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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 9



Laksh reached MM and rushed into his room.. He was pissed of.. He just threw away everything that he gets in his hand.. He created a mess in his room.. He is frustrated. How dare he?? How can he talk to me like that?? They are not even engaged and he is claiming rights on her... What does he think of himself??? Huh... He loves my Ragini.. What... My Ragini?????? Oh noo this is not good.. She is not mine.. She can never be mine. When she was mine.. When she loved me like anything I didn't pay any heed.. I lost my rights on her.. She is happy with Arjun. why should I bother .. He sits on the floor holding his head.. He is crying ..
Swasan enters his room and shocked to see his state..
Meanwhile at temple there was awkwardness between Ragarjun.. Ragini was hiding her eyes from him.. She doesn't want to talk about Laksh to him.. Whereas Arjun understands her feeling and decides let her like that. He doesn't want her to be embarrassed... So they silently does the pooja and leaves to Baadi in his car.. They remained silent in the car also.. They reached Baadi.. Ragini was about to leav.
Arjun: Ragini, won't you ask for a tea??
Ragini: oo sorry.. I forgot.. Come inside na..
Arjun: thanks Ragini.. But I was kidding.. I got one important meeting and I gotta go..
Ragini: Mmm.. Next time you should come in.kk .bye..
Arjun turns to leave but again turns to see a tensed Ragini standing..
Arjun: Ragini, you please don't worry... I don't know what happened there between you both.. I dont want to know also.. I just want you to stay happy. Just remember that whenever you are in any problem you can call me.. I will be there for you always.. Okkk
Ragini:Thanks Arjun for understanding me.. You made me feel light by saying this..
Arjun: Why thanks and all yaar... We are friends ryt.. M now leaving . before that I need to see your smiling face please.. He pouts..
Ragini smile at his cute antics and waves bye.
Screen shifts to MM
Sanskar rushes to Laksh and helps him to get up.. Laksh hugs sanskar tightly.. Though tears are not coming from his eyes his heart is crying out.. His heart need someone to take care of him.. Someone to hug him.. Someone to console.him. he is yearning for love.. He is feeling lonely..
Sanskar gets confused by his behaviour.. Swara also doesn't have any idea..Sanskar releases him from his hug..
Sanskar: Lucky.. May I know what's going on?? What happened??
Laksh: Nothing Bhai.. I was upset with some other stuffs.. Now iam okk.
Swara: Don't lie to your Bhai laksh.. It is clearly visible that matter is something important not some random stuffs.. Share it na. You will feel better..
Laksh remaina silent. Sanskar gives him a assuring node and Laksh says to them whatever happened in temple.
Swara: What?? Why did you go to temple in first place????
Laksh bends his head: I don't know Swara. When I heard the ragini is going to temple with Arjun I just felt to follow them. After all he is a stranger.. How can we trust him so easily??
Sanskar: Lucky we have enquired about him.. Do you that we will take careless decsion regarding Raginis future ????
Laksh: I don't know Bhai.. Iam not able to think anything.. I feel that something is wrong..
Swara: Aren't you happy that Ragini is getting married to a nice guy??/You yourself asked her to move on,ryt?? Why are you so insecure about it then???
Laksh:It's true that I asked her to move on. But when I heard that she agreed for alliance, something strange is going on with me.. like something important to me is going away from me..
Sanskar: Lucky calm down.. Don't get weak.. You will be alright..
Swara i n shock: Laksh.. You are in love with Ragini...
Laksh :What??? I love Ragini???
Swara: Yess laksh. This is love. You never understood it. It was always Ragini for you.. She was your priority from the very beginning... You loved to loved by her Nd you didn't realise it.. When you started to feel that Ragini doesn't love you anymore that is upsetting you.. We thought that you will ask her hand for marriage when you went to meet her at Baadi.. But you asked her to move on.. Once again you broke her... With very much difficulty she accepted to move on. She is happy now.. Please let her be.. I beg you don't make her cry anymore.. Stay away from them.. I can't see her in pain anymore..
Swara leaves with Sanskar..
Laksh fall on his bed..
Do I really love Ragini.. Is this feeling called love.. I never felt like this for Swara.. So it's true that I love Ragini.. I love you Ragini.. I love you.. I played with your emotions many times.. And i regret it.. Now i promise that I will never hurt you.. I want to give you as much love you have given to me till day.. I know you still feel for me.. You agreed for this marriage only for Daadi and babas sake. If on that day I had proposed you ,now you would have been with me.. How stupid iam that I asked you to move on and you idioot listened to me and agreed for marriage... I will not let this marriage to happen.. You are mine. Only mine.. Wait for me Mrs.Ragini Laksh Maheswari..

