Messed up....Swasan story. Part 11,12,13,14 pg17 no PMs Completed - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Really nice harshita.
I loved this part.
Ram &sujata are fun loving &caring parents.
Maja a gaya.
Sorry for late review but update is very good.
Waiting for another beautiful update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Messed up
Part6
Sanskaar saw her.. she was laughing again.. he felt happy..
This became a routine now.. sanskaar used to take swara for mrng evening jogs n their ram n swara used to talk for long... N he used to admire her... She was recovering under this slowly.. these few days have been really good for her
2 days before the last hearing..
Swara was alone at Home ... Sanskaar went to pic laksh from the station.. she was happy about it n waiting for her brother.. she was lost in her own world of thoughts .. she was thinking about her meeting with sanskaar ... N their masti she was happy to meet him back... Her only bff ... She was smiling when she herd a rough bang on her door...
Sw-(in mind)- who is this banging the door as if he wants to break it ..
Swara POV-
I went their n slightly opened the door... N was shocked to see the person it was... R..Rajat... I immediately pushed the door back n tried closing it... But he kept his hand in b/w he was much stronger than me he pushed the door open n I fell on the ground in a thud... "Aah.." I shouted...
He closed the door n cane to me... Close.. closer... N I was crawling back... I couldn't even get up I was shivering...
"What.. what do u want Rajat...??" I asked him...
"U" he said n moved closer...
I crawled back until I hit the wall... "S..stay away from me .. " I said shivering... But he came close n held my hair...
" U know 2 days are still remaining for the divorce.. n u are still my wife .." he was drunk I could sense it...
"Pls rajat leave me... Pls... " I pleaded... Bit how can a devil like hi. Have mercy on me... He slapped hard like he used to do.. my 2 months old memory was fresh again... .
He dragged me to his bed n pushed me ...He came on top of me ... N started exploring my body... I pushed him n slapped him hard...But he tore the sleeve of my kurti
"Bloody bitch" he spill poison...
"U r a rascal .. bas***d" I replied him in his own way...
This is my problem I suppose I can just hear this type of non sense about me that is y we r getting divorced..N also my mum threw me out...
He slapped me again Several times...
I was crying he started to beat me untill my energy to protest drained n the he was he pushed me n came on top of me... He Removed my duptta n threw it on the ground... He moved closer I was pushing him... pleading n Begging him to leave me ... But he grabbed my hand n started leaving open mouth kisses on my neck n shoulder... I was protesting n crying again but was out of energy...
"U know u should remember me as ur husband till u die ... Or rather accept me back... So that I leave u today... " He expressed his dirty mind...
"I won't ever do that .. I won't come back..leave me" I replied rage dripping from my eyes...
He smirked n opened the buttons of his shirt... I closed my eyes... I could only see sanskaar... I wanted him to save me... I was crying... "Leave me Rajat..." I again shouted when he bend n licked my earlobe ... I felt disgusted...
He tried pacing his lips on mine ... N I turned n he slapped me again...
"Leave meee...Bhai save me... " I shouted.. he was removing his belt when I herd the door which got banged open..I saw my Bhai ... I felt relived ..Bhai pulled him up... Sanskaar ran n covered my duptta over my neck...
I was crying .. n crying badly... I herd a sound Bhai slapped Rajat...
L- how dare u ... How dare u come here n force my sister again... Haan...
Bhai held his collar n Beated him black n blue... I encircled my arms around my own self ... I was shivering... When sanskaar kept his hand on my shoulder... I saw him..his eyes had pain... I broke down... He threw him out n approached me ... I hugged him...
L- shh... Bas bas shona .. Bhai is here babu...
I couldn't speak I didn't know when sleep embraced me...
Swara POV-ends
Sanskaar POV-
