RagLak FF - Is pyaar ko kya naam doon? ( Part 12 updated ) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww!!
Thanks neetu..🤗

Arjun is so nice...sooo good..and Ragini and arjun are too comfortable with each other..
Oh my god!! Lovely!!! Laksh babu..go man!! Jealous jealous jealous...
How I tell u how much I wanted this kind of track for them!!!
Thank u for this neetu..
Lovely update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww!!! Neetu.. This is awesome.. 🤗 I started reading in TU but couldn't continue due to lack of time.. Glad that you're posting it here.. 😳 Thank you so much..


Jealous Laksh.. Arjun seems to be a nice person.. Waiting for the next part.. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arjun is such a gentleman 😳😳
Nice to see Laksh jealous .. Post next part soon :) 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 7



Laksh POV
I don't know what's going on with me.. Seeing Ragini with that Arjun is irritating me.. Their closenes burns me... I don't love Ragini.. She is just my friend.. Then Y am being insecure about her relationship.. I just don't get it.. I never felt like this.. When Swara was with sanskar I was angry but not like this.. Maybe then Ragini was with me.. She never let me alone to ponder about all those thoughts.. She really did care for me. Now am feeling lonely... As if no one is there for me.. Earlier she was with me always whatever I said or did.. How much I have hurted her. She did mistakes but all that was for me. My love... I made her like that. I broke alliance with her twice.. Used her for my personal benefit.. I ignored her and went behind her sister only because she is traditional.. What a Naive reason.. I was only attracted to Swara because she was modern as I wanted.. And I didn't accept Ragini because I found her boring.. What a stupid iam. Then also I enjoyed being with Ragini than Swara.. If I had fallen for Ragini then all these wouldn't hve happened. I am feeling bad when I see Ragini with Arjun even though i dont love her.. I felt to broke his hand when he touched her.. What must've Ragini gone through when she saw me with Swara then. Oh god.. Ragini loved me very much and infront of her I romanced with her sister.. How I could I be so insensitive.. How can I blame Ragini for her deeds.. anyone in one her place would be shattered to see their love romancing with their sibling.. Iam sorry Ragini.. Iam sorry.. I have hurted you a lot.. First Swara. Then that BL**dy kavya.. How much I have hurted you. I will never ever hurt you.. One thing I don't understand is why am thinking about her 24*7??? Iam not able to think about anything else.. Ragini... Why is she bothering me so much? Is it normal to care for a friend to this extent??? Whatever I want to keep an eye on Arjun.. What if he is not right for Ragini.. Everyone is all praise for him but I won't trust him sso easily..


Arjun POV
Ragini... Never seen such a serene beauty. Whatever she did in her past was only because of her circumstances.. She is still feeling guilty for that.. I must make her forget her past.. I must bring smile back into her eyes. Her lips may smile abut her eyes doesnt. It's filled with pain.. How can someone love another with so much passion.. That guy broke her alliance twice.. Cheated her... still she loves him.. She is impossible.. What an intense love.. How stupid is he to ignore such pure love.. I wwish I had met her before all this.. I wish I was her first love.. I wish she love me with that intensity.. Then I would be the luckiest person in the world.. What have you done to me Ragini.. I never knew what love felt like.. Is this feeling called love.. I can't stop thinking about. Your eyes.. Smile. Voice .. Everything is making me crazy.. I just met you and I lost myself.. May be live at first sight. I promise you that I will always be with you whatever may be the situation. I just want your happiness. Your smile makes me happy.. I wishes you feel the same for me but am not so lucky.. You loves someone else.. Will you b able to move on with me Ragini?? Whatever it may be.. I Love You Ragini.. You just stole my heart with your innocence.. I can do anything for your happiness.. Anything... I will wait to infinity for you to accept me.. I just want yoto be with me.. Even as a friend am happy..