Thanks to all readers..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally he realized..thank GOD..pls update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Laksh realised his love 😉😉
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Hahaha.. Bhuddhu Laksh..😆

Finally realized his feelings 😃
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Part 10



Next day morning at Baadi
Ragini is doing Tulsi Pooja.. She is wearing a simple white churidar.. Her hairs are wet and left open..
Arjun reaches Baadi.. He feels little awkward thinking what Ragini will think when she sees him morning itself.. Actually he wanted to know whether Ragini is OK after yesterday's incident.. And yes of course he wants to see her. Talk to her.. Spend some time with her. He just cannot resist the feeling for being with her.. His chain of thoughts got broken when he saw his angel with closed eyes.. With utter devotion chanting mantras.. He was awestruck seeing her.. He couldn't see or listen anything else..
Ragini finishing prayers opened her eyes to get surprised to see a awestruck Arjun staring at her.. She felt little shy..
Ragini: Arjun???
Arjun got out from his dreamworld hearing Ragini's voice.. He fumbles...
Ragini: Why are you here ? Anything important??
Arjun: Ragini... Aren't you happy to see your friend??? Should I look time to visit my friend..
He said this in a fake angry voice.. Ragini felt bad listening to this.
Ragini: Arjun,I didn't mean that.. I was quite surprised when I saw you here early morning so I just asked..
Arjun felt bad seeing his Angel upset because of him
Arjun: come on Ragini.. I was just Kidding.. I was passing by here so I just thought to visit you.. And now if you don't ask me for coffee I will get angry for real..
Ragini hits her head with her hand. Yesterday also she didn't ask him to come in..
Ragini:oh no.. Sorry sorry.. Please come in.. I will make special tea for you.. also Everyone will be happy to see you
Arjun smiles at her innocence.. And both gets into her home..
All are happy to see Arjun.. Ragini goes to kitchen to make tea. Daadi shekhar and sumi is talking to Arjun.. Arjun nods for everything whereas his eyes are stuck in the doors of kitchen.. He wants to spend more time with her.. He is not that confident to ask Ragini for a date.. She will deny it. He knows that.. But he gets an idea.. Ragini can never deny her daadi. He smirks..
Arjun:Daadi, if you don't mind , can I take Ragini for a dinner tonight.. I promise we won't get late.. I will drop her here before 9...
Ragini listens to this.. She is nervous. She knows that daadj doesn't like roaming around before marriage. So she hope that Daadi denies..
Daadi makes a stern face. Arjun understands it and he felt bad.. He shouldn't 'have asked.. He was about to say sorry. Then Daadi smiles
Daadi: Arjun beta.. You asked us for permission even before asking to Ragini.. That itself is necessary for us to believe that you will take good care of her. You can go out with her.. If you get little late also I don't mind.. I just want my laado to be happy..
Arjun was on cloud nine with happiness.. Yeaa he is going on a date with ragini.. Ragini is surprised or she is rather shocked listening to Daadi's reply..
Arjun goes near Ragini


Arjun goes near Ragini
Arjun: Ragini.. Be ready at 7pm.. I will come to pick you up..kk
They they have tea and Arjun leaves
Ragini calls Swara
Ragini: Swara,iam in problem..
Swara; What happened Ragini?? Dis someone say something???
Ragini:No Swara.. Arjun is taking me for a date.
Swara:What ?? You and Arjun going for a date. Wow... Such a happy news and you are saying like yoi met with an Accident.. So where are you going?? What are you gonna wear?
Ragini: Swara relax.. You are getting excited as if you are going on a date.. Iam scared swara.. I have never been on a date. What shall I wear?? How should I behave? I don't know anything..
Swara:Ragini.. Don't worry. There is time till 7 na.. I am coming to baadi.. I will make my laado ready for her first date.. And yea I will get you the dress alsoo..k
Ragini:Swara, you are the best sister in the World.. Come fast.. I love you.
Swara: Love you to Rago. Bye. See you soon
Swara in excitement jumpa and turns to see a Furious laksh standing behind her.. She ignores him and goes outside. But she was scared that laksh may do something. Laksh goes to his room and bangs his hand on the door.
He couldn't bear the fact that Ragarjun are going for a date.. How can she agree for it.. She only.loves me and now she behaves as if she doesn't tcare about him.. Ragini's first date with that idioot Arjun.. It should have been with me na.. Iam her first love.. But I never asked her.. He was feeing bad. But he knew that he shouldn't be impulsive.. He should think with a cool mind.. He cannot take risk.. His one wrong step will make Ragini go more far away from him.. And he can't imagine it.. He decides to follow them ..
"Ragini, your Laksh loves you a lot now.. I can't see you with someone else.. Plss forgive me.. your first date is not with me that makes me feel bad.. But I promise Ragini and Laksh will be together for our whole life and coming next 7 births.. I will never let you go away from me.. Without Ragink laksh is nothing. It took me a lot of time realise it.. Soon i will confess my feelings.. Till then I will try to make no problems.. Love you Ragini.. "


