Messed up....Swasan story. Part 11,12,13,14 pg17 no PMs Completed - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Messed up
Part-5
Sanskaar woke up from his place n moved to his place... His heart was heavy seeing his swara like that... Seeing his swara crying ..
He entered his home Sujata welcomed him.. n asked to sit for the dinner...He denied..
Su-sanskaar come have dinner..
Sa-no mom. Not hungry.
RP-kya hua baccha...
Sa-nothing dad...
RP- koi Na sujata .. he is 60 years now not young like me.. let him sleep he can't disgust anything...
Sa-dad...
RP-toh kuch khale warna I will call u old... Come come...
Sa- uff.. coming just a call..
RP- don't talk me then..
Sa-dad..
RP-Sanskaar...
Sa-uff... Eggh.. Coming.
He half heartedly had his dinner... N soon after that called laksh..
Sa-hello laksh Bhai..
L-haan Sanskaar..
Sa-swara ne kuch khaya kya..
L- nahi don't worry I will feed her soon...
Sa- Bhai can I come..
L- no sanskaar it's okay...
Sa-plsss...
L-humm.. okay ..
Sa-acha have u cooked anything...
L- umm...no ... Idk how to.. actually waiting for her to instruct me..
Sa-no worries Bhai.. I am coming u both rest...

Sanskaar disconnected the call..
Sa- mom ... I need ur help..
Su-what sanskaar say...
Sa- mom actually u know Na swara...
Su-yes that best Friend .
RP-Na re sujju .. sanku ki gf.. r8...
Sa-dad...
Sanskaar then disclosed all about her n requested sujata to help him cook...
Su- oh god how can someone be soo inhuman..
Sa-idk mom... But she isn't in a good condition..
RP- don't worry son .. she will get better soon...
Sanskaar hugged ram...
Sa-pakka dad...
RP-100%..my sanky is with his gf aka bff then how will she not recover... Wese u want her sleep hungry...
Sa-nope..
RP-go help sujju darling..
Su-aap bhi Na...
RP- ohgod iss ghar mein Na only I am the young n handsome..20 years... Old ram ki 80 year old wife aur 100 year old son...
Su- oho.. sanskaar ask ur dad to wake up his wife is just 16..
Sa-yes.. 21 years sanskaar ke sweet 16 parents.. superb h Bhai..challo..ab help me..
Sujata helped him make masala rice... A quick recipe..
N sanskaar reached swara's place...
@swara's place...
Sa-Bhai how is she...
L- hmm... Better but she is sleeping.. n again n again getting some sort of nightmares or so...
Sa- Bhai I will be there..U take ur dinner..here are masala rice..
L- thanks sanskaar...
Sanskaar smiled n went n sat at laksh's place. Taking her head in his lap...
Laksh was quite hungry since afternoon .. he started eating rice...
Sanskaar was caressing her hair.. when she again shivered...
Sw- no..nah . ..no... Ra..rajat.. no.. don't..coem close to me... Nooo... ...no...
She sobbed...
Laksh left his spoon n rubbed her feet..N sanskaar her hands...
Sa-hey swara... Nothing will happen ... Swara...
L-swara Babu... Na.. see me ur Bhai is here...Pls calm down ... Babu...
Sw- save me...Bhai... Sanskaar...help..me..
Sanlak-swara we r here..
Swara coughed in here sleep.. n cried... N sobbed..
N then calmed down...
Laksh stood up n sat back on his chair.. he kept his hand on his eyes... He was trying hard not to cry but couldn't help it...
Sanskaar noticed it n felt sorry for that he moved towards him..
Sa-bhaiya..
L-sanskaar it all happened Because if me ... I should not have let my swara marry that man... She is suffering... N it's all because of me...

Sanskaar was about say something when a Girlish voice- cut him..
Sa-bhaiya y r u thinking like this...it's not ur fal...
R- laksh ...
L-ragini..
R- y u again started.
She ran n wiped his tears n made him Drink water..
L- sorry ragini woh..
R- I won't talk to you if u do this again...
Sa- sorry to ask Bhai but..
L- aah.. she is Ragini .. Swara's lawyer..
Sa-n urs..
L- (smiled a little)- my friend..
Sa-(raising his eye brow)- only friend..
L- (holding his ear)- girl friend..now okay..
Sa-aaaooo... Haan okay...
They laughed n ragini fed laksh...
Sanskaar sat near swara...
Swara gained conscious..
Sw-Bhai..
Raglak get up rags stop feeding him..
Laksh ran to her n hugged her she too responded... N pecked her forehead...
L-r u okay ...
Sw - Bhai please save me . .. Bhai .. pls...
L-I am here swara.. shh...
Swara soon broke the hug ... N drank the water .. her hands were shaking...
Laksh - hey Shona how much will u cry more .. see sanskaar has come... Sw-Ra lifted her head n saw sanskaar...
He took out a chocolate from his pocket n forwarded it to swara.. she smiled...
Sa- now u want to eat or Lego u cry me laksh Bhai n ragini will eat it...
Sw-no mujhe bhi khana h. .
Sa-nope pehle stop crying ...
Sw- okay n wipes her tears..
R-aww swara u love chocolates so much..
Sw-chocolate k liye kuch bhi...
Sanskaar forwarded it to her..N she started munching it..

