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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

This is my third story. Raglak fans I'm really sorry but ragini and laksh are fully negative. Though at last I will turn them positive but all villiangiri will be shown by them.

Import note- this story is inspired from second love on Telly updates.

Chapter 1

In parkstreet

Laksh was drinking alcohol and blabbering - I won swara Maine tumhe barbad kar diya hai continuously.

Sanskar comes there and tries to control him but all in vain. Swara also comes there because laksh called her also.

Laksh was talking in full talli mode- oh aa gai ho my ex- fianc welcome welcome welcome tumhara hi intezar tha.

Swara- laksh pls calm down you're not in your senses.

Laksh- shut up senses my foot you know I'm so happy today janti ho kyun kyunki maine tumhe barbad kar diya hai

Swara- kya ken rahe ho laksh

Sanskar- lucky tu swara se pyar karta hai bhai.

Laksh- pyar vyar kuch nahi karta iss ladki se maine sirf pyar karne ka natak kiya hai take wo mujhse shadi karne Keliye tayar ho jaye aur main ise Mandap pe chod saku aur iski zindagi barbad kar saku

Swara-tumne aisa kyun kiya laksh maine tumse sach me pyar kiya tha

Laksh- jaanna chahti ho to suno main tumse badla lena chahta tha tumne Jo mere sath kiya tumne mera muh kala kia mere upar pepper spray mara isiliye main tumse badla lena chahta tha. Aur sanskar mujhe pehele se hi pata tha ki tu pagal nahi hai bas natak kar raha tha pagal hone ka. Tujhe kya laga main bewakoof hoon nahi laksh maheshwari bewakoof nahi hai. Ek aur secret batau tumhari pyari si behen ragini bhi mere sath thi aur tumhe laga ki wo tera sath de rahi thi. I won swara mera badla pura hua and he falls unconscious.

Swara was standing numb with out any emotions. Tears were falling from sanskar's eyes too. Silence prevailed in the surroundings.

Sanskar broke the silence- marry me swara

Swara- Lekin sanskar

Sanskar - don't feel ki I'm doing this out of sympathy. I really want everyone to know about their true colors. Pls help me in bringing their truth. If you feel uncomfortable in a real marriage then we can have a fake marriage.

Swara- nahi sanskar main tumse sach mein shadi karne Keliye tayar hoon. Even I want everyone to know their truth. Main tumhara sath dungi sanskar.

Sanskar- theek hai phir kal subah Kali mandir aa jana. Abhi mujhe jaana hoga bye.

Sanskar takes laksh and goes inside the car.

Maheshwari mansion

Everyone are really tensed because it's really late and laksh and sanskar are nowhere to bee seen. Ragini as usual was behaving like a sati savitri types. They hear a car sound and come outside . They see sanskar holding a fully drunk laksh. Ragini asks him - aapne kya kiya laksh ji ke sath.

Sanskar- Maine kuch nahi kiya hai. Ye road par puri talli pada hua tha and also getting beaten up by some goons. When I saw him I immediately brought him home.

Dp- aadarsh ise apne kamre me leke jao.

Aadarsh and sanskar take him to room and make him sleep.

Sanskar comes to Sujata- mom mujhe aapse kuch Baat karni hai .

Sujata- kya Baat karni hai sanskar

Sanskar- Idhar nahi kamre mein chaliye

Sujata and sanskar come inside the room.

Sanskar tells everything to Sujata about laksh. Sujata was shocked because she never expected laksh to be like this.

Sanskar- isiliye swara and I have decided to get married.

Sujata- kya swara ne haan kaha

Sanskar- ji mom

Sujata- theek hai phir mujhe koi appati nahi hai

In Baadi

Swara to herself- maine theek to kiya na. Haan swara tumne bilkul sahi kiya ragini aur laksh ka sach sabke saamne Lana bohot zaruri hai aur sanskar ek acha insaan hai . Mera pura khayal rakhega.

Swara sleeps.

