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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1
Soumi very interesting
Pls updated soon...

Sure dear😳

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Ria Banerjee

@ria.april18

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Res...

Maarna mat Soumi kal pakka unres kar dungi..😛

Unres...

Ebar tui amay moner anonde bokte paris ar marteo paris(alpo kintu😛😆)

I know i am too late...actually i had my exams too few days ago and missed so many stories in this forum. So now i am reading each story one by one slowly.

Ok so coming to the story now...

I love the name of the story..'Chaal'...it is very intriguing...😳

So its a suspence thriller?? Well its my favourite genre...so i am sure i will love this story...😊...infact i already loved the prologue and part one...

So Laksh here is a spoilt brat and Sanskar is blind in his chota bhai's love??

Characters here are quite different from the show i guess.

Never seen Sanskar supporting anything wrong and here he is even covering up his bro's such a big and heinous crime??😡

I am sure he us going to pay for this big time and curious to know how??

So swasan and ragya are married couples and swasan are going to be parents soon...⭐️

And the million dollar question...who was that girl??(I am quite sure that the person was a girl😉)

I know you will not answer my question as this is the main suspence of the story...so only one thing i can request...update soonish...😳

And i am assuring you thatnow onwards my comments will be on time...😃

-Love

Ria

Edited by ria.april18 - 9 years ago

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Hi Soumi,😊
Kmn achis??😃 Onek din pore update korli!!😳 Tr stories gulo miss kor6ilm ato din.😳
Awesome and interesting PM.😉 Angry at Laksh and Sanskar.😡 Who's the person?? I think its either Swara or Ragini.😳 Update soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

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tithi1812

@tithi1812

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

New and intriguing concept...

BT I don' t like laksh..😡 i guess,its revenge kind of story..

I would like to see tashan between them..do cont soon..but I don't think that person either swara or Ragini..coz u wrote 'that person wipes off his tears'..this can't be any girl..let's c..may b m wrong

Edited by tithi1812 - 9 years ago

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: tithi1812
New and intriguing concept...
BT I don' t like laksh..😡 i guess,its revenge kind of story..
I would like to see tashan between them..do cont soon..but I don't think that person either swara or Ragini..coz u wrote 'that person wipes off his tears'..this can't be any girl..let's c..may b m wrong

It can his/her🤣i love to twist things anytime any moment😉

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tithi1812

@tithi1812

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: soumi93

It can his/her🤣i love to twist things anytime any moment😉

😔 ohh no...this is cheating soumi...

I thought I got it right...😉 🤣

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sudhi03

@sudhi03

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Aww you are such a brilliant writer soumi😊

Amazing update

Story is so interesting. Waiting for the past to get revealed.

Plz update soon😊

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Shinning_AD

@Shinning_AD

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Your an amazing writer loved it👏

I thought it would be Swaragini but now mabe not?

Is Ragini really not going to come back from her jogging😭 Hope something happens to her will love to see What Laksh would do😆

Update soon😳 Can't wait to read more

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tithi1812

@tithi1812

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Wow...nice update..u can really twist things anytime..😉 this is not at all what I thought... waiting for d past to get revealed.. I think,storm is about to come...ok no more assumption...tui puro story change Kore dish 😡 waise,u don't have any prblm na...jodi ami toke 'tui' kore boli..!!! 😊

Edited by tithi1812 - 9 years ago