We entered n what I saw was the most horrifying site... Rajat was over swara forcing himself on her n she was begging him to leave her... I was shocked or beyond that... Before I could react I saw laksh Bhai who pulled him from her... I ran n covered her dupatta around her neck... But all could see was a fear in her mind .. n her present state was a clear reason why she wanted a divorce ... Her white kurti was torn from its sleeves n the back of it .. the kurti was torn too perhaps because of the beating.. I was numb seeing all this ... I somehow controlled my tears which were blocking my vision... I saw her shiver.. it pained my heart... I don't know what was her sin that she was being punished so Brutally for. How could I person not respect his own wife...if I could I would have killed him bit with what r8 I could have even slapped him... Al I could do was to sit beside her holding her hand n silently consoling her ...
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Laksh POV-
The bas***d again he tried to force my shona...He again did it.. in these months she was coming over his fear but not hat moron had to do this to her.. what has my sister done to him... Y she ... I knew who it could be to give him the address...the lady who state that she is the mother of my shona.. oh sorry how can I forget they disowned her now... 1st gave her the wrong advice..She in her innocence took a wrong decision n married him..She messed her own life...N now her parents my mom n dad they r hating her...
I asked sanskaar to take care of her n called her...
L- Maa.. y did u give him the address n how did u get it...
Mom- laksh u r visiting Kolkata every now n then...
L- but still how...
Mom- few ration bills n other things ... Which stated the area..
L- how did he reach here ...
Mom- laksh damad ji was really guilty he wanted to ask swara's forgiveness.. I therefore gave him the address n tell me dmkuch hua unka ... Is swara ready to go back to him...
L- mom...Pls just just shut up... Ur damad has a unique way of talking I am amazed how he talks...U know what he forced swara again...
Mom- laksh shut up... He is her husband it's his r8 ...
L-yeah correct it's his r8 to beat her n force her... N it's our duty to force our daughter n sister to stay with such an animal...
Mom- laksh be in ur limits... I know all this garbage is filled by that witch ragini ..She is filling ur mind with all these so that she can earn profit ..
L- mom... Just shut up...not a word more ...for swara or ragini...
Mom- yeah see this.. it's all because of that ragini... N yes tell that sister of urs if she wants respect in the society Na then return back to Rajat ... Their is no escape ...
I threw the phone on the ground in my rage..it was scattered into peaces... I moved out ...
Laksh POV-ends
Swara POV-
Next mrng- I woke up n found only Bhai sleeping on a chair.. sanskaar perhaps he left..
I then saw my kurti which was torn n I was reminded of last n8s incident... I broke into tears but still covered my mouth... I could see Bhai sleeping with wet lashes . .. n then sanskaar n his eyes filled with pain flashed in my brain...
I simply Moved out of my bed n again n again was thinking about these three people.. ragini n laksh Bhai they love each other but now Maa won't accept her .. I messed up my bhai's life as well..N sanskaar i hurted him a lot n now I am giving him pains n troubles..no my own life is messed up this doesn't mean that I have r8 to mess others life too.. n hence I moved to the kitchen n there I saw my bother's phone broken... perhaps another argument with maa... I sighed...I will make all the things correct i thought n then I saw what I was searching for... A knife ... I held it n slid it through my veins...aahh... It was painful but okay.. it pains less than hurting all around u... I fell on the ground in a thud... My hand shivered in pain.. blood flew out n floor turned red... I was losing conscious when Bhai held me.. he had tears in his eyes
..."sho..sho.. Shona... Yeh kya kiya tune... Y y...U did this.."..
But I wiped his tears n flashed a painful smile..
. N there I remember nothing perhaps u am dead n I am successful... My body felt heavy at that time n then darkness spread around my eyes...

