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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

wow...as always an amazing start



Thanks so much, Prachi. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

Part 1:

Now while almost all the FF's make me go "yes this is how it should happen in the show!" this one is something I do not want happening in the show at all😆 Reason: I do not trust Swara. She will spout some nonsensical shit like "haalat se lad sakti hoon, kismat se nahi" & maybe get back Sanskaar's louuu to him because SHE thinks that is what he would want now that he has forgotten her😆 I want Sanskaar in firm control of all his senses bas!

Lanny my dear 🤗

😆 Don't worry, the Swara in my fic would never say anything so silly. 😆 😉 (Though ofc the one in the serial is sadly shown fully capable of feeling and saying such things!)



OK now coming to the OS, the more the show progresses the more I depend on FFs to give me my daily dose of sensible SwaSan. It is such a delight really to see all medical, legal, humane principals working & in place Patients in hospital with real doctors & nurses, no pervert helpers, old uncles behaving their age...aah!😳

😉 I really wanted to show some logical sequence of events---like you said, on legal, medical and humane principles. Accidents and memory loss cases do happen, sadly in the real world too. But seldom do we see such a sequence of events as they showed in the serial. Sigh...giving up every pretense of rationality in the quest for melodrama. 😕

So glad I could give you a dose of sensible SwaSan, without pervert helpers/ rescuers. 😆 😉


And then the patient himself! A writer who understands that memory & personality are two different things😆 He may not remember much but that wont change who he is. He will still be the same man...and oh my what a man!

Oh yes, I completely agree, Memory and personality are 2 different things, just because one can't remember much about what had transpired in the recent/ not so recent past; doesn't mean that one's essential character traits, values, attributes of one's personality, would change.


Waiting for the next update Viji 🤗




Hey Lanny my dear 🤗🤗

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Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

Oh my.

Viji this chapter was superb. ❤️

Thanks so much, Nandini 🤗

I always wanted to see this kind of a story, where Sanskar would lose his memory and think of Swara as the 'khooni'.

I don't know but I seriously think he'd at least be willing to listen to someone owing to the fact that he has, evidently underwent a memory loss. Thank you so much for writing this.

I completely agree. Sanskaar would obviously have a heart versus mind battle going on, but despite his confusion, I think he would ultimately look at things with his customary analytical ability. He does have a very formidable, clinical thought process. 😳 😊

I love how you gave emphasis on Sanskars determination to get back to that someone. The cosmic connection is rather pleasing to read.
Sanskar knows that if hers is the only face he remembers when he can't even remember his own name there has to be a connection.
Him being quite logical and trying to find a reason behind why he was shot - if he was shot that is- him trying desperately to remember and most of all his need to remember everything is amazing.

So glad you loved this. 😊 Yes, I do firmly believe that Sanskaar would show a lot of resolve and grit in wanting to recover fully; on order to get back to that person, whom he senses is waiting for him, whom he has that undeniable connection with. (Though he cannot yet recollect consciously who that person is).

Update soon haan. 🤗

Love
Nandini



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---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

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finally read it..
viji...🤗 for this extraordinary concept, all of us here have 1000s of theories on swara falling off cliff nd everything..but I don't think many had that thought that what will happen if roles are reversed..so for that..cheers girl..
coming to the update, even being unconscious nd having no memory, Sanskar maheshwari is Sanskar maheshwari,strong willed, determined...human..

Thanks so much, Akku. 🤗🤗🤗 So very touched by your warm words.

Yes, even when in a coma, and later, having recovered consciousness but suffering from retrograde amnesia; Sanskaar always displays his customary grit, determination and resolve.

nd dear God he remembers swara shooting him? that's bad...but in the end he realized what his family did to him...does it hints that he remembers kavita nd supposed betrayal from lakshya and dp ?

Yes, he does recollect Swara aiming that pistol and apparently taking a shot at him---but you would have seen from the further updates how he also registers the very rational fact that there is no bullet wound on his body. 😉 And yes, he recalls Kavita---but as you would have read later in Chapter 2, his memories of her seem curiously overlaid and overcome by his thoughts of the mysterious woman who shot at him. Whose image somehow entices and captures his thoughts so often. 😳 😉
we have all witnessed how destructive Sanskar maheshwari can be when he sets out for revenge nd plays it...
M actually anticipating reunion nd M afraid what is going to fall upon swara... accusation of hurting him which she will die before even thinking of nd his declaration of love for kavita(this kavita involvement is my mere prediction based on that last line, kavita is going to be there na? )
this was beautiful viji...do update soon 🤗