Ragini POV
What is going on in my life.. Within few weeks my life turned upside down.. What I dreamt of and what is happening... I loved laksh.. And i always will. What have you done to me laksh.. You are not perfect.. You are impulsive. Childish.. Confused.. But I love you the way you are.. But you are never meant for me.. I took me so much time to realise it.. If I had realised it earlier everyone would have been happy now.. You played with emotions.. Not once but n times.. But still am not able to hate you.. I should have hated you by now but my love for you is stronger than any hatredness in this world.. Why are you not understanding my love laksh... Can't you feel it.. I know that my love for you is not so week.. You think that I don't love you anymore. Whereas I have written my whole life in your name.. But there is no chance for us.. Laksh you dont deserve my love. You want me to move on.. Iam moving on.. Leaving all my past. Arjun..
He is a nice guy.. I like him.. But as a good friend.. He makes me feel comfortable.. He never asks me about my past.. He doesn't mention laksh.. He is not prejudiced.. He doesn't judge ne.. He asked me to pursue my career.. That moment I understood Daadi is right this time.. She has chosen the right guy. He will never force me into any thing. He will give me time to move on. But am I doing right with him?? Will i ever be able to give him laksh's place in my heart.. How can I destroy his life. He deserves love.. But I will never be able to give him his rights... My soul, heart, body... everything was for laksh and he took everything from me.. How can I share it with someone else.. Arjun seems to be a nice guy.. May be he will understand.. But how long will he bear me.. May b i will forget laksh by time.. And may b I wil accept Arjun as my partner. But it will take long time.. Will Arjun Abe able to wait??He said he won't force.. and he will give me time.. If he can consider my feelings I should also.. I will try my best to forget laksh and move on with you. But for the time being we can be good friends... Knowing each other .. Understanding each other... God knows what he has kept for us in future..


Sorry for this boring update...
This one is to show the feelings of characters...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 8



Daadi asked Ragini and Arjun to got to temple for a special pooja for them.. Ragini is getting ready to go.. She is wearing a red anarkali suit with side braided hair... Matching jhumkas.. She looked pretty. Arjun wanted to come to Baadi to pick ragini but ragini denied saying it will cause trouble to him since he will have to drive extra distance.. Though Arjun got disappointed he agreed to Ragini..
At MM Laksh overhears Swara talking to others that Ragini and Arjun is going to temple for some special pooja.. Laksh got restless listening to this.. Ragini alone with Arjun .. He is feeling weird.. He didn't think much.. He took the keys of his car and rushed to temple..
At Temple
Ragini reached early.. Arjun has not yet reached. She is climbing stairs and her legs slipped.. She was about to fall .. Suddenly a strong pair of hands holds her by waist saving her from falling.. Ragini has closed her eyes in fear.. She could feel someone's touch on her body.. She was feeling something.. She slowly opened her eyes and was surprised to see a familiar pair of eyes staring at her with intensity.. It was Laksh.. He was standing behind the pillars Waiting for Ragarjun..
Ragini least expected laksh to be here.. His dark eyes staring at her.. Her strong hand encircled on her waist.. Her hands on his chest.. Whatever be the situation his touch makes her weak.. She forgets everything.. Lost in eyes.. Laksh is mesmerised seeing Ragini.. He too is lost in her beauty.. Their eyelock continues.. A sudden jerk bring make them realise their posture. Laksh helped Ragin to stand straight.. There was some awkwardness between them.. Their romantic moments flashed through both of their minds.. Though laksh was pretending to love her what happened was real.. Ragini was feeling weird of this silence and she thought to break it..
Ragini: You here in temple??
Laksh fumbles.. : Don't know why. I just felt to visit and I came.. And I met you here..
Ragini: So you came alone??
She was trying to sound normal because she doesn't want Laksh to know that his presence still make a difference to her.. Whrease laksh is little taken back by Ragini's casual attitude to him..
Laksh: Yes.. Just me.. Wt abt you?? Daadi maa??
Ragini: No.. A special pooja is kept for me and Arjun.. He is on his way..
Laksh felt bad listening Arjuns name from her mouth.
Laksh:oh so his name is Arjun.. How is he??
Ragini: He is a very nice person... He understands me.. Respects me and my decisions.. Iam glad that I met him.. He is a very good friend.. And a good friend can always be a good partner.. Ryt?? He doesn't judge me on my pasts or looks..
Ragini didn't know why she is talking like this.. She just wanted to make laksh know that she is happy .. She has moved on.. But truth is only known to her.
But it was the limit for Laksh.. He cant tolerate anymore.. Ragini praising some other guy infront of him.. He felt like someone sucking out his soul from his body.. But he didn't show it ..
Laksh: Are you sure about this marriage Ragini?? It's happening all of a sudden and..
Ragini: yes.. Iam.. This time I feel that everything is going on its right path.. I learnt that we shouldn'tgo after someone we love but we should be with someone who loves us .. And I believe Arjun is the right person..
Tears were welling up in her eyes. This words are not from her heart. But she need to do this to get rid of him.. His memories.. She can't stay there anymore.. She can't lie anymore..
Ragini; I need to go.. If forgot to buy something.. And she turns to go..

