Chaal - ||A tale of lie || (RL & SS)Part-3 on Page 22

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Soumi baba 😭 tu hi re ka kya hua

Superb prologue 👏
Lakshya 😡 disgusting and sanskar supporting him 😡

Now this is a revenge story 😉 i am loving it

Waiting for the part 😈

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isaritha

@isaritha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Woah this is interesting... Superb Soumi 👏

Eargerly awaiting for the next part... I know u gonna give suspense touch to this story & cliffhangers too 😆

Jaldi update karna 😛

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Twinkle twinkle li'l star
Soumi, this story is dumdaar..😆

Pta hai kya hua tha, maine ye kal hi padh liya tha..par comment nahi kar paayi..my phone's battery u see..

Loved this ff..never knew u write so good..
Laksh is a creep!! A crappy monster!! 😡

The girl is Swara or Ragini? If she's Ragini, how will she fall in love with the person she hates so much n wants to destroy him?
N if she is Swara, how will she fall for Sanskar?
Question horses r riding in my mind..
Better u update soon..
Love u

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Kaveetha

@Kaveetha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Omg.. Shoumi.. Very interesting...

Eagerly waiting to read further.

Plz update gustaak dil also...

Thnks for the pm dear.

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: elsanna
Interesting di... update soon...

Sure taniska😉

kyun naam sahi pakde hain na???😆😆😆

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Wohooo soumi...
Interesting prologue...thriller i just enjoy it alot...waiting for update...wondering who is that person...u wrote amazingly...

Talia

Talia🤗

That person can be anyone bt surely nt one any1 can expect upto Epilouge