ENTANGLED INTERLUDES -A SwaSan FF -Chap 10- Page 2; AN- PG 86 PLS READ

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Dearest Viji, Talia and Nalini 🤗

Your wonderful comments made me so very happy! Am fighting time again so haven't replied as your comments need attentive replies to do them justice:). I will try to respond soon but if I can't please know I treasure your words and observations and am praying you will like the story as it unfolds!

I am touched and this is the much needed motivation to work hard on Chapter 1 which is work in progress 😃

Love you guys xoxo

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Hello dear people 🤗

I have just posted Chapter 1 earlier than I expected I would manage. I hope you all like it- will nervously wait to hear:). As with before, madly multi tasking but will read every comment and appreciate even if I can't respond or reply late!

Love,

Shru x

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Res

Shruuu love...😉

Well i reserved quite quickly..but im super late in unreserving...😭 sorry

Coming to chapter 1 ..it was superb...swasan n raglak first encounter...👏i was in aweee...

I just loved setting of this story...modern era...in a luxurious plush hotel...my baby

..sansku irritated in attending anniversary party of friend..amar n sonica..well u introduced real names if swaragini characters..it was cooll...😃 lakshya he appears a big flirt ...😕anyways...their bonding was amazingly presented...

Swaragini on the other hand were also in party...though sisters but everyone knows them as friends...well much is not revealled but both are not very happy...shona misses her mom😭...their story revealled little bit was intriguing...👏

Raglak n swasan encounter was great..whereas ragini n lakshya talk...swasan just looked each other..both had felt a sudden spark...loved swasan eyelock but it was disturb by shekhar ..i sooo hate him...idiot...but tgat moment was enough for me..as it has swasan...😳

Waiting for next baby...sorry being late...😭

Love u..muahhh😳

Talia😳

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Krishna Priya

@bilvyina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Nice update..continue soon...take your own time to update..we wil wait..thankz 4 pm

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Res for 1

Unreserved:

So we have Amar, Sonica with us in this story. And Tarun too?😆 Bas koi Nikita ya Anuj mat daalna! Please Like I keep repeating I like anything which has detailed descriptions of women going ga ga over Sunny...I mean how can they not?! So that way the first part was a complete treat for me☺️ and it gets better when Swara too is drawn to him...again...HOW CAN SHE NOT?!😆

Swara seems to have a real sad BG story. Ragini wont even call her her sister? And she is wasting her time with such a person? IDK after that all of Swara's happiness in having found at least Ragini makes me go a little 🤔 I hope Ragini's love for her sister whom she calls her friend is genuine...at least more than what we have on the show!

Also you made RagLak sound interesting in this one😆 and that is no mean feat😆 It was fun reading about them. And of course SanLak were being the perfect brothers like always😎 The joke about the drinks being on Sunny...😆

Now, if only Sunny had gone back to the party...

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Shruuu🤗

Such a lovely first chapter.

I'm so happy that their connection is there as they set eyes on each other or the first time. Sigh.☺️

I loved how you weaved the contrast in the characters of the two brothers and gave insight to Swaras past. It was blended in so well with the flow of the story.

And your descriptions of our Swa&San.

Gorgeous tiny Swara and tall handsome Sanskar.

I don't know I always dig tall men and and relatively smaller women together. I feel ki it brings out this balance. 😆

So I especially liked that.

Damn. You surprised me at the end. I was just waiting for them to talk and then boom. Shekher Gadodia😆

I swear I was more annoyed at him than perhaps our Sanky was.

I mean seriously, I was so thrilled they met and especially because I wasn't expecting it that this soon, it was such a pleasant surprise and then I was so sure that because they met they're obviously going to talk.

Will have to wait for the next one no? Please please update soon.

