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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 5
Swara came inside the kitchen to help everyone. She asks Sujata- mom kya main aapki madad kar sakti hoon.
Sujata- haan theek hai beta.
Swara starts chopping vegetables with Sujata. Sujata by mistakenly cuts her finger. Swara immediately brings the first aid box. She starts scolding Sujata in a cute way- kya mom agar aapko kuch ho jata to.aap bhi na mom.
Sujata- are main theek hoon. Chal hogaya na bohot kaam hain.
Swara- bilkul nahi. Jab tak aapka ghav theek nahi ho jata aap kitchen mein nahi aayengi.
Sujata- par kaam
Swara- hum sab haina.
Sujata- par
Swara- mom
Sujata- acha main jaa rahi hoon tu naraz mat ho.
Everyone were admiring this bond and ragini is jealous because of this.
Evening all men return to house. Swara serves everyone with her adrak and ilaichi chai. Sanskar says- tumhare haaton ka chai to bohot acha hai
Swara- thank you.
Everyone complete the tea and were leaving but were stopped by laksh.
Laksh- papa main chahta hoon ki humari muh dikhayi rasam jaldi ho jaye taki main sabko bata sakun ki( looking at swasan) ragini meri patni hai.
Sanskar- bade papa hum reception organize karte haina. Wo mere business clients meri patni se milna chahte hain.
Dp- idea to tum dono ka acha hai par dono kaise ek sath ho sakte hain
Swara- bade papa agar aapko koi problem nahi hai to kya main ek suggestion de sakti hoon
Dp- bilkul beta
Swara- bade papa hum dono ko milakar celebrate kar sakte hain. Mera matlab hai hum dress code ko thoda traditional rakh sakte hain aur wo saare rasmein nibha sakte Jo muh dikhayi rasam mein hoti hain aur hum un business clients se bhi mil lenge fulfilling sanskar's wish.
Do- theek hai. Aisa hi hoga. Annapoorna tayariyan karo.
Ap- ji.
Then everyone leave for their room.
Raglak room
Ragini- Hume kuch karna hoga laksh wo bhi jald se jald.
Laksh- mere paas ek idea hai and he whispers something in ragini's ear.
Ragini - par ye bohot khatarnaak hai. Agar kisiko pata chal gaya to
Laksh- tum na bohot sochti ho
He pulls her and they get intimate.
Swasan room
Swara was playing guitar and singing haan hasi ban gaye. Sanskar was listening to her. Soon she completes her song.
Sanskar- tum na guitar bohot acha bajati ho
Swara- mujhe bachpan se hi music pasand hai
Sanskar- wo to tumhare gaane se dikh raha hai
Both of them smile at each other. Then they both sleep.
Precap- accidents on swasan. Swasan dance.
Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys I want suggestion for the song to be played for swasan dance. I have some in mind
1) Tera chehra ( sanam teri kasam)
2) tere bin ( wazir)
3) mere hath mein (fanaa)
4) gerua (dilwale)