I am so very glad you loved this Akku. 🤗🤗

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Loads of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Res, page 3*crying*

Unres,
Viji dearest,

😲 What was it that I just read? Dear, sweet, God, please tell me he is not back to those "They killed my Kavita" days of Sanskar Maheshwari. Gee, I'm too excited that my fingers and toes are tingling!🤪 This is the Sanskar I so loved on the series and his journey of darkness to light had left me in awe, so we are all set to retake that journey...to see how Swara would yet again deal with this storm of a man and be in anchor to sanity and bring him home ashore...just wow!❤️

It was really a brave attempt dearest, to completely twist the serial plot line and made Sanskar fall from the cliff edge after Swara had shot at the criminal I guess? And that is the only memory he has of her. This is so thrilling!

At the same moment, in his empty mind he feels that there is someone, he has to return to. He feels that face he remembers is vital and yet, now I wonder, blinded once more by his rage will he feel the pull towards his soul mate or not?

When I started on reading for a moment I entertained a possibility that there might be a Miss.Wood here, all set to save the hero and be the villain herself. Since till that point the plot was quite a upside down of the original. Thank god that was not the case and it had been someone with senses who had saved Sanskar. At least we have one worry less.

Now, when will you complete this? I'm dying of excitement, a bad case of curiosity and a stroke or two of imaginations as to what might happen next. Hope you will update before my condition gets severe.

Love you loads,
Saku



Saku dearest 🤗🤗🤗

I have been so touched and thrilled with your feedback on this FS. You know how I look forward to your comments.
🤗

I am so happy to know that you are loving this portrayal of the Grey Sanskaar Maheshwari, his journey back from darkness to the light, as it were. Of course, this time round, while certainly he has slipped back into his earlier mood of bitterness and vendetta; he isn't in the complete grip of that dark crevasse as he was earlier.

Though he cannot consciously recollect Swara, there is a strong tinge of the light and joy she brought him, which has left an indelible mark on his soul, heart and psyche. His conscious mind just needs to recollect that. And yes, his singular focus, grit and determination are at play here; pushing him to recover in both body and mind. He does feel that pull to a mysterious someone, whom he senses is waiting for him; even before he even consciously recalls who he is.

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Viji🤗🤗

When I first read the title ,Agatha Christie popped in my mind but how apt is title for the plot u laid out and sanskaar ka memory loss ..you are on writing spree and we forumwaasi's arre just loving it😳

Thanks so much, Lucky sweetheart 🤗🤗

but this is damn dam exciting ..role reversal and Dont tell me sanskaar went back 5 years when he wanted to avenge for kavita's death..😆😆 Can it get more interesting darlin ⭐️ aap tho kamaal ho aur aapki writings laajawaab👏👏

😳 So touched by those words, am very happy you loved this yaar. As you would have seen, Sanskaar hasn't gone back 5 years exactly, he has recollected his memories to about a year to 15 months prior to the present time. Which means, he has no clear recollections of what happened, after May 2015. 😉

Cant wait for him go back, cant wait for him to meet the lady in his dreams and too excited to see the events unfold..🥳

No thank you for one more lovely piece in making and outstanding narration like always . I could feel sanskaar infront of my eyes..dont keep us waiting

I was very touched to hear that Lucky---that you could see Sanskaar before your eyes while reading this fic. 😳 I consider that a very lovely compliment, it made my day!

LOve
Lucky



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bilvyina

Nice story...loved a lot...i alwayz want this plot were sanskar forget swara...realy need a break frm current track frm serial...u fulfil my wish thank u..keep going



Thank you so much 🤗🤗

Glad you loved it.

Cheers

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kiara.25

Viji🤗

Awesome shot👏👏. Damn excited for next part.
Sanskar tone said that whatever he remember is not and has not completly gained his memory. MM wasi are in trouble.



Hey Kiara 🤗🤗

So very happy to know you loved it, dear.

Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks Aahana 🤗

Glad to know that you loved it.

Cheers

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Viji...my friend🤗

The concept of story is really interesting.when the memory loss track of swara started i also think a similar idea.
The suffering of Sanskar...then i think when this condition is reversed what will happen to swara...
The beginning of the TS is nice.The way you write the story it is really interesting.
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
With lots of love
Shamina



Hey Shamina 🤗🤗

Thanks my dear, I am so happy to know that you found the story interesting, and liked the chapters so very much.

Lots of Love

---Viji

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