Precap: Ragarjun date.. Laksh's plan. RagLak confrontation Nd may be laksh confession to ragini...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arjun seems like a very nice guy..hope laksh wnt break her heart again..lovng d story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loving it 😳 Cant wait to see what Laksh does
Pls post next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 11


At evening
Arjun has reached Baadi to pick Ragini.. He is wearing a black tuxedo.. Looking dashing.. Any girl will fall for him.. He was eagerly waiting for Ragini outside.. He listens to giggles and turns with excitement to see Ragini.. But Swara was standing there with a naughty smirk..
Arjun: Swara, where is Ragini?
Swara: Arjun, Ragini is not well. So she won't b able to come today..
Arjun: what?? Ragini is not well?? Why didn't you say it earlier? Where is she? What happened to her? Did she go to doctor?
Swara gets shocked seeing Arjun's care for Ragini..
Swara: Arjun Relax . I was just Kidding.. Ragini will come.. Just wait. She is doing her finishing touch up..
Arjun: Swara. Don't dare to play such pranks once again.. I won't spare you..
Swara was about to ask him something.. But..
Ragini: Who is scolding my sister?? I won't spare him...
Arjun turns to see Ragini and he gets mesmerised seeing her. She had wore a red gown.. With a diamond stud.. And hair tied up in a messy bun leaving one or two strands of hair losely.. He never imagined ragini in a Western outfit.. She looks perfectly fit in it.. She was looking hot.. He couldn't take eyes off her.. Suddenly swara jerks him..
Arjun:Ragini, you look stunning...
Ragini blushes.. She was little uncomfortable in this outfit. Swara insisted so she had no option left than wearing it.. Everyone said that sho looked beautiful in this dress.. So she is getting more comfortable in it..
Swara: come on.. You guys please leave.. Do the rest of talking during your drive..kk have a nice time..
Ragarjun: okk. Bye swara..
They both sits in car.. Ragini was tensed.. Arjun lightens her mood by casual talks and tthey reach their venue.
Laksh was waiting for them in that restaurant... He already took a seat in a corner.. He came by his bike so that no one identify his car.. He wore a jacket and cap also.. He saw Arjun and Ragini coming inside and his jaws hung open seeing Ragini in a dress.. He never knew his innocent ragini could look so hot.. She looked stunning. . He has no words to describe her.. But deep inside he felt bad that Ragini got dressed up like this for that Arjun .. She never did this for him.. She was always shy and traditional with him...
It was a couple restaurant.. Arjun wanted to take her to a place where they can be alone.. But he knew that she won't be comfortable with that . so he selected this restaurant.. Not so crowded yet not so secluded.. Arjun make her sit on the chair holding her hand.. Ragini smiles at his gesture and Laksh was burning with jealous.. Ragarjun were talking about each other.. Their likes.. dislikes.. Et.. Arjun was conscious to not mention about her past or laksh in their convo.. Ragini was smiling during their conversation and Laksh was not liking it.. He doesn't like to see smile in her face due to some one else than him. He was getting possessive ..
Suddenly a person asks all the couples to come to dance floor.. Ragini was little hesitant..but when Arjun extended his hands for dance she coudnt deny if.. He has done many things for her.. He made her laugh heartly after a long time.. So she gave her hands to him..
Ragini:Arjun,I dont know to dance.. This is my first time..
Arjun: you just move with me. I will handle it.. Don't worry ..kk
And they comes to the central stage.. They looked like a royal couple.. Everyone were staring at them with envy.. Including laksh.. He is gritting his teeth.. Clenching his fists..
When Ragini kept herhands on Arjuns shoulders a small smile came across Arjuns face.. He was little hesitant to keep his hands on her waist.. Ragini was also nervous... Only laksh has touched her.. But Arjun is her fiance more than that her best friend now. So she give him a assuring node and Arjun kept his hands on her waist... But very losely... So that she doesn't get uncomfortable...
Song plays.. Haan hasi ban gaye male version...
They were moving with the music.. Arjun moves the hairstrand falling on her face behind her ear.. She felt shy.
