ENTANGLED INTERLUDES -A SwaSan FF -Chap 10- Page 2; AN- PG 86 PLS READ - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Hey Shru,😊
Such an amazing update.👏
Liked RagLak part. Laksh was in his full mood to converse with Ragini. Ragini was reluctant at first, but finally gave in. Both Swara and Ragini r having a past which is interlinked with each other, but both care and love each other. Swara is really having a painful past. Poor girl. She lost her mother. Just loved the SwaSan part. It was love at first sight for both of them. Sanskar was himself surprised that when he himself don't like girls, how did this girl, our Swara affected him so much. So much that he couldn't see her crying and was feeling angry at those people who misbehaved with her. Even Swara was feeling something for him in her heart. Her pains were vanished for a moment when he, our Sanskar was around her. Dadi is evil here. Even I'm not liking Shekhar here. Update soon. And thanks for the pm.😳
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Thank you all so much for the wonderful comments on Chapter 1 you lovely people 🤗. Will try and respond after work and am already mulling over what to cover in the next chapter so hope you will enjoy the continuation 😉
Love,
Shru x
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

Dear shruthi
🤗
Hope you are doing great! I have been so irregular here. And will probably continue to be due to many commitments on every ground.

Congratulations on the new start.
😊
It would be as always intriguing to read, I'm sure. I have just vaguely been through the prologue. Ragini and Sanskar have as usual set the wheel in motion in their own ways. But from where I see, there ahead, is a very twisted path for the four of them. In that case Would be an enticing and exciting journey all the way till the end.

I hope and will try to be as frequent as I can on this thread. But if I can't my apologies before hand.

Sorry for the short reply. I'm already on the move.

Cheers
N


Dear Nalini 🤗

Really good to have you back and on this thread especially 😃. Please don't worry, I am struggling with far too many commitments myself and am delayed too and often not able to reply as I would like to. I also have to read so many stories including yours but am way behind on that too- sorry!

Thanks so much for reading and liking the Prologue. Ah yes there is some serious twisting and thorns too in the path ahead and hopefully what I have in store with be surprising and a little exciting 😉.

Lots of love and hope we will connect again very soon!

Love,
Shru x
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Hi Shruti, looking forward to reading more. A very different story to DK family historical saga. This is more modern day and a sauve and cosmpololitan character in Sanskar. I am interested to see how Swara's character will emerge over time. For me Swara's character has always held a hidden depth of steel to match Sanskar. So looking forward to next chapter. Wishing you all a good start to your weekend. Rgds, Wynn
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Shruthi
Sorry for the late reply. Even though I read the chapter early morning but since travelling by train could not post comment.
Shru the picturesque description is still vivid in my thoughts. Swara by the railing, her waist length hair dancing in the breeze, Michelangelo sculpture by the name sanskar walking towards her, their intense
eye lock...I never believed in love at first sight. But here you convinced me through your writing that it is possible l. Even though the impending heartbreak is bothering me now itself, the " falling in love" which will be beautifully written by you for sure is making me restless for the next chapters. I know you are quite busy but I hope you won't keep us waiting.
Love, veena.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Hi!
Finally got some time to comment, well..the prologue is really very intriguing!! Seems something quite new here. Sanskaar wants to destroy Ragini it seems, will be very interesting!!
Will be waiting eagerly for further updates, and will comment on chapter 1 as soon as possible.
Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Shruuu love...

You are back...missed u alot...but i know ur busy n needed that break after giving us your master piece DARK KNIGHT...

Coming to ur latest FF...ENTANGLED INTERLUDES...well the name itself is quite promising..read the synopsis n prologue..it was intriguing..i love suspense n thriller genre...this one would be another outstanding work of ur...InshaAllah...

Sansku he was our knight in Dk..have to think new name for him here now...soon..im soo stuck in DK still...soo sansku looks in revenge mood..wondering what u have decided to shock us..what misunderstanding / game is played???by whom?? N soo manny lifes entangled in it??? Ragini is evil here too or not??(hoping not)...soo many question..ahhh excited for this ff...

Will wait for chapter 1 eagerly...

Love u muahhh

Loads of love
Talia


My dearest Talia 🤗

I am back yes although in a limited capacity:) and am glad you are on this thread 😳. I am still getting withdrawal symptoms from our DK 😭.

I am glad you liked the Prologue and thank you for your wishes- Ameen!

Aha- I have some hopefully interesting things planned which I hope you will all enjoy but we shall see. Sanskaar in this is meant to me a mean lean machine 😆. Ragini- she is not evil no, but as you know with me anything can happen anytime 😉.

Hope you found Chapter 1 satisfactory:)

Thank you for this hon and lots of love xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Hey dear Shruti🤗
Read the chapter in morning itself but couldnt post my comment as was busy whole day in some college works.


Coming to the update, it was amazing.
I just love the way you use words to describe anything.
Its like your descriptive parts makes readers to feel actually whats happening in the story.


Do Sanskar have a past here?
I felt that after reading about his thoughts over girls.

I just loved your description about Swasan as gorgeous tiny swara and handsome tall Sanskar

Swara's past...I really don't wanna say anything except I can literally feel everything you write about that...I guess you know the reason.

Really liked Swasan's first meet...loved their invisible yet amazing connection.

Shekhar and Dadi 🤢...not at all liking both of them here😔

Will be waiting for mystery to unfold.
Will be waiting for the next update dear.
Thanks for the PM

LOVE
- Harshada

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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Shru🤗🤗

un res for prologue and chapter 1 - Pg 5
Super excited to get tangled in your new series and the start was awesome⭐️👏 I am loving it

Love
Lucky


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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Brillant update and back with bang Shru. Story seems very interesting.

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