RagLak FF - Is pyaar ko kya naam doon? ( Part 12 updated )

Hi guys... iam Neetu...
This is a short FF posted by me in TU.. I thought to not post it in IF.. but now changed my decision ...
It's my very first attempt in writing a story.. there will be many mistakes.. just ignore it. 😛
This story starts after Ragini getting stabbed by Kavya..
RagLak are the main characters... it will be fully focused on them.. 😉
I need a suggestion.. since this ff is already completed,how should I post it.. one part per day or 2 parts per day. In total it's 17 parts.
I will post first part now..

Part 1



Everyone is waiting outside ICU,ladies are chanting prayers with teary eyes.sanskar is holding swaras hands to assure her that everything will b alright. Laksh is standing in a corner lifeless.. Reminiscing all recent happenings.. From the beginning to this moment all incidents passed through his mind Nd he realised he always had played with raginis feelings and for whatever she has become he is the sole reason.. He is guilty... He thinks even after everything how she stood by his family Nd saved him from jail. Form kavyas plans.. Nd hw she got stabbed.. His string of thoughts got broken when a nurse opened door and said that Ragini has gained consciousness...
Everyone gets so relieved Nd tries to get into ICU.. Nurse stops and says that only two people can enter. So swara Nd shekar decides to enter the room.. Laksh badly wanted to see her.. Just a glimpse of hher to make sure she is okay.. Nd to apologise to her for whatever he had dne.. BT he knows that Raginis Papa Nd dadi vl Never let him meet her.. So he juz stayed outside..
In ICU
Ragini sees swara nd shekhar .. She knew they are all tensed. She smiles at them and ensures that she is OK.. She holds swaras hand and asks: laksh is alryt na?? Swara nodded.. BT shekar was fuming with anger.
Shekar: laado u please stop thinking abt strangers.. Just think about your health only.. Ragini doesn't say anything. She understands her fathers state f mind.. His anganger is justified..
Swara:what did you think ragini before getting to all dis?? You juz scared us all.. You don't know what we have been going through for past hours. We cudnt even breath.. Nd laksh ... She stops seein shekhars anger..
Shekhar: don't repeat this ragini.. I can't lose you.. YU can't guve up on ur life for the one who cheated you..
Ragini cries.. Nurse asks them to go out.. Nd let ragini take rest..
Shekhar Nd swara comes out Nd says that Ragini is alright..
Shekhar asks maheshwaries to leav from hospital and pleads laksh to not come infornt f my laado again.
Laksh is bbroken.. He wantes to apologise to shekhar for slapping him..BT HD knows dis NT the right time.. So he left hospital with his family with. Heavy heart..
Raginis POV
She is thinking about recent incidents. How laksh apologised to her. Saved from police.. Holika pooja covo. She smiles .. I tried not tto love you laksh.. But I can't stop loving you.. You are living in my heartbeat.. I will love you till The moment it stops beating .. Don't know I have a feeling that YU too started to feel for me.. No ragini no.. It can't happen.. YU don't deserve to dream anything. It's your one sided love DAT made you do all those crimes.. NW it shall not repeat. I won't expect anything in my life.. I will live for my family.. Let God decide my future.. I will face whatever comes into my life..
Screen ends with raginis determined face

Its really a nice ff. I read all d parts of the ff in tu. All the parts were amazing. I really get connected to ffs which are based on SL in the serial. U are truly a great writer neetu.

I haven't read it yet so I would say post 1-2 parts everyday😉 It depends on you .. (If I wish I don't mind reading entire part as once 😆 )

Originally posted by: Anamika000

Its really a nice ff. I read all d parts of the ff in tu. All the parts were amazing. I really get connected to ffs which are based on SL in the serial. U are truly a great writer neetu.

Haha.. thanks dear... m flattered

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

I haven't read it yet so I would say post 1-2 parts everyday😉It depends on you .. (If I wish I don't mind reading entire part as once😆)

Coming back to the Update, part one was great

I can't wait till Laksh and Ragini meets😳😳Post soon😉

Thanks Anji..
I don't mind to post all 17 parts in a go... but it will be boring na... coming parts are longer... 😃

Awesome neetu

Originally posted by: lizjose

Thanks Anji..
I don't mind to post all 17 parts in a go... but it will be boring na... coming parts are longer... 😃

Yayy! Can't wait to read part 2 too 😃 When are you posting it? Today or tomorrow

i read all part of your ff 😆 you are amazing writer. i will read it again

Neetu di *hugs*

awesome start. I want to read all parts at once badly! Since you have told its completed, it is quite hard to control *lol*

waiting eagerly!