Swara POV-ends


Is swara dead... Will the story end before it started.. leave ur replies
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Hey Harshi,😊
Awesome update!!👏
It was good that Swara was recovering under Sanskar's and Laksh's care.😃 But what?? Rajat again came back to haunt her!!!😲😡 Moron!!🤬 Poor Swara!!😭 What?? Sumi gave Rajat Swara's address??😲 Is she a mother??😡 What type of mother is she??😡🤢 Felt bad for SanLak too. So Sumi wont accept Ragini as her DIL?!😕😡 Oh God!! Swara cut her wrist!!!😕😲😭 I hope nothing happens to her!!😕😭 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Harshita dear...
Fantastic update...

When finally swara started recovering...rajat had to come n ruin all improvement..she had a relapse...she had caring n loving people around raglak n sanky..who can do anything for her..n whats wrong with swara parents???? Anyway climax was shocking...suicide is not solution to every problem..swara did wrong...wish every one scold her for this stupidity..waiting for next..

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Omg you just give me a major heart attack in the last ...
I liked swara and ram bonding..
But that bastered came in swara life again and ruined it again..
And our poor swara cut her hand 😭 ..
Just wished she will saved..and get well soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Hey Harshita..

This is awesome.. i loved ram... rajat ohh how can he be soo cruel.. eww.. Swara no words.. she is such a coward..
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
I am your big fan yar.
Your all story are different to each other ,&each story have some unique ness in this.
I love all your work.
Tank you for update.
Please it's a beginning of good life not a ending.
Waiting for update dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
sorry for late harsi...

Have read all 3 updates in one go n i am not in state to recollect them...it was so heavy harsi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Messed up
Part 7
Swara POV-
I opned my eyes... I could see only Sanskaar.. who was sitting on the couch.. but wait I thought I died .. but .. then I saw.. him approaching me... His eyes shot red... N he stood by side looking at me... I could sense he was angry ...
Swara POV-ends

Sanskaar POV-
I was angry ... Or hell angry upon her... Life isn't easy for anyone but ending it up is no solution... I can't forget laksh Bhai n his condition since mrng...
Fb--
Mrng 6 am
I reached her place... But then I heard laksh Bhai crying..I ran to him..
N what I saw shattered me.. swara was lying on the floor blood flew from her wrist.. n laksh Bhai was all panicked... I just tied the handkerchief on her wrist tightly n we ran to the hospital...
Laksh Bhai was crying weeping badly... He sat helplessly on a chair out side her ward room... Untill she gained conscious...
Nurse- sir u can meet the patient now... She is gaining conscious...But he refused to enter... The panic .. the worry of his face changed into angry one..
L- sanskaar ragini u go n meet her... I ain't coming...
Sa-Bhai...
R-Sanskaar u go I am coming
N I left..
Fb ends------
I kept Gazing at her..She who jsut now opened her eyes...
"What was all that .." I asked furiously
"Woh.. sanskaar woh..." She tried replying to me...
"U know what har bar stupid decisions Lena zaroori h kya.. Bhai was so worried.. he didn't drink a drop of water..it's has been hours..N he had roaming everywhere..oh this medicine okay I am getting it.. pls take care.. pls save my swara..N u ..U r here...U r ready to die... " I almost bursted on her..
She couldn't speak but her tears spoke everything... Me swara I understand everything you do .. I know y have u done this but still swara it wasn't the correct thing to be done...
I went to her n wiped them she was looking at me with her vision blured with tears...
She was sobbing continuously n I made her drink water... my heart broke into a million pieces...
I melted...
"Hey swara I am sorry..." I whispered...
"No sanskaar..I am sorry... I was wrong... This happens every time.. I try to solve things but end up creating more of mess... I hurted Bhai a lot... Where is he sanskaar..." She asked when Bhai came .. he was angry with her...
"Aur kuch doon.. Blade, rat kill any thing else.. u want swara... " He entered n moved to her...
"Ss..ssoory .. Bhai www.. wwoh . ... " She managed to speak in b/w sobs...
"Kya hua swara koi special knife chahiye ... Is bar kya karegi ..batao Na.. " laksh Bhai spoke again...
N swara looked at him with tears..
"Laksh let it be Na .. pls maaf kar do usko ... " Ragini tried to calm him ..
"Haan.. mera koi haq nahi h Na .. man kare toh maro ..man kare toh jeelo.. h Na... Bhai is nothing swara. .. not even once u thought how will I live without you... " Laksh Bhai continued with tears in eyes ... He turned to leave when swara removed her drip n taking fumbling steps held his hand...
She fell down while doing that.. I too ran n sat .. I held her shoulders...for support...
"Bhai sorry ... Pls .. sab gussa ho chalega... But not u .. pls..." She requested...
"Ab karegi esa... " He sat on the floor along with her wiping her tears she shaked her head in a no... Laksh Bhai hugged her ... N pecked her forehead...
"Swara Babu.. I love you so much.. ur Bhai loves u unconditionally samjhi ..N never do that again... "
"Hmm.. " she replied to him n then Bhai took her n made her rest on the bed...

