RagLak FF - Is pyaar ko kya naam doon? ( Part 12 updated ) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Amazing Di!!!
Lakshya ka toh ho gaya re ta ta thaiyaa!!!šŸ˜†

Waiting for next..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Superb story dear
Loved it
Wanted to see jealousy laksh
Can't wait to read next part
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Gud to c laksh sooo comfused...good going..pls continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
beautiful update
can't wait to read next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks to all readers and all those who commented.. m glad that yu guys are liking it..
Part 5



Next day at Baadi..
Ragini is getting ready. She is wearing a simple yelow saree with silver border.. Matching earrings and minimal make up.. She looks extremely beautiful.. Swara comes ..
Swara: Ragini, are you sure about this??
Ragini: swara, you please stop worrying.. Iam ready.. I won't step back now.. She gives a assuring nod to swara
Swara: Iam happy for you Ragini.. Arjun is a very nice guy.. Yesterday I met him and you know I told him everything..
Ragini: everything????
Swara: Yes baba.. Everything.. And what surprised me was after listening to this he said that he is getting attracted to you.. He feels that you are a gem of a person who can love him to any extent. Even without seeing you he is so sure about you.. It means he is not a person who gives importance to outer beauty. You r soo lucky ragini..
Ragini gives a faint smile: don't scare me swara.. What if I disappoint him..
Swara: Ragini you just don't worry.. Everything will b perfect.. BT m sure about one thing.. After seeing you today Arjun will be flat .. You look like a princess dear.. Kisiki nazar na lage.
Swara puts kala teeka on Ragini and gives a side hug.. Ragini smiles.. swara leaves
Ragini's eyes are teary thinking how wrong she was about swara.. She did so much to her and swara forgave her so easily .. M sorry swara.. I never tried to understand your selfless love for me..
Outside Baadi a Car is shown.. A tall and handsome guy wearing a denim jeans and white shirt get outside from the car.. He look hot.. He is Arjun Mehra..
He enter into Raginis home.. All are happy to see him.. He seeks blessing from elders and gives a friendly smile to swara .. Swara introduces sanskar to him.. They shakes their hand.. He takes his seat...
Arjun doesn't have any family.. He was an orphan.. Adopted by a rich NRI couple.. They died in a car crash leaving behind a fortune for him. He came back to India and set up all his business here and is now one of the top entrepreneurs in India..
All were asking him many questions. He was not actually listening to all that.. His eyes were searching for some one else..Ragini.. He has only heard about her.. After listening to Swara his heart is yearning to see Ragini.. To be with her and to support her..
Daadi call for ragini.. Arjuns heart starts beating faster as if it will pump out now.. Ragini enters .. She looked pretty but her eyes were red with pain of leaving behind laksh and scare of moving on with a stranger..
Arjun coudnt take eyes off her.. He had imagined her to be pretty.. But he didn't know that she looked like an angel... He has never seen such an innocent face in his life.. He could see the pain in her eyes. He felt a sudden urge to go to her and give her a warm hug to make her forget all her pain.. The moment he saw her he made a promise to himself that he will never let any more tear come in her beautiful eyes..

Ragini was relieved.. He looked like a gentleman.. He is calm ad composed.. The way he spoke to elders.. His respect to them all shows how well mannered he is.. Even knowing about her past he agreed for this marriage. He has got a big heart.. He knows everything ..that's a relief.. Ragini hopes that he will give her time and space to move on from her past.. From her first love.. Arjuns smiles at her.. He senses her tension.

Elders ask them to go to Raginis room to talk privately.. They moves to her room..

On the other side laksh is not able to concentrate on anything.. He is mind is wandering around Ragini.. Her marriage.. Swara's comments on Arjun.. How can Ragini marry him?? Is he that good looking?? Better than me.?? Will ragini love him?? He can't control himself.. He decided to go to Baadi secretly to see who this Mr.Perfect is...
Yes laksh is damn jealous but still unaware about the reason behind it..

Precap: Ragarjun convo.. Laksh peeping in..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Read all four parts in one go, neetu!!!!!
Amazing FF yaar..
Awww both RagLak sad but pretend to be happyšŸ˜”
Now who's playing arjun?
Nice name..Rag-Arjun..

All parts are updated, right? Toh post it soon or I'll read on TU..n won't comment..
Pleeaajjj na..update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
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Yay!! Me the first one to comment!!!🄳

Plz give a face to arjun na!
Aww he is cute..he liked Ragini..loved the way he thought about her..

Laksh peeping in šŸ˜† ..
Seems very interesting..eagerly waiting for the next part .
Plz post it right now šŸ˜† ..