In maheshwari mansion sanskar's room

Sanskar to himself- soja sanskar kal tere liye aur swara Keliye bohot bada din hai.

Episod ends with their peaceful faces.

Precap- swara aur sanskar ke wajah se sab ko lagega Zor ka jhatka. Ragini ki chal padegi usi par bhari.

Index

Part 1- page 1

Part 2- page 2

Part 3- page 2

Part 4- page 3

Part 5- page 4

Part 6- page 6

Part 7- page 8

Part 8- page 9

Part 9(1)- page 10

Part 9(2)- page 11

Part 10- page 12

Part 11- page 12

Part 12- page 13

Part 13- page 14

Part 14- page 15

Teaser- page 16

Part 15- page 17

Part 16- page 19

Part 17a- page 20

Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago

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Nivedita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Guys many of you might think this story is matching with the story I mentioned. But guys this is not true maybe some dialogues or scene might be same but the storyline is completely different. You' ll see the difference in upcoming episodes. Please shower your comments on my story. Thank you.

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mridulakrishnan

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice start dear...and pls pm me the next chapter...

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Krishna Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very nice story continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice concept

Please pm me

Waiting for your next update

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Pari

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Guys many of you might think this story is matching with the story I mentioned. But guys this is not true maybe some dialogues or scene might be same but the storyline is completely different. You' ll see the difference in upcoming episodes. Please shower your comments on my story. Thank you.

Yeah i hv read d story about which you mentioned before. Although d plots may be same but i can also find some dissimilarity and must say i am loving this version too. Eagerly waiting for ur nxt update...

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swakriti

Yeah i hv read d story about which you mentioned before. Although d plots may be same but i can also find some dissimilarity and must say i am loving this version too. Eagerly waiting for ur nxt update...

Thank you so much for understanding because many of them will think that this story is a copied and bash me so I made a note at the begining also at the end also

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 2

Raglak room

Laksh gets up with a severe headache. Ragini comes with lemon water. She gives it to him and he drinks. He suddenly remembers all the nonsense he blabbered in front of swasan yesterday.

Laksh- oh god ragini Maine swara aur sanskar ko kal sab kuch sach bata diya. Pata nahi wo log kya karenge.

Ragini- koi Baat nahi laksh mujhe nahi lagta wo log kuch kar sakte hain. Unke paas koi saboot nahi hai.

Laksh- tum nahi janti ho sanskar wo lomdi se bhi chalak hai. Wo log ab chup nahi baithenge.

Ragini- wo sab chodiye laksh ab hume baadi kelie nikalna hoga humare pag phere ki rasam ko pura karne keliye.

Laksh gets up and gets ready.

In Kali maa temple

Swara and sanskar are standing with two people in bridal dresses. They both sat down in mandap. Pandit is reciting mantras. Sanskar and swara are looking at each other with support, care and unknowingly blossoming love.

Pandit- ab var vadhu pheron keliye kadhe ho jaye.

Swara and sanskar get up and take seven pheras around fire.

Swara's monologue- Kali maa aaj main apne nayi zindagi mein pravesh karne jaa rahi hoon. Mujhe itni shakti do ki main ragini aur laksh ki sachai sabke saamne laa sakun. Pls maa sanskar bohot acha insaan hai use hamesha khush rakhna.

Sanskar's monologue-maa pls Hume aaj aapke aashirwaad ki bohot zarurat hai. Hume laksh aur ragini ko expose karna hai. Maa I have to make up for all the sadness I have given to swara. Wo bohot achi hai hamesha use khush rakhna.

Pandit- ab var vadhu ko mangalsutra pehenaye .

Sanskar makes her wear the mangalsutra.

Pandit gives sindoor to sanskar and sanskar fill swara's hairline with sindoor making her his for lifetime.

Pandit - aaj se aap dono pati patni Huye. Apne nayi zindagi ki shuruat maa ke aashirwaad ke sath kijiye.

Sanskar and swara take Kali maa's blessings.

Sanskar turns to the two people- thank you so much aryan itni jaldi aane keliye.