Sa- acha swara what u think how old I am...
Sw-umm 21...
Sa-r8..
Sw-but y r u asking me..
Sa- a actually my dad keeps on Calling me a 60 year old man..
SSwara giggles..
Sw- u 60 years..
Sa- yes...
Sw- u r so cute sanskaar... Acha so how can I help u..
Sa-come with me on a mrng walk.. I don't like going alone.. but if my bff will come along then I will surely prove him wrong..
Sw-okay done .toh kal mrng...
Sa-yes... Wese r u hungry

She nodded in a yes...
Sa-okay how about masala rice..
Sw-sujata aunty wale...
Sa- hm..
Sw- wow..yes..
Sanskaar handed over swara a plate of masala rice...
Sa- kese Lage..
Sw- hamesha jese fantastic...

An hour later..
Sanskaar was back home..
When he herd ram talking..
Ram-sujju..
Su-ji...
Ram- ur lips still taste very good..
Su- shut up .. u r still tastings my lips... Don't u feel it's now it has been enough of ur romance..
Ram- nope..baby I am still 16.. n u r 20...
Su- but where is sanskaar..
Ram- Aree he is 60 yrs old he needs time to walk back.. iss Umar mein esa hota h...
Sujata passed him an angry galre...
Ram- what... Okay I got it u want me to romance more... Let me kiss u again...
Ram strts moving close to her... When sanskaar smirks..
Sa- oh...god.. chiii...
He shouted... Sujata opned her eyes.. n pushed ram with a jerk...
Ram- u moron..
Sa-love being that... Wese u continue... N I wanted to say ki am back.. n gn...
He winked n went in...
Next mrng-.
Ram reached the park n was having a walk when he was shocked to see sanskaar... jogging along with Swara n ragini... N laughing n enjoying in b/w... The breaks...
Ram-Oh so he is trying to be me..great...
Ram- sanskaar uncle...
He shouted.. n sanskaar's face turned pale...
Ram comes running..
Ram- peri pauna.. sanskaar uncle .Hi beautiful ladies..
Sa- swara ragini meet him he is my dad...
Sw- gm uncle..
Ram- no call me ram.. uncle k copyrights are reserved by sanskaar...
Sanskaar rolled his eyes..
Sw- hmm.. then can I call u buddy..
Ram- sure...
Sa- (slowly to ram) can u pls stop flerting with them... They are married ... N committed...
Ram- it's k..I am also married..(replied in a low tone to sanskaar)
N takes swaragini with him.. taking sanskaar's place n talking n laughing with them... leaving sanskaar shocked...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
He hehehe 🤣 ram is very funny n calling sanskaar uncle🤣 love the update harshita n thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Hey Harshi,🤗
Superb update!!!👏
Loved SanRamTa's bonding so much!!!! So sweet!!!😃
Ram calls Sanskar 60 years old uncle!!!🤣
Even loved SanLak's bonding and care for Swara.😃
Poor Swara. Still having those nightmares!!😭
Ram is very funny!!😆
Ragini's entry and RagLak moments.😊
Sanskar teasing Laksh!😉
Swara is so cute!!!😳
Even Ragini cares for Swara.😃
Loving SwaSan and RagLak so much!!!😃😃
RamTa's naughty, romantic moments!!😉 (Iss umar mein bhi...☺️)
Sanskar's mrng walk with Swara and Ragini.😳
And the last part was so hilarious!!!😆
Ram rocks, Sanskar shocked!!!!🤣😉
Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
This was fabulous.i loved ram to the core.. his romance and firlt are awesome.. Harshita...
Hope Swara soon realise her feelings for him...

Update soon..

With love..

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
superb update
loved it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
I just love Ram..
He is sooo good
Uncle Sanskar
Hahaha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Harshita what can I say about the chapter. As usual mind blowing. Loved this cute nok jhok of sanskar and ram. Love u for the pm.
Nivi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Loved sanskaar cool mom and dad...
Whole chapter was amazing specially the last one ram take swaragini and sanskar shocked...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Harshita dear..😃

Fantastic update...loved it how sanlak handled swara..n ragini also came to help her...nice😳..sansku is love...his bonding with his parents is amazing ..his teasing was too funny...ram uncle was at his best...enjoyedhis character ..cool. funny...full of life...waiting for next...👏

Talia😊
Edited by krishuuuuuuuuuu - 9 years ago

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