Laksh coudnt bear anymore.. Arjun touching ragini and she allowed it.. Only laksh has right on her.. At least he think so.. Ragini is his wife or may b ex wife. But she loves me and I love her.. Arjun has no place in between them. Unknowingly tears appear on his eyes.. He can't watch it anymore.. He has planned something.. He took his bikes and rides harshly..
After dance they were having lunch.. Suddenly Ragini's phone rings.. She gets nervous seeing laksh's number.. Arjun asks her to pick the call and she attends it.
Ragini: Hello
Caller: Ragini.. Iam omi speaking.. Lucky's friend..
Ragini: Omi. Why are you calling me from lakshyas phone.. Where is laksh?
Omi:Ragini am sorry that I called you at this time.. But I tried to call sanskar Bhai and swara bhabi .. They are not reachable so I called you..
Ragini feels that something is wrong.. She gets tenset . Arjun senses it..
Ragini:Omi it's oke.. Where is laksh? Why are you sounding tensed??
Omi: Ragini, laksh met with an accident.. We are now in city hospital.. I wanted to inform someone in his family.. No one was reachable so I called you. Can you please inform it to someone..
Ragini felt like someone stabbed her heart.. She dropped the phone.. Tears are flowing from her eyes.. She is numb.. Arjun rushes to her side.. She is broken.. Arjun doesn't know what happened.. He helds her hand and suddenly ragini hugs himm sobbing.. He can't see her like this
Arjun: What happened ragini? Who called you??/please stop crying..
Ragini: Arjun. I need to go to City hospital soon...
Arjun:OK I will take you.. Come.. But who is there?
Ragini: My laksh.. He met with an accident...
She was crying miserably .. She was not in her senses to realise she said "My laksh" to Arjun,her fiance..
Arjun felt heart broken seeing Raginis care for laksh.. He cheated her.. Played with her emotions.. and still she cares for him. May b she still loves him.. And he felt bad... He can see pain in her eyes.. He hides his tears and take Ragini to car..
On the way she tried to call swara.. But couldn't connect. She was still sobbing.. She just want laksh to be alright... If anything happens to him a.. She can't think about it.. Arjun tried to console her but in vain. He is feeling g bad seeing Raginis condition..
They reach hospital and she rushes inside.. Arjun doesn't know what to do.. He stand outside only..
Ragini sees Omi and he takes her to laksh's room..
Ragini was crying like anything.. Omi told her that nothing to worry laksh is ok . Some minor injuries in forehead, legs and arms. But she was not listening to it
Ragini gets inside the room .. Laksh was lying on bed with bandags on his forehead.. Hands ..and legs..
Ragini in low voice: Laksh...
Laksh listen this and gets upto see a crying ragini.. He really felt bad seeing her in tthis state..but somewhere inside his heart he was happy that she still cares for him.. Ragini sits in the bed aside him..
Ragini: Laksh.. Are you alright?? Is it paining?? What did doctor say?? Why are you being carless..
Laksh: Shhh ragini stop cryinft. Scold me as much you like. But please don't cry.. He cups her face.. Ragini i can't see tears in your eyes.. Please ragini.
Ragini: Laksh.. Please be careful laksh.. What if something happened to you...
She stops.. She realise what she did.. She suddenly gets up and stand in a distance.. Laksh really felt bad..
Ragini just then remember about Arjun..
Ragini:Sorry.. I will come now.. Arjun is with me.. He is waiting outside... Let me go aand bring him..
Ragini leaves confused with her own behaviour and she felt bad for ignoring Arjun..
Laksh was smiling thinking about Ragini's concern for him. He is happy.. He knows that she still loves him.. He is more important to her than that Arjun even now.. He is really happy..
Laksh:Omj I said na she will surely come.. I knew if anything happens tome she will rush to me..
Omi: Lucky you are mad.. What if Ragini comes to know about your plan.. What if she learns that this was your plan to destroy their date and bring ragini to you.
Laksh: She will never know this . only we both know it..
They hears a sound outside and turns to see a furious Ragini standing outside who returned to ask if anything they require... They don't know what to say.. They bends their head down.. Laksh was feeling to kill himself.. .Ragini comes to him..and makes him stand. .

