining was really emotional. He truly loves swara. Aww sanskar lifting swara . Laksh is a bit possessive of swara as a brother, I think. Even the raglak scene was 😳. Why the hell do their parents have problem with raglak 😡. Last raglak scene was so hawwt. Waiting for swasan's mutual love confession. Plz don't discontinue it dear. U can ur own time but plz do update it. Can't lose such an amazing writer.

Love u loads

Nivi

Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago