Chaal - ||A tale of lie || (RL & SS)Part-3 on Page 22

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soumi gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: aamias
Hi soumi 😳😳
After so many days u don't miss me u fully forget me😭

I missed you dearie love u take care
Awesome start

If i forgets u i'll nt msg/pmed u abt this idiot😡😕😆

I love u itna sara🤗

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Teddy94

@Teddy94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Amazing prologue...

Laksh is disgusting 😡

Waiting to know who's tht person... Update soon 😊

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Kiara.25

@Kiara.25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Hey dear🤗

That intro is awesome and some more👏👏. Excited to know, who will take revenge from maheshwari brothers😡 😡and what will the fate.

continue soon. waiting for it.😃

love

kiara

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Khub valo...
Amar suspense story porte khub valo lage.
Nxt part taratari updt korbi.

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noureenrazia

@noureenrazia

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Awesome is an understand statement...

Wow update part one soon...

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sudhi03

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Awesome start soumi😊

Ugh laksh😡

Who is the mystery person

Please update soon😳

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

res
unres...
soumi 🤗
really sorry for late comment...
I loved loved the concept...
the prologue is super thrilling... lakshya drove someone to suicide ...ni excuse can justify him.. but m gonna wait till epilogue... so seems like sanskar has to pay price for being his elder brother nd swara for being sanskar's wife... ragini for being lucky's wife...
it's very interesting ..
also I loved the swasan first meet... that is about to happen ..lol...
all nd all.. m excited... update soon...

Edited by sharif_lafungi - 9 years ago