Swara POV-
The last hearing day...
I was scared.. I met sanskaar before going there... He is a true friend..He had cheered me up... Laksh Bhai was with me..He was giving me.strenght .. I need to face him ... Atleast one last time today... I held laksh Bhai's hand tightly.. ragini was walking along with us..She assured everything will be fine... We reached the court room..we had to wait for some time... Bhai n ragini made me sit on a bench out side .. she made me drink water... N started assuring me about everything... I was drinking water when I saw rajat he was coming there .. I felt uncomfortable with his gaze ... He smirked n left. .. his mother too came she stood there n stared at me ...
I made an eye contact n stares back...
"U bitch u must have found someone else..h Na.. u must be going back to ur lover... Or may be have found someone richer... That is y u want a divorce Na... U even denied staying with my son for a few months untill divorce... N now roaming with some new guy... Great ..how many boys u have cheated haan... U characterless girl... " She was taunting when Bhai cut him...
"Excuse me.. aunty I respect you but u don't need to utter a single word against my sister go n think what ur son did to her... N dare u speak like that with her.. she is no one to u any more.. I am not doing anything because ur a lady n u r of the age of my mother.. or I would have not left u .. samjhin.. now get lost... " Bhai roared upon her ..
She left but was glaring at me... N I glared back...
Rajat came to his mom n I stood up to leave... When he held my hand ... Bhai stood up n so did ragini...
L-leave her rajat
He came close to me... I struggled to free my hand ...
Swara pob ends...

N the next was .. a slap on her cheek... Laksh n ragini were shocked ragini held her n laksh slapped rajat back...
"How dare u slap my sister..." Laksh held his collar...
"How dare she glare at my mother... " Rajat roared n tried moving to swara... She clutched Ragini's hand tight... Laksh again slapped him...But the lawyers and people around calmed them .. n swara ... Stood numb ..She didn't react... But sat back at her place no emotions she showed no reactions she gave...
Laksh n ragini..tried talking to her but in vain... She gave no response...
Soon the judge called them ..They were scolded for the fight n indiscipline... The judge then asked them questions... N in The end he asked swara if she wants alimony.. she shook her head in a no ..
Swara POV- alimony.. what I will do with that... only want a peaceful life... I wnat to stay away from him...
I need peace.. n not money .. I need space m time... I need freedom... N not this... I don't want Money... I don't..

Finally divorce was granted... We walked...out I took a sigh of relief... Ragini asked me to sit... Rajat was on a call... He was unaware of me being around...
"Finally that bitch is gone baby. .. " he was speaking to someone on call... " Now we both can marry.. 10 months of our relationship..phew i love u darling... "
Wow.. we were living separate since 2 months n from past 10 months he had an affair...great.. n they were calling me characterless... I smiled... But I waited for him to move out .. I follwed him out.. n then he looked at me... He turned to me outside the court... N smirked..
"What u want a night more with me...Haan.."he spilled venomous words again... But I didn't want anything except for giving him a tight slap on his face...
I moved closer...N gave him an ear ringing slap... N another.. n another... I slapped him non Stop untill my hands turned red... Bhai n ragini came running..N held me..They stopped me.. Rajat was shocked.. he tried speaking something...when I again slapped him... This time harder...
"Stay away u bas***d ... " I shouted... N moved away... leaving him shocked...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Awesome update specially the last part in which swara slaped him...
Update soon

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