If you want any other song to be played pls post it here. Song which is voted in majority will be played.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤗hey
Read all part in one go. Loved it. Specially swara's character.
Excited to read next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Nice update...
I would love tera chehra song sequence on them
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awesome update 👏
I would prefer tere bin
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Read all updates in a one go..
Nice updates..well written 👍🏼
Tera chehra song my choice
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice to date and doe song choice I would say option 3 will be nice. ...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Guys I'm really sry to say this but I'm will not be regular in updating the chapters as my school has started and because I'm in class 8 I will have to concentrate on my studies. It will be hardly possible for me to come in the forums but I'll try my best to update whenever I am free.
Edited by Nivijo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 6
Swara and sanskar were sleeping peacefully unaware of the deadly plot by laksh against them. Sunrays were slowly falling on swara and she opens her eyes and gets up. She finds herself in sanskar's embrace. She starts thinking about him - thanks sanskar meri zindagi mein aane ke liye. Thank u Durga maa mujhe sanskar jaisa jeevan sathi dene ke liye jo bohot hi understanding hai.
Swara turns towards the clock and sees the time as 7:45 am. She turns to sanskar and wakes him up.
Sanskar gets up and sees the time. He says- tum mujhe jaldi nahi utha sakti thi kya
Swara- main konsa panch baje uthi hoon tumhe uthane ke liye aur wese bhi ab uth Gaye hona jaldi se fresh ho jao.
Sanskar goes to washroom to get ready and swara takes out her clothes. Sanskar comes out of the bathroom and swara goes inside to get ready. Sanskar comes down and sits at the breakfast table. Ragini goes near the stairs and does something and quickly comes down and signs laksh that the work is done.she them comes to the table and starts serving everyone.
Swara was coming down in a simple pink and blue saree
She was waking on the stairs and keeps her leg on oil and she starts rolling on the steps. She shouts- sanskar.
Sanskar turned back and saw an unconscious swara with blood all over her body and saree. He runs to her and keeps her head on his lap- swara utho utho swara. But swara was unconscious.
He lifts her in his arms and runs towards the car. He keeps her inside the car and starts the car. He takes the car to hospital. Others are also following him. Laksh and ragini were smiling inside.
Sanskar and swara reach the hospital. He again lifts swara. In his arms and walks inside the hospital.
Doctor was checking swara and sanskar sitting beside her holding her hand. Everyone else also come. Laksh and ragini were seeing swara's and sanskar's condition and were very happy. Sanskar on seeing them understood that this was their cheap trick but he calmed himself because at present his priority was swara. Doctor- Darne ki koi Baat nahi hai. Zyada blood loss nahi hua hai. Thodi der mein inhe hosh aa jayega. Doctor leaves. Everyone were standing circling swara and sanskar. Swara. Gets her conscious after sometime. She says- sanskar
Sanskar- haan swara tum theek hona tumne mujhe kitna Dara dia swara. Don't do like this ever again okay.
Swara- done
Sujata- tum theek hona swara
Swara- haan mom main theek hoon. Lekin mera discharge kab hoga yahan pe kitna guthan ho raha hai.
Sanskar- discharge ke bare mein bhool jao jab tak doctor nahi bata te tum yaha se nahi hilogi.
Swara- par sanskar
Sanskar- par war kuch nahi ok lete raho
Doctor again comes inside to check swara.
Swara on seeing doctor asks him- doctor mera discharge kab hoga
Sanskar- ye aise hi bolti rahegi aap please ise check ki jiye.
Doctor- nahi mr maheshwari she is absolutely fine. Thoda sa weak hain par it's ok. Ye rahe unke discharge papers.
Doctor leaves. After doctor leaves ap- swara. Tum aaram karo agar kuch chahiye to bata dena
Then everyone except laksh, ragini leave. Sanskar was beside swara.
Laksh- to how are you feeling after falling in our trap. Tch Tch Tch so poor of u swara.
Sanskar- laksh just shut up ok tumhare cheap tricks ke wajah se hum har nahi manne wale hain. Hum tum dono ko expose karke hi rahenge.
Laksh and ragini leave from there after hearing sanskar's words and making dangerous plans to destroy swara and sanskar.
Sanskar completes all the formalities for the discharge. Swara and sanskar come back to the house. Sujata advices swara to take rest and swara and sanskar go up to their room. Sanskar tries to make swara eat her medicine but our swara is swara. She is not at all eating her medicines. Sanskar has tried all methods but what to do she is being stubborn. Sanskar suddenly kisses her on cheek and swara opens her mouth wide. Taking chance sanskar puts the tablet in her mouth and makes her drink water. Then swara realises that sanskar has tricked her into taking medicine and she starts hitting him with her hands. After sometime both of them burst out laughing.
Precap- swasan dance and a life taking accident on swasan

Sorry guys for updating late. But what to do studies are also important na. I know the episode is very lame and boring and some of u expected their dance but guys don't worry next episode swasan ke naam. Done with my blabbering now u guys can comment. One more thing agar pasand aaya to acha hai par nahi aaya aur kuch phekna hai to sirf tomatoes hi phekna wo bhi thode ache wale wo kya haina yahan tomatoes mehenge hain isliye.

Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update
Hating raglak 😡

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