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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Unreserved on 12.

And I vote for a long chapter on Sunday😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My Dear Friends 🤗🤗

Please bear with me for the delay in my individual replies, to your very lovely comments on this thread. I need to make a work related trip from Thursday to Saturday, and have some tasks to tie up before then. Squeezing in my few pending Un Res's on buddies' threads, in the spare time I have. 😊

I will be starting my individual reverts the soonest I can; in the meantime, please know that each of your comments means a tremendous lot to me. I have been reading each of them several times. 😳 You've all really made me feel most touched and blessed.

Love you All, and Hope you have a fabulous day.

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Hello..
Me again..I don't know whether I have said this before..but u are an amazingly beautiful writer and that was a mind blowing update u just wrote..u breathe life into Swara and Sanskar literally..

Coming to the update..The beginning was absolutely beautiful..this is the Swara I always wanted to see..yearning every moment every second for Sanskar..the comparison to the cranes for magical..the symbolism was epic..Sansake and Swara are exactly like them..two halves of a single soul..if anything happens to the first half the second half would wither away slowly in the pain of separation..the scene of Sanskar falling from the cliff was somewhat like the show but still had a huge lot of difference at the same time..Swara pining for Sanskar..it has always been my secret wish to see that..every time one or the other way Sanskar is the one who suffers the most..pines for love.. But reading this story I know Swara love'e Sanskar with the same intensity as that of him..the scenes of Sanskar falling from the cliff had the power to send waves of pain right through one's heart..the family emotions were also portrayed wonderfully..everyone lost a huge part of their lives.. But everyone believed at some point of time that Sanskar is not there and as expected Swara refused to believe that.. It couldn't have been possible..Sanskar promised that they will spent their lives together and she knows he never breaks his promises.. She was alive that was proof enough to that Sanskar is alive too..three months..anybody would give up but the she didn't..the nightmares of her having that scene repeatedly losing him every night must have been so painful..but her faith stood like a strong pillar..he was her center of universe..now the sun can may hide sometimes but always rise..

Part-B was soothing literally..Swara seems to have seeped into his soul at the first sight all over again..it was as if Sanskar fell for her the moment she came dashing is his arms..you know it was i felt like I have started watching their love story once again..just the other way round..Swara already in love with him..and Sanskar in confusion and dilemma..She blushing prettily at Sanskar's snide glances at her underneath his long lashes was like first rays of their love..Swara is so innocent..she don't even have an idea what's is going on his handsome husband's head..Sanskar's pride knowing Swara is his and his choice of manglsurtra could made my heart flutter..It is so Sanskar..I knew Sanskar can never hurt Swara..his pain thinking what he might have done to her and when her eyes teared talking to him how his ring came with her proofed this very well. Sanskar might be in anger and confusion by his slowly incoming memories but I know as Swara would tell him of their marriage..his doubts on their marriage being a loved one will fade away..Swara's pain was so very evident..it brought tears to my eyes to see her mixing his and hers clothed just to fell him..clutching his ring to live though the nights of agony and despair was heart-wrenching..but it is also very evident at the same time that Sanskar's heart has recognized its other half..his eyes never leaving hers..raising of his heartbeat.. Thoughts of his wife..would surely down his revenge plan.. As he is still trying to bring his family down..this Sanskar really sends chill down your spine..but once he contact his detective and Nakul it may clear of his all doubts..
Sanskar thinking so deeply about his wife's beauty and their conversation about the bed was so intense and romantic..his mind seem to betray him..he already have started falling her and soon will not be able to control heart and it assures me to a certain point that even that memory of Swara taking a shot on him would not allow him to hurt her in any way..because if he hurt her it will not only shatter her but him too..he will not be able to live without her as is does not have the enought strength to stay away from her..just want him to believe Swara and in her love for him..trust her..because him doubting her love and their marriage can cause a lot of trouble..just want him to leave himself lose as u said like the ocean and let Swara the wave merge in to him..

Ragini is going to play a very important part in their love story..she knows her guru very well and only she is the one who can tackle him now as you said when the friend consider himself as a foe..true Sanskar can never hurt Swara but still he needs to be back as he can hurt himself and everyone else if he continues to move the way he is doing right now..but it would amazing to see the guru and student amazing encounters again..that too for Swara where last time Ragini was the destroyer this time she would be the protector..

Again thanx for the beautiful update..can't wait to read more..update soon..as I say always just want to read your stories on and on..

Piya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
viji🤗
running to read . I know I am late😕

res 😛be right back
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Viji dear... 🤗
Part 2 & 3 were superb dear.
I loved the way you portrayed sanskaar's feelings & his inner turmoil. You are awesome. Well written. 👏
Eagerly waiting for furthermore updates.
Love u..
Take care.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

viji🤗

running to read . I know I am late😕

res 😛be right back


Viji🤗🤗

Oh ..I am lovin it ...reading the whole scenario from swara's pov ..its just like totally new perspective though the feelings coursing through are same 😕, recreating that part ..absolutely bang on👏👏 and that reference to sarus cranes ..aww ..so so touching and parallels drawn with swara's situation , that grief stricken period when sanskaar fell of cliff😭😭..again ..you are too good in striking right chords and totally loved how you have shed some light on feelings of family members, something which we hardly get to see other than those glaring flash of light on their faces😆

then comes next part

sanskaar ..lol.😆.I had a good laugh about at his not so successful attempts😆😆.to resist the charm of his loving wife.loved every bit of it...I cant pick a fav in that part bcos i loved whole of it ..👏❤️ It was love⭐️

Laksh and ragini

Its confirmed ..You are going make me love these both 😆..Though laksh is completely unaware of his bhai's intentions but ragini ..Just waiting for guru and shisya face off ..are we going to get one soon??

waiting waiting😉 awesome like always👏


Love loads
Lucky


Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Hi Guys 🤗 🤗

Will start with my individual replies to your lovely comments tomorrow. Thanks for your patience with this slight delay.

I've been immensely touched by your feedback, both on comments here as well as on pm's. For those who have asked: Yes, the Sanskaar--Ragini shadow boxing will start in the next chapter. 😊 Can't reveal more on their respective plans/tactics for now. 😉

And would have a lot of SwaSan, of course. There's still a lot to be sorted there...Sanskaar is still in his heart versus mind battle after all, though where Swara is concerned, his heart always does seem to have the edge. 😳

Lots of Love, and Good night All, 🤗

----Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Priyu 🤗

Do let me know what you thought of the 3 parts up till now, when time permits.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Damn exciting
Eagerly waiting
Res



Thanks Sujay 🤗

Happy you found the concept and the chapters very exciting.

Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Hey Viji :)

Yayyy...New story!
Going to read now...



Hey Nupur 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much yaar. 🤗 And so touched with your PM the other day, with all your warm words about my writing. Really happy that you are liking this story a lot.

Lots of Love,

---Viji



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