Swara- haan aru thank you so much.

Aryan- pagal ho Gaya hai kya ye sorry thank you kab se humari dosti mein aa gayi haan. Aur wese bhi mere yaar ki shadi mein main naa aun aisa ho sakta hai kya.

Aaradhya- koi Baat nahi swara. Wese bhi tum meri best friend ho to itna to main kar sakti hoon tumhara liye.

Aryan- next kya karna hai

Sanskar- register office.

Swasan with aara go to register office.

Meanwhile in baadi

Raglak's pagphere rasam is going on. Everyone are enjoying except Sujata

Sujata's monologue- pata nahi swara aur sanskar kaha reh gaye unhe jaldi aana hoga.

Swara and sanskar sign the papers as the bride and bridegroom with aradhya and aryan as the witnesses from girl's side and boy's side respectively. Then they leave for Baadi.

In baadi raglak's pag phere rasam is completed and everyone are leaving. Just then swara and sanskar come inside with hand in hand in their bridal clothes. Everyone are shocked to see swara with mangalsutra, sindoor and jaimala. Especially raglak because they never thought that swara and sanskar will take such a big step to expose them.

Sharmishta- swara ye sab kya hai Shona.

Swara- maa maine shadi kar ki maa. Aap apni beti ko aashirwaad nahi dengi.

Swara and sanskar bend down to take her blessings and she blesses them saubhagyawati bhava khush raho tum dono.

Then they go to Sujata. She blesses them sada suhaagan raho hamesha khush rehna.

Ragini and laksh goes to them and laksh holds her tightly and asks- tum aise kaise kar sakti ho haan pyar karne ka dava karti thi. Mujhse acha ladka mil Gaya hai isiliye isse shadi kar li.

Sanskar- laksh dur raho wo meri patni hai. Swara sanskar maheshwari hai aur tumhari bhabhi hai to tameez se baat karo warna main apna tameez bhul jaaunga.

Swara goes to ragini and says- ragini don't be sad tum janti ho na main tumhe dukhi nahi dekh sakti hoon. Ab chalo apni behen are nahi nahi apni jethani ko hug kijiye devarani ji.

Both of them hug and ragini whispers- tumne ye acha nahi kiya hai swara

Swara whispers- ye to kuch bhi nahi hai ragini aage bohot kuch hone waala hai so brace yourself apne pati ko bhi kaho.

Sanskar- laksh common hug me yaar apne behenoyi ko hug nahi karega.

Both of them hug and sanskar whispers- swara ko chot pahuncha ke tune bohot badi galti kar do ab tumhe saza zarur milegi.

Dp- sharmishta ji aaj hum aapke dono betiyon ko le jayenge. Unki vidaayi ki tayari ki jiye.

Sharmishta takes swara and sanskar into Bose house and she and dida do Bengali rituals to swara and sanskar. She makes swara wear shaka pola and says- mujhe nahi pata ki tune ye shadi kyun ki par main tumhe itna bata doom ki apne shadi ko dil se nibhaao. Theek hai swara

Swara- ji maa

And they lcome outside the house. Everyone leave except swasan, aara and Sujata.

Aryan- acha ab hum chalte hain. Bye

Swasan- bye and once again thank you so much.

Aara also leave. Sujata comes to swara and says- janti hoon main ki mere bete ne tumhe bohot takleef di Lekin phir bhi tumne use

Swara- aunty

Sujata- aunty nahi mom

Swara- mom sanskar ke aakhon me pachtava hai aur me insaan ko doosra mauka dene mein vishwas Karti hoon.

Sujata- tum sach mein hira ho

Swara and Sujata hug.

Sanskar- mom yaha aapka beta bhi khada hai Sara pyar sirf bahu ko bete Keliye bhi kuch rakhiye. Swara and Sujata smile and Sujata hugs him also. They all leave for mm.

Precap- ragini ki chal usi par bhari. Ragini ko milega swara se muh tod jawab

Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago