Messed up....Swasan story. Part 11,12,13,14 pg17 no PMs Completed - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
THEY met again...
Thank god..
He is there with her ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Hey Harshu,😊
Oh God!! Swara suffered so much!!!😭 And her parents!!! They r shame in the name of parents!!😡😡🤢 Rajat! Moron!!😡🤬 I really loved Laksh.😃 He took Swara side by going against his parents and supported and cared for her.😃 Even now, he is taking care of her.😳 Such a loving brother.😳 SwaSan reunion was beautiful and emotional one.😳 Loved their cute moments.😃 Now, Sanskar along with RagLak will take out Swara from her past.😃😃 And they will teach Rajat, his mom, and Swara's parents a lesson!!!😈 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Nice upate harshu...

I m gonna hang that rajat untill he dies...🤬

swara mom dad everyone who was taunting her...are my god r junk on society...

Tani
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So cute harshita. I loved the way laksh stood up for swara. Nice re union of swasan. Would love to see how swasan and laksh will band bajao rajat. Thanks for the pm. Updt soon. Waiting for the update of both ur stories. Love
Nivi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awsome update
finally swasan meet ...
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Nice update ...
So finally swara and sanskar face of occurred.. And they comfortable with each other are in past ...
Loved their friendship bonding...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Nice updates
Just hate rajat 😡
Loved swasan friendship 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Harshita darling...
Amazing update...swara condition gave me chills...she still have nightmare of her past...scared..but felt relieved when swasan meet..it was such sweet n cozy conversation..no formality..just like old friends...they connect quickly..waiting for swara 's divorce..n swasan love story to begin...

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Lovely update dear.
Kashh sab ko esea friend or bhai mile
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Messed up
Part-4
Swara partted from the hug n introduced sanskaar with laksh...
L-hi sanskaar
Sa-hi bhaiya...
L- so u r that sanskaar Maheshwari.. college friend
Sa-yes..
L-nice to meet u...
Sw-Sanskaar if u r not angry now then can we have tea...
Sa-I was never...
L-(looked at them)- okay now I want tea...
Sw-here i make it...
Sanlak smiled ... Laksh started his work n sanskaar stood near swara in the kitchen... They were continuously talking n laughing at the jokes only they could understand... The best buddy jokes...
Laksh was very happy seeing swara laughing after so long... Her eyes reflected that happiness...
Soon she brought the tea... The only chair of the room was occupied by laksh hence sanskaar sat on bed n asked swara to sit as well... She faintly smiled and joined them.. soon sanlak too got friendly..
They sipped the tea. N swara spilled it out again..
"Chiii".. she shouted...
Sanlak-kya hua ...
Sw-Bhai sanskaar what is this yrr couldn't u tell ki this tea is a sweet poison... Its so sweet...
Sanlak-it's k...
Sanlak- looked at eachother n laughed...
Swara smiled seeing them but Then fainted...
Sanlak-swara..
They ran placed her on the bed n Laksh called the doctor...
Till the doc arrived laksh kept her head on his lap... But soon.. she started moving her legs n babbled.."Rajat..I am sorry.. pls .. I will keep in mind he next time... Rajat... Aahh.. maro mat pls.. aah... " N in her sleep started crying... "Aah.. I am sorry... Maro mat Na pls... " She again requested... Laksh took her pams n started rubbing them..
Sanskaar rubbed her feet... N she calmed down but still her body shivered...

Fb--
It was the first day of swara's marriage ... She was already broken by the night'a incident.. n was crying sitting on the bed ... Rajat woke...
Rajat- swara kya hua..
Sw-nothing. Bas I wasn't ready for all this...
Rajat-I ..I am sorry swara ..I was drunk last n8 toh...
Sw-(in b/w sobs)- it's okay now what all is done is done... N she covered her face with the Blanket and cried more...
Rajat- swara... N he touched her sensuously..She shivered..
Sw-pls Rajat no Na...
Rajat- sshh...
Sw-pls..
But he pulled her close... N kissed her... She cried more at her helpless state.. he left her lips n then pushed her on the bed.. n forcefully explored her body... N then again ended up forcing her...

Same mrng 7 am...
Swara was emotion less... Her throat was chocked.. her body was paining yet she got up n moved to the washroom n changed... She got ready but her body was buring in fever.. Rajat too came out of the washroom soon..
Rajat-get ready...
Sw-I am done...
Rajat- go down n do as Maa says...
Sw-n this room...
Rajat- u don't worry..just do as I say...
Swara left..N reached down...
It was 7:30 am..
Rajat mom-(rm)- oh good morning.. how's u..
Swara touched her feet...
Sw-gm Maa n I am good..
RM- I was waiting since an hour.. darling pls prepare a cup of tea.. me n rajat would like to have it if it is prepared by u ...
Sw-yes mom..
RM- mom...
Sw-sorry ... Maa..
N she left.
Soon arrived with the tea n snacks... Her mil asked to make...
Rajat- u need so much of time... Look now I will get late for the office..
Sw-sorry rajat...
Rajat-shut up n serve us now...
She did that..But some how sugar was more in the tea.. ..
Rajat- too k sip n enraged moved towards her n slapped her...
Sw- what the... Kya tareeka h yeh haan..Pagal ho...
Rajat- is it tea ..
Sw-what else can u see...
Rajat threw it on her arm...
Sw-what is this ... Aah...
Rajat- u dare not speak in front of me .
At this swara too slapped him hard on this left cheek..
Sw- be in ur limits...
N this was it was him.. he Beated her badly until she fell unconscious... N all his mother did was to sit n enjoy the scene.
Sw-Ra...rajat pls leave me... Pls don't beat me... Pls...
She was pleading begging requesting but in vain...
Fb--ends..
Doc- Mr boss these are the medicines...
L-sure...
Doc- n ask her not to stress on small things...
Doctor left n laksh turned to sanskaar..
L-sanskaar u will be here pls I am coming in a few minutes..i will get these medicines...
Sa-sure bhaiya...
Sanskaar sat beside her... N held her hand...
She woke up n the scene palyed in her mind again n again...N she cried sanskaar couldn't help but embraced her...
Sa-swara r u okay...
Sw-pls save me sanskaar... Pls don't beat me...I am sorry I will do it properly the next time...
Sa-swara it's okay...it's no sin... Pls... Swara... Don't cry...
But her sobs turned into a bitter crying n her body badly vibrated... Sanskaar tightened his grip over she shoulders until she slept...there...
Somehow he pecked her forehead...

Sanskaar POV-
I am here on a bench...in the park... I left as soon as laksh Bhai left making an excuse...
I couldn't see her like that..my swara wasn't this one... Tht Devil had scratched her sole... Completely shattered her... I want her back...the way she was... Happy smiling...chirpy... She may or may not love but...I love her from the core of my heart n it hurts seeing her like that...the most unfortunate is till now I thought she is happy with him.. n living like a queen...
But no... It wasn't true...it was my mere assumption... She was in the hell..N price is this... People have a collection of good n beautiful memories but she has many worst n painful moments.. stored in her memory lane... God help to absorb her pain... I can't see her like this...

Sanskaar POV-ends...

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