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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3
Swara and sanskar along with sujata leave for mm. On way Sujata asks them- ab tum dono kya karoge. Tum dono ke paas koi saboot bhi nahi hai unko galat sabit karne keliye. Agar mujhe kuch karna hoga to bata do.
Sanskar- mom humare paas saboot nahi he Lekin hum saboot dhoond to sakte hain na. Aur mom aapko bas us ragini par nazar rakhna hoga. Laksh ke upar nazar rakhna keliye maine apne detective ko already Bol diya hai.
Like this they reach to mm. They three get down. Sujata comes outside and says to pari- pari jaldi se Aarti ka thal leke aao.
Parineeta brings Aarti ka thal. Sujata does their Aarti and swara keeps her feet and walks till the stairs and was about to go inside but sujata stops her and says- ruko swara wo kya haina humare ghar ka rivaz hai ki dulhan andar aati haina to apne pati ke baahon mein aati hai.
Ragini sees all this and says- chachi ji humare shadi ke waqt to ye sab kuch nahi hua to phir inko ye sab kyun karne ko kyun meh rahi hain.
Sujata- wo kya haina ragini jin halaton mein tumhari shadi hui hai hum log is rasam ke bare mein bhul gaye Lekin main chahti hoon ki mere bete bahu puri riti-rivaz se aaye.swara sanskar tum dono ko koi problem to nahi haina.
Swasan- nahi mom.
Sanskar slowly lifts swara in bridal style. Swara keeps her both the hands on sanskar's neck. They both are having an eyelock. Both of them enter inside the house. Sanskar make her stand on her feet and she blushingly gets down.
Sujata- tum dono ab apne kamre mein jaao. Thodi der baad swara tumhari rasoi rasam he theek haina.
Swara- koi Baat nahi mom
Swara and sanskar go inside the room. Ragini and laksh barge inside the room making swara and sanskar smirk.
Sanskar- oh tum log. Kya hua kyun aaye ho.
Laksh- tum dono ko kya lagta hai haan tum hume expose kar sakte ho. Aisa kabhi nahi hoga samjhe tum dono.
Ragini- swara tum ye sab kyun kar rahi ho hum tumhari behen hain aise kaise kar sakti ho humare sath.
Swara- behen to main bhi tumhari thi ragini Lekin kya tumne meri Baat suni nahi na to main kyun sunu.
Ragini- aisa mat karo swara sab log humse nafrat karne lagenge.
Swara- ho gaya ya kuch aur hai, agar nahi to pls Hume bohot saare kaam hain so pls jahan se aaye ho wahi se chale jaao.
Sujata- swara chalo beta tumhari rasam puri karni hai ragini tu bhi chal.
Swara and ragini leave.
Laksh- sanskar
Sanskar- I think tumhe swara ki Baat samajh mein nahi aayi out right now.
Laksh- bohot pachtayega tu.
Laksh also leaves.
In kitchen
Swara makes halwa puri and ragini makes gajar ka halwa. Sujata comes and says to swara- swara kya bana rahi hai
Swara- mom Maine halwa puri banayi.
Sujata- acha theek hai tumse ek zaruri kaam hai aana.
Swara- ji mom
Swara and Sujata pretend to leave but they stand to see what ragini will be doing. Ragini slowly sees no one and takes salt and puts in swara's halwa and immediately keeps the box back in the shelf.
Swara and Sujata comes inside. Just then dadi calls ragini and she leaves to talk with dadi. Swara immediately throws the halwa and starts preparing new halwa quickly. She makes kheer also which is sanskar's favorite sweet. She slowly take chilli powder and adds in ragini's gajar ka halwa.
Swara- ragini tumne mere halwa mein namak milaya na Maine tumhare halwe mein mirchi powder milaya hai ab bas sabko ye halwa khanaa hai.
Swara and Sujata gives hi-fi to each other. Ragini comes and swara and ragini take their dishes and keep on the table. Everyone are praising halwa puri made by swara and hence making ragini jealous. She thinks to herself- Maine to iske halwe mein namak milaya tha phir sab swara ko itna praise kyun kar rahe hain. Swara puts her kerchief down and says to sanskar- sanskar gajar ka halwa mat khao. Main baad mein reason batati hoon Lekin abhi Keliye mat khao.
Ragini starts serving gajar ka halwa. Laksh says- wow mera favorite. Dekhne mein kitna acha lag raha hai kitna tasty hoga.
Ragini was about to serve sanskar but sanskar says- mujhe nahi khaana actually mujhe gajar pasand nahi hai.
So ragini doesn't serve him. Everyone keeps the spoon in their mouth and immediately spits it out. Everyone are drinking water.
Laksh- ye kya ragini gajar halwa mein koi mirchi daalta hai kya.
Ragini- Hume nahi pata laksh ji ki mirchi kaha se aayi. I'm sorry.