You write so well Shruti. I actually felt as though I was there with them and that is a truly amazing feat for an author.👏

Thank you so much for sending a pm. This has definitely made my morning.🤗

Lots of love

Nandini

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swathi90

@swathi90

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Nice update as usual😊,loving this story seems to be different one, swara and ragini r step sisters shekhar s pathetic as usual🤢,poor swara felt bad he s such a coward😡,poor shomi had gone through so much because of him😡,sanskar seems to be a typical business man,laksh playboy😳 ragini swara bond need to read few parts more, laksh ragini,swara sanskar r attracted towards each other at first sight only😉, want to know where this attraction of them leads update soon

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

1st chap awsmly written.
Swasan 1st meeting lovely.
Aww!i love it u use ramta's real name.thy r cho chweet.
Ovarall lovely updt.lets see hw it progres.
Thnks 4pm shru.

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svg98

@svg98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Hey..
So glad to see you back with a new ff..I so missed reading your story..
Just read the prologue and chapter 1..
The concept is amazing..too intense and thrilling at the same time..Sanskar sent shivers down my spine..he assumes Swara to be Ragini..I don't know what is his plans and what he is going to do..but he seems to be a predator waiting to hunt down his prey..and Swara seems to be the prey..

Swara is broken and not considered an important part of the family..and what must have happened that has made Sanskar so angry and plus their feeling for each other..amazing concept and beautifully executed by you..

Chapter 1 was awesome and absolutely mind blowing..

The way they both met..literally sparks flew when the gazed into each other eyes..passion blazing hearts thudding between Swara and Sanskar.. the first meeting had to be like this..amazingly written..Sanskar was so handsome and Swara so every beautifully.. Their personalities..inner feelings was beautifully described.. The pain to Swara losing her family and not accepted by the new one..Raginin being her only anchor..and then Sanskar not affected by anyone..just a icy ruthless businessman..everything was just perfect..even Ragini and Lakshya were looking so good together..

I think the family and business rivalry..also the misunderstaing of identities will lead to the problems between them..something happening to Lakshya and Sanskar considering Ragini and Shekhar to be the culprits..Shekhar seems to be a vile and spineless man..plotting and planning to ruin Maheshwari..waiting to see DP and other family members..just don't want to see Sanskar hurting Swara which I think kind of looks impossible at the moment..from the prologue it is definitely clear the Sanskar love his family especially Lakshya to the core and he would destroy anyone who harms them..Shekhar seems to me playing dirty and I don't think he cared for Swara..he won't mind that she is becoming the pawn and is hurting the most in this game..also Swara would do anything for her sister..her love for Ragini will make her even sacrifice herself if she has to..so that she could bring happiness in her sisters life..as from her past Swara craves for family love and she will go to any lengths to protect them too..

Can't wait to read how love blossom between the pairs between this chaos and battles of families against each other..
Update soon..

Piya

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Niyati Gupta

@Niyatiswaragini

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Hey shru..

Omg!! This one is just incredible.. I mean it really take me going. I could never forget to mention ur superb command on language along with the blend of awe inspiring storyline and superb execution.

Hmm something related to suspense Is always thrilling N wen it have the casting of ur favorite artists it's like best with the best. Sanskaar seems to be the most effected with the happened probably. N Lakshya seems to be missing from the scene in prolouge. Was Sanskaar mentioning ragini or swara?? That photograph.

Dadi appears to be an evil here too. Y she dint let swara talk to ragini. N where was swara. This was really binding. N wow the way you explain is just superb basically emotions and the environment.

Prolouge was good enough to be a fan of this storyline.

Chapter 1

Mmm it clearly explained sanskar's reluctance to get along with girls. I guess some past may be. And the usual lucky... Loved his stud sort of attitude.

Swaragini were there too.

It seems that ragini didn't accepted swara by the way she introduced swara to sonica. But no doubt ragini loves swara.

I really liked Laksh and ragini intro part. Swara poor girl, her emotions well expressed. She was broken. N some stupid fellow stepped on her feet.. Sanskar's noticed that.. Wow.. Love at first site. Beautifully explained. Swara crying, sanskar's unable to control his feet from approaching her.

Shekhar gadodia, I m definitely not liking this creature he seems to be negative. Let's see how u unfold the mystery. In all this was enough to make anyone speechless.. Look how great I m still I wrote this much. 😉😉😆

Well written shru

Love

Niyati

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