Loveā¤ļø
Neha..
Edited by Radhadreamlove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Read all four parts in one go, neetu!!!!!
Amazing FF yaar..
Awww both RagLak sad but pretend to be happyšŸ˜”
Now who's playing arjun?
Nice name..Rag-Arjun..

All parts are updated, right? Toh post it soon or I'll read on TU..n won't comment..
Pleeaajjj na..update soon..


Arjun Mehra.. played by Aham sharma... (it's a character from manmarziyan show- one f my fvryt actor)
I will update 2 parts a day. .. wat say?? M ready to upload anytime.. as yu wish.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
AhamAham sharma..
He is handsome.. good choice..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Neha.. this update specially for you... 😳
Part 6


Ragini takes Arjun to her room
She is feeling awkward... She was never been alone with any man in her room except for Laksh.. She is scared about how this conversation going to turn out.
Arjun is overwhelmed with his new found feelings.. His heart is pounding.. Her eyes.. Her smile. Her sweet voice... Everything about her is pulling him towards her..
Ragini: Please sit..
Arjun sits on a chair and signals Ragini to sit .. She also takes her seat opposite to him..
Both are getting uncomfortable. Silence was the only mode of communication between them.. Arjun happens to see Raginis sitar kept at the corner of her room.. Finally he got a topic to start..
Arjun: Swara told me that you sings well and plays sitar too..
Ragini nods..
Arjun : I think you should pursue your career. You know you should continue your studies.. Follow your dreams.. It gives us immense pleasure..
Raginis eyes get welled up.. She didn't know what to say.. After all this he wants me to learn music.. How he knew that music is remedy to my all pain.. Even I didn'tthink about it..
Ragini remained silent.. This is hurting Arjun.. He wants to see her smile..
Arjun:Ragini, please don't cry ..
He holds her hand. Ragini gets shocked by his sudden gesture.. But she let it be like that only.. She doesn't want to offend him..
Arjun: Ragini,swara has told me everything.. I know you have done mistakes in your past.. What matters is you repents for your deeds and now you are a pure soul.. What you did.. Why you did all that.. I can understand.. Losing loved ones is difficult.. You wer so fragile inside.. I will never ever let you remember all that.. Past is past.. Ryt?? I know that it's difficult to forget your first love.. And you need time to move on.. I won't force you for anything.. Just remember that whenever you need anything I will be there with you always as a support.. It's my promise..
Ragini holds his hand tightly now.. No one in her life had made her feel So secure till now.. Yes baba ,sumi maa, swara all supported her through her bad times.. But Arjun was different.. He never known her and still standing by her .. She felt lucky.. She found someone with whom she can share her feelings.. She never had any such friends.. She was crying. This time it was tears of happiness..
Meanwhile laksh sneaked into Baadi.. He was standing outside Raginis room.. He wanted to see Arjun but what he saw teared him into pieces.. Ragini was holding his hands tightly and crying. She was thinking something and was smiling also.. Laksh was getting furious. Who the hell is he??? How can he hold Raginis hand?? And she let him touch her?? How come.. When I met her in college for first time she was hesitant to shake my hands even though i was her fiancee and now the very same girl is holding some strangers hand.. He grits his teeth.. May be she is not the same Ragini.. And reason for her changes must be me myself. Still how can she b so close to him.. I feel like breaking his hands.. He tightens his fist with frustration because he knows that he can't do anything.. He lost his rights.. Tears flows from his eyes.
Inside room
Ragini:Arjun ,I dont know why I feel that God has send me to you.. I find a good friend in you.. I want to move on from my dark past.. And I feel that you can be that ray of hope who can get ne out of that.. Iam glad that I met you..
So friends???
Arjun was glad.. Listening to his name from her mouth for the first time.. It was soothing.. And she likes him.. She needs to be friends with me.. He only wanted this.. He knew that it will take time for their relationship.. He just wanted to be her friend for tthe time being.. To be with her. To motivate her.. He smiles and shakes her hand. Ragini also smiles.. This time wholeheartedly.. Without any pain.. She got a new friend.. She doesn't know about future. .. She doesn'think she can love him.. But she is sure that he will never let her down.. Her best friend..
They leave their room withsmiling faces .. This surprises everyone.. Specially Swasan.. Daadi distributes sweets to everyone... Ragarjun marriage got fixed.
Laksh left Baadi .. He is not able to think anything.. He lost it. Ragini has really moved on .. It hurts him.. Whyyy???????

Precap:Laksh PoV, Arjun POV, Ragini POV

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