Laksh felt like his world has turned upside down.. He know he is the reason for everything.. Ragini who once loved him more than anything is now goin away from him.. He couldn't bear it and helds her hands to stop her. . Ragini gets shocked. She turns to face him.. They are so close to each other.. They can feel each other's hot breaths.. Their heart is beating fastly.. There is pain in his eyes but she couldn't identify it.. She is confused with laksh's sudden gesture.. Laksh slowly removes his hand from hers..
Laksh. Ragini.. I n..
Suddenly someone called out Raginis name .. They both turn around to see Arjun standing down the stairs with a confused face. Arjun sensed some tension between them and he goes near them..
Arjun: Hi Ragini.. You are looking beautiful..
Ragini was little embarrassed.. Mainly because laksh was there.. And they were standing so close when arjun called out. He must've seen them..
Ragini: Thankyuuu Arjun.. This is Laksh.. Sanskar's brother .. She turns to laksh and says Laksh,this si Arjun. My fiance..
Laksh felt like some one stabbing his heart .. Sanskar' brother. Really.. I mean nothing to her.. Not even a friend... How can she change so much. Did I hurt her to tthat extent that she not even calling me by my name.. Thanks to Arjun at least I could hear my name from her mouth.. But ...
Arjun: oh so finally we met.. Nice to meet you.. Thanks to you yaar. If you were not there I would have never met my ragini...
"My Ragini" seriously. When did this happen.. They are not even engaged and this fellow Arjun is behaving like they are married for years..laksh is burning inside..
Ragini was feeling awkward and she made some excuse and leave from there to temple..
Now Arjun and Laksh is standing alone in the middle of stairs
Laksh in an anger tone: i don't know anything about you.. But Ragini trusts you a lot.. Please don't break it. If ever a drop of tear comes in her eyes because of you , I will not spare you.. Mind it..
Arjun: Relax. I think you should think before you speak.. You are the sole reason behind her tears and you are preaching me.
Laksh was about to say something but arjun stops him and says
Arjun: I like Ragini, Infact I love her from the moment I heard about her from Swara. I wll give her all the happiness in the world that she deserves.. I will never let a tear come in her eyes.. I guess you should stop worrying about her and move on with your life. Iam with her now onwards in her each and every step.. I will not let her fall.. So you please stay away from her.. I don't want her to get upset by your presence.
Arjun leaves to temple leaving behind a numb Laksh

Precap:Laksh_Swasan convo and Laksh realising his true feelings for Ragini..



Edited by lizjose - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi neethu,nice update.im in love with ur arjun😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: souhasini

Hi neethu,nice update.im in love with ur arjun😳


Beware of him Chechi.. he will make you fall for him more and more.. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Lovely😳😳

But I'll stick to my words! I'll continue loving Laksh 😉


But Arjun is so sweet n Kind
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!! Neetu you're an awesome writer 😃

I loved both the parts.. Especially when Arjun said to Laksh when he asked him not to hurt Ragini 😆

Sach mein.. Superb!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woooww...lovely updates dear... pls pls pls continue soon...

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