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Hansika.....

@Hansika.....

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Interesting Update.
Thanks for the PM dear.
Continue Soon.

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: ria.april18
Res...
Maarna mat Soumi kal pakka unres kar dungi..😛

I am still waiting for u to unres😆😡

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-Claptrap-

@-Claptrap-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Mein aagayi.. 🤗

This was unexpected.. I was shocked 😲 Swara pregnant!

Swara is pregnant 😃 Aww!!! Cho cute..My poor Sanskaar.. He couldn't see his champ's face.. 😳 Just wait for sometime Sansku.. That morning kiss!! 😳

My heart stopped beating when I saw Raglak married!!! 😲 😲 Raglak have been in a relationship from the first year!!! 😲 But that ragging incident happened when he was senior na.. 😕 So Raglak were already in a relationship 😆

Mmm.. Laksh loves Ragini.. 😲 😆 Again it was shocking for me... 😆 .. So someone is following Ragini.. Maybe someone who wants to take revenge from Laksh.. Jo bhi insaan ho.. Bas kidnap karke leke jaa Ragini ko.. It's my order!!! 😆

Now my thoughts are going wild 😆 Awesome update 😃

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-Claptrap-

@-Claptrap-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: soumi93

Hiii😳
If i m nt wrong u r priyanka Right???😉well i cn be wrong😆mercy on that😭
Lets see Kaise Narak me sarati hoon usse😉

It's Poorvi 😃 koi baat nai .. Hojaata hai kabhi kabhi 😆

I too want to see that 😉

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hi Soumi,😊
Kmn achis??😃 Onek din pore update korli!!😳 Tr stories gulo miss kor6ilm ato din.😳
Awesome and interesting PM.😉 Angry at Laksh and Sanskar.😡 Who's the person?? I think its either Swara or Ragini.😳 Update soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Valo achi ami😳

haan re xms assignment niye khub busy chilam bt nw i am back😃

Part-1 is updated...will reveal all secrets in the Epilouge dnt worry😆

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: -Claptrap-
It's Poorvi 😃 koi baat nai .. Hojaata hai kabhi kabhi 😆
I too want to see that 😉

I am sure after seeing all of u guys whether is swasan/ragya clan will throw juts chappals on me🤣

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sudhi03
Aww you are such a brilliant writer soumi😊
Amazing update

Story is so interesting. Waiting for the past to get revealed.

Plz update soon😊

Thnk u sudhi😳

glad u liked the story😳

the past will be revealed in upcoming parts

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD
Your an amazing writer loved it👏
I thought it would be Swaragini but now mabe not?

Is Ragini really not going to come back from her jogging😭 Hope something happens to her will love to see What Laksh would do😆

Update soon😳 Can't wait to read more

Hi anjale😳 aww thnx dear😛

Lets Ragini if ragini comes back or not??????lets see what laksh will do????

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Wow!first part is really interesting...I can't wait to read the next part.

A very well written and well balanced update!:)

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: tithi1812
Wow...nice update..u can really twist things anytime..😉 this is not at all what I thought... waiting for d past to get revealed.. I think,storm is about to come...ok no more assumption...tui puro story change Kore dish 😡 waise,u don't have any prblm na...jodi ami toke 'tui' kore boli..!!! 😊

Lol😆

I never chaned d stry🤣

Its just ur assumption never match up wd my thoughts😉i am a twist queen u knw na😆

Na re kono problem nei ja khusi bole daak😳I am all ok 😃