ENTANGLED INTERLUDES -A SwaSan FF -Chap 10- Page 2; AN- PG 86 PLS READ - Page 11

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

Shruuu🤗

Such a lovely first chapter.

I'm so happy that their connection is there as they set eyes on each other or the first time. Sigh.☺️

I loved how you weaved the contrast in the characters of the two brothers and gave insight to Swaras past. It was blended in so well with the flow of the story.

And your descriptions of our Swa&San.

Gorgeous tiny Swara and tall handsome Sanskar.

I don't know I always dig tall men and and relatively smaller women together. I feel ki it brings out this balance. 😆

So I especially liked that.

Damn. You surprised me at the end. I was just waiting for them to talk and then boom. Shekher Gadodia😆

I swear I was more annoyed at him than perhaps our Sanky was.

I mean seriously, I was so thrilled they met and especially because I wasn't expecting it that this soon, it was such a pleasant surprise and then I was so sure that because they met they're obviously going to talk.

Will have to wait for the next one no? Please please update soon.

You write so well Shruti. I actually felt as though I was there with them and that is a truly amazing feat for an author.👏

Thank you so much for sending a pm. This has definitely made my morning.🤗

Lots of love

Nandini

Originally posted by: swathiinduru

Nice update as usual😊,loving this story seems to be different one, swara and ragini r step sisters shekhar s pathetic as usual🤢,poor swara felt bad he s such a coward😡,poor shomi had gone through so much because of him😡,sanskar seems to be a typical business man,laksh playboy😳 ragini swara bond need to read few parts more, laksh ragini,swara sanskar r attracted towards each other at first sight only😉, want to know where this attraction of them leads update soon

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

1st chap awsmly written.
Swasan 1st meeting lovely.
Aww!i love it u use ramta's real name.thy r cho chweet.
Ovarall lovely updt.lets see hw it progres.
Thnks 4pm shru.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Dearest Nandini 🤗

Thank you so much for this lovely set of comments 😳. I always myself feel the SwaSan connect that I cannot help but write it in. I never tell myself it seems dramatic as I like drama but with a healthy dose of realism but that just feels perfectly natural to me.

I am pleased you found the initial etching of characters worthy. Of course a lot to do there but I hope I will manage. Haha, *hi5* re tall men and smaller women! I have always had that too. Funnily enough my real life Sanskaar i.e. my husband is over 6 feet tall and I am small 5.4-5.5 😆.

Ah, the "talking" is postponed 😈. Shekhar I suspect will cause some serious reactions in this one and not in a nice way 😉.

Thank you again for the huge compliment in that you feel I can draw the scene enough to make you visualise 😳. I will do my best to update soon but we have a serious illness in our family so but let's see. This is proving the best distraction in situation where we are all helpless 😭.

Lots of love and talk to you soon,

Shru xoxo

Originally posted by: Wynn

Hi Shruti, looking forward to reading more. A very different story to DK family historical saga. This is more modern day and a sauve and cosmpololitan character in Sanskar. I am interested to see how Swara's character will emerge over time. For me Swara's character has always held a hidden depth of steel to match Sanskar. So looking forward to next chapter. Wishing you all a good start to your weekend. Rgds, Wynn

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Dearest Nita 🤗

I am so grateful for this, especially as I know you have serious time constraints like I do:) Thank you Nita! Really pleased you are intrigued by the Prologue and I hope I can manage to take this the way I want it to go! Haha, there will be twists and turns but in a very different way from DK I guess. Am aiming for a different feel and the plotting too is meant to be less epic style:). Look forward to seeing you on this Nita, miss our talks - mmmwah! xoxo

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Shru,😊
Such an amazing update.👏
Liked RagLak part. Laksh was in his full mood to converse with Ragini. Ragini was reluctant at first, but finally gave in. Both Swara and Ragini r having a past which is interlinked with each other, but both care and love each other. Swara is really having a painful past. Poor girl. She lost her mother. Just loved the SwaSan part. It was love at first sight for both of them. Sanskar was himself surprised that when he himself don't like girls, how did this girl, our Swara affected him so much. So much that he couldn't see her crying and was feeling angry at those people who misbehaved with her. Even Swara was feeling something for him in her heart. Her pains were vanished for a moment when he, our Sanskar was around her. Dadi is evil here. Even I'm not liking Shekhar here. Update soon. And thanks for the pm.😳
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Shruthi

Sorry for the late reply. Even though I read the chapter early morning but since travelling by train could not post comment.

Shru the picturesque description is still vivid in my thoughts. Swara by the railing, her waist length hair dancing in the breeze, Michelangelo sculpture by the name sanskar walking towards her, their intense

eye lock...I never believed in love at first sight. But here you convinced me through your writing that it is possible l. Even though the impending heartbreak is bothering me now itself, the " falling in love" which will be beautifully written by you for sure is making me restless for the next chapters. I know you are quite busy but I hope you won't keep us waiting.

Love, veena.