ENTANGLED INTERLUDES -A SwaSan FF -Chap 10- Page 2; AN- PG 86 PLS READ - Page 10

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res for prologue 😊 Please bear with some delay Shru...as I am caught in an absolute avalanche of commitments. 😕

Un Res

Shru 🤗

I am really fighting against time on a number of commitments. But couldn't resist un res'ing here, coz I didn't want to delay my response.🤗

A very intriguing start indeed. I just love a formidable, resolute Sanskaar Maheshwari...employing his sheer brilliance and guile to chilling effect. 😊 The hero who has shades of an anti hero in him, but its all down to the fact that his character has such depth, such power, such resilience. Tamper with this man, and you would wish you hadn't ever thought about committing that folly. 😉 Oooh, me likes. 😳 😉

From what I could deduce from the well paced and thrilling prologue, Sanskaar had been completely enchanted and entranced by Swara---who for some reason (perhaps instigated by her complete waste of a paternal family, the Gadodias), called herself Ragini? Now she seems to be in tears of utter frustration and grief, wanting to speak to Ragini, but that dragon of a Dadi won't let her.

She seems to have also met with Lakshya somewhere---gone to a coffee shop with him? Sanskaar has got surveillance photos of those interactions, it appears. But Swara was meeting Lakshya on behalf/ for Ragini? Because she tells Dadi, that she absolutely needs to speak to Ragini; Ragini would want to know what had happened with Lakshya? 😊 Interesting...Interesting...😉

And where is Lakshya, I wonder? Sanskaar was furious and angry with himself, almost cursing himself for feeling that pull towards Swara, thinking that she had taken him in, made a fool of him. 😕 He seems to think Swara had something to do with his cousin's disappearance? Wonder if Lakshya is just a hostage in this, or does he have some sinister/ not so above board plans of his own? Against Sanskaar perhaps? 😊

Thrilling, thrilling----the possibilities! The soul connect between SwaSan was well done---Sanskaar growling out her name bitterly (though he said 'Ragini'--Swara's alias, not 'Swara')---but still, Swara felt a shudder through her frame, thinking she could hear someone focusing so intently, so furiously on thoughts of her. 👏 😳

Nicely done, waiting for Chapter 1.

Loads of Love,

----Viji

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res..

Unres...

Hi Shruti dearest🤗

I have forgotten lot of Res due to my schedule..So dont want to forgot this one either.. Totally loved it dear.. New FF from you was more than enough to get excited but the whole prologue was really intriguing as well..Sanskar is searching for Ragini, Swara is trying to get past dadi and meet Ragini ..Interesting..I cant wait to know more..Knowing you i am prepared for lot of twists and turns in this journey.. Once again i am really happy to know you have started another FF dear..

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Res!

But you already know how much I loved it right? xoxoxox

Unreserved:

Firstly thank you for starting your new FF. Given your disinterest in the show in the past few days I was almost afraid that you wont write this thing & we would miss out on a good story. So 🤗 for beginning this...and knowing you, if you have begun you wont leave it half way xxx

OK so now coming to the prologue, I loved how for a little while you maintained the mystery of who the girl in the picture was - swara or ragini. But then Sunny isn't going to feel THAT way for anyone else but his Swara😳 And then that all powerful ever present cosmic connection between them! If only people who had such a connection could later on understand how connected they were even before they had met...wouldn't it make their relationship even more meaningful😳 😳

While imagining the whole office set up in my minds eye I was imagining the offices of Pearson - Specter - Litt from Suits USA😳, Harvey's office to be more specific!😆 And this Sanskaar seems no less than Harvey😳

Originally posted by: lucky.m

shru🤗

res😛

Unres

First of all ..welcome back ..I am super duper excited for this one ..One of my fav is back on block..yay..

Prologue

Seems damn intersting shru ..A complete different setting from DK..Cant wait to see the plot unfold ..Prologue already left me wanting more..😛

and thanks for the clarification ..I was confused hwen he said ragini when I felt it was swara .and the comsic connection element back to play ..😳.

Chapter 1

shru .any genre and style ..your words can just crack it ..

and wehave all 4 charcters making an entry mutual freinds party .

Sanskaar ..I am already in love with this guy autocratic and arrogance😆..cant help aadat se majbooor ..😳 and his heart as usual tugged by only one ..swara nad swara too couldnt help than to notice his features and captivated by him at least for few min ..I can see sparks already 😉

Sanky ki business rivalry with sekhar ..very interesting

Laksh - Flirty but struck by ragini .hmm ..all set to land all of them into trouble and entangle..

Looking forward to see the equations unfold b/w all 4 .. and Swasan ka scene I can totally imagine happening in front of my eyes ..and only few can manage to do that..you are one of them..One more awesome read on its way and I am all for it

Love

Lucky

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810

Awesome...

thanks a lot for a new ff.

serial is so boring now a days ... only ff keeping swasan alive...

thanks once again.

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Res for 1

Unreserved:

So we have Amar, Sonica with us in this story. And Tarun too?😆 Bas koi Nikita ya Anuj mat daalna! Please Like I keep repeating I like anything which has detailed descriptions of women going ga ga over Sunny...I mean how can they not?! So that way the first part was a complete treat for me☺️ and it gets better when Swara too is drawn to him...again...HOW CAN SHE NOT?!😆

Swara seems to have a real sad BG story. Ragini wont even call her her sister? And she is wasting her time with such a person? IDK after that all of Swara's happiness in having found at least Ragini makes me go a little 🤔 I hope Ragini's love for her sister whom she calls her friend is genuine...at least more than what we have on the show!

Also you made RagLak sound interesting in this one😆 and that is no mean feat😆 It was fun reading about them. And of course SanLak were being the perfect brothers like always😎 The joke about the drinks being on Sunny...😆

Now, if only Sunny had gone back to the party...

Originally posted by: bilvyina

Nice update..continue soon...take your own time to update..we wil wait..thankz 4 pm

Originally posted by: dilwali

Brillant update and back with bang Shru. Story seems very interesting.