Swara then serves her kheer. Everyone immediately eat because of the burning sensation in their mouth. Uttara thought to tease sanskar so she says- bhai kheer kaisa hai
Sanskar- acha hai Uttara
Uttara- acha ya bohot acha
Sanskar- bohot acha
Uttara- awesome nahi hai kya
Sanskar- kheer bohot awesome hai ok main jaanta hoon tu mujhe tease kar rahi hai so don't you dare.
Everyone leave except swara and ragini. Ragini thinks- Maine to mirchi nahi milayi thi kisne milaya hoga
Swara- jyada sochne ki zarurat nahi hai ragini mirchi Maine hi milayi thi kyunki tumne mere halwe mein namak milayi thi so you know jaisa ko taisa. Tumne aaj tak sirf apni behen swara ko dekha hai ragini Lekin main swara sanskar maheshwari hoon jethani hoon tumhari. So aise gandi harkat karne ke bare mein sochna bhi mat warna nateeja bohot bura hoga.
Swara leaves from there and sanskar sees this and smiles to himself because swara addressed herself as his wife and he really happy but confused to why is feeling happy.
Precap- small moment of swara and sanskar. Ragini embarrassed because of sanskar.
Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Awesome update 👏
Loved it
Finally swasan are married 😳
Ab toh raglak toh gayo 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome update 👏 👏
Kash aisa serial mein bhi hua hota
Next part mein thoda swasan moments hota toh acha hota 😃 😉 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Swara's dress
Sanskar's dress
Edited by Nivijo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Read the 3 parts in one go.
Awesome updates dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
awesome update..
I loved the update..
swara did perfect by adding chilly powder...
continue soon..
can u PM me the updates..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4
Swasan room
Swara and sanskar were discussing something seriously.
Swara- Hume kuch to karna hi hoga sanskar ye laksh aur ragini sabko humare khilaf khada karenge.
Sanskar- Lekin hum saboot ke bina unhe galat kaise sabit kar sakte hain. Mere detective se bhi kuch information nahi mil rahi. Maine to socha tak nahi ki laksh itna gira hua insaan hai. Chi use bhai kehte hue mujhe sharam aati hai.
Swara- sanskar Jo hua so hua bhul jaao un sab baaton ko. Laksh ke kuch bhi karne Hume farak nahi padna chahiye.
Night
Everyone were having dinner. Swara and sanskar come down. Seeing them coming down ragini starts sweating little thus making swasan smirk. They also have their dinner and immediately leave to their room.
In room
Both of them changed into their night wears. Sanskar was about to sleep on the couch when swara says- sanskar tum waha kyun sone jaa rahe ho.
Sanskar- nahi swara. Tum bed pe so jaao main yaha couch pe comfortable hoon.
Swara-.are aise kaise ye tumhara bhi bed hai aur wese bhi I don't mind sharing the bed with you aur wese bhi bed bohot bada hum dono ke kafi hoga. Pls aa jaao
Sanskar- theek hai Lekin mujhe ac daalna hai wo mujhe ac ke bina nind nahi aati.
Swara- mujhe koi problem nahi hai.
They both sleep on the bed in opposite directions. Soon sleep overtook them and they slept soundly. Due to the ac swara started shivering and turned to sanskar and hugged him for warmth and sanskar kept his hand on her waist.
Morning
Birds were chirping and sunrays are falling inside the room disturbing swara and sanskar. When they opened their eyes they both saw their position and immediately left each other. Sanskar to remove the awkwardness says- main fresh hone jaa raha hoon tum tab tak apne kapde nikal lo.
Sanskar goes to washroom and gets ready. Swara also gets ready in an anarkali
They both come down. Ragini was about to do Aarti when sanskar interuppted saying- mom main laksh se dono mahina bada hoon na
Sujata- haan to
Sanskar- phir meri patni bhi laksh ki patni se badi hogi right
Sujata- haan she understood what sanskar wanted to say
Sanskar- iska matlab ye hua ki Aarti karne ka haq swara ka hai.
Sujata- sidha Bol sakta haina is Baat ko itna kyun ghuma phiraya. Ragini aaj Aarti swara karegi tujhe koi appati to nahi haina
Ragini- nahi chachi ji.
Ragini fumes inside and gives Aarti thal to swara. Swara starts Aarti.
Om jai jagadeesh hare
Swami jai jagadeesh hare
Bhakt jano ke sankat
Das jano ke sankat
Kshan me door kare
Om jai jagadeesh hare
Jo dhyave phal paaye
Dukh bin se man ke
Swami dukh bin se man ka
Sukh sampati ghar aave
Kasht mite tan ka
Om jai jagadeesh hare
Vishay vikar mitao
Paap haro deva
Swami Paap haro deva
Shradha bhakti badhao
Santan ki seva
Om jai jagadeesh hare.
Swara completes her Aarti and gives prashad to everyone. After that all men leave for work.
Precap- ragini jealous on seeing swara and sanskar influencing everyone.
Edited by Nivijo - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update..
continue soon..
thanks for PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
awesum...read all 4 parts in 1 go...
waiting eagerly for the nxt part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice update, read ch-2,3,4 in one go
Thank u for writing this story.

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