Laksh:Ragini...
He couldnt complete before that Ragini slapped him hardly..
Ragini: Shut up laksh.. Are you not fed up with this.. Playing with my emotions. You always did this.. Why can't you leav me alone.. Y can't you see my happiness.. Why this fake accident and drama.. What do you want?? You wanted me to move on.. and now you did this all to destroy our date.. Why laksh why??? Why can't you let me leav in peace.. She sits in the floor and cries.. Laksh is shattered.. Even he is crying. He is the one who made her cry.. Always he did this.. Played with her emotions once again ..
Laksh: Ragini.. Because I love you. It took me so long to realise it... I can't live without you ragini. Iam incomplete without you.. Iam not perfect at all.. But when you are with me I feel complete.. She I see you with Arjun ,j feel like someone taking away my life from me. Ragini.. Please forgive for my mistake and please come back to me.. Please.. M begging you. I know that you love me.. Please ragini.. I really love you.. You are my life Ragini.. I realise that j never loved swara.. It was always you..
Ragini gets shocked listening to his confession.. She gets up from the floor with teary eyes. Then she slaps him hard.. Once more
Ragini: What do you think of yourself laksh?? When you dont want you can throw me away and when you want you can take ne back?? Huh?? Do I look like a puppet to you..?? You think because of tthis fake drama m going to forgive you.. Never.. I will never ever forgive you for whatever I did.. My marriage is fixed with Arjun . and it will take place in one week. I hate you laksh.. I hate you for whatever you dis to me in the past and for this fake drama.. What do you know about love?? Love is not a joke laksh.. One day you say you love Swara.. Another day it ur baby kavya.. Then now me.. I can't trust you anymore.. Please.. Leave me alone laksh.. Please..
Laksh: I know it's difficult for you to trust me again. But I will regain your trust ragini. You are mine.. My true love...

Ragini: I was never yours and will never be.. Don't think so.. M leaving.. And thank God none in your family get to know about ur fake accident.. Just remove all this bandage and leav to home..
Ragini leavs from the room.. Laksh sits on the bed.. he bang's his bandaged hand on the bed.. It starts to bleeding and he closes his eyes in pain..
Omi follow Ragini..
Omi: Ragini, please listen to me once.. Please..
Ragini: what have you got to say now Omi?? Any new justifications?.
Omj: Ragini please listen. I agree that laksh planned this to bring you here.. To destroy your date.. But accident was not fake ragini. He himself hit his bike to a tree so that he gets injured. He is injured for real.. He has deep cuts in his hand,leg and forhead.. He is doing this to himself as a punishment... But he loves you truly ragini.. I know him from very long time.. But I have never seen him this much shattered.. He hates himself for cheating you. I can see in his eyes.. True love for you.. Ragini please give him a chance..
Ragini stays numb.. Laksh really loves me.. He hurted himself for me.. He was really in pain.. A drop of tear appear in her eyes.. Laksh was standing on the entrance of th rolm listening to this. His hands are bleeding.. But he couldn't feel any pain.. His heart is wrenching with pain.. Ragini turns to look at him.. She can see pain in his eyes.. A deep eyelock between them.. 2 pair of painful eyes.. Ragini wants to rush to him.. But her innerself stopped her from doing so.. Laksh realises that he lost his ragini
Ragini: Take care laksh.. Don't do such stupid things again.. It's ny marriage next week..
Arjun also comes there by now.. Not understanding anything.. Ragini tooks his arms and leaves from there .. Laksh is broken into pieces.. He falls to the door and cries out loudly.. RAGINI...
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Lovely 😳😳
It's awsome especially the hospital scene 😭😛

poor laksh and ragini 😆


Update soon
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Not much but my right eye moistened a little after reading the last part of the last part..
Poor Laksh!
Thank u neetu... thank u so much for giving us such a wondersful n dream story! This is what all I wanted..
N more thank u for Laksh's state..this made my love stiff for Laksh..I love him more after reading this..
I'm loving Arjun..his care, respect for her..I love him..I love how selflessly he loves Ragini..I love how after seeing her with Laksh, so close, he did not enquire anything..I love how after seeing Ragini crying for "her" Laksh, his love did not get affected but grew more for her..I love every time he makes her smile, I love how he makes her comfortable.. I love how he doesn't touch her without her permission.. I love how he gets lost in her when she chants prayer..I love everything about him..he is an ideal husband..a dream husband.

But I LOVE LAKSH MORE! He is imperfect, he is wrong, he is impulsive, he is good for nothing..but I only love to see him with Ragini!
IDuring the dance seq, I don't know but I was smiling seeing arjun but actually, me too was jealous seeing him WITH RAGINI..

Moreover.. arjun hv had enough.. plz don't break his heart😭
Unite RagLak soon..I can't see my Laksh in this condition..
You know it was always my dream dialogue from Laksh 'i never loved swara'..thank u for that!
I always wanted Laksh to crave for Ragini n now I m crying for it..

Update soon neetu..
N sorry for commenting late

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