Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august) - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: lucky.m


awww viji ...you are here ..love you ya🤗🤗I am overwhelmed

In mid way of packing ..and your comment made my day,😳 dnt want to hurry in replying for all the lovely words you poured in comment.. Will revert by eod after packing and other stuff done



Love loads
Lucky



Finish your packing dear...you can reply at leisure. 😊 I took long enough to comment with my crazy workload. 😆 😉 And yes---have a fabulous holiday!

One thing I forgot to mention in my earlier comment---I loved how you used such apt quotes, very meaningful and fitted with the story.

The Leo Tolstoy one (on the nature of Perfection), Diane Les Becquets' one on a broken heart (this one was so very poignant), and the one by Ben Jonson about the hope of meeting soon...the placement of each of these was splendid.

Lots of Love,

---Viji


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Posted: 9 years ago
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ufff wat an udate nd now my restlessness at is peak 4 d next one ... luvd the subtle, simple yet funny way their meet proceeded ...giggles ..snifles ..smiles nd apologies...smellss delicious..ummm ..luv how sanskaar wanted to console her wen in he is the one hu is hurt mmm...so they have a cosmic attraction
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Aaaw they met!!
Finally. I can't tell you how happy I'm 😆

I so love this Swara.
And Sanskaar... my poor baby I hope he is not hurt too bad. 😭

His monologues are amazing btw. Such a treat to read. :)

Please please update soon.
As impatient as ever.

Nandu🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Lucky,

You reminded me of my 17 year old self, I hit someone with a ball too, (That someone was an old colleague of dad's) and he was pretty much cool about the bruise as well. I guess partly because the hit was good and partly because I was on the edge of tears.

I really enjoyed this chapter part A and B so much that I'm feeling too bad I couldn't reply earlier. Wasn't home, this is the first comment I'm writing after returning. Hope you will forgive me.

I really find the way you built up the characters very interesting. And the pace is captivating too, neither too slow, nor too fast, it's quite refreshing. I had spent a few good hours before this chapter wondering how you're going to bring them together, now I will spent a few over the next couple of days wondering where and how they will meet again.

It was a crunchy chapter, please return with more soon.

Love,
Saku
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Hey Lucky 🤗

When do you plan to post part 3? After you return from holiday?

Have a nice vacation, dear. 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Hey all
Thanks for lovely comments ..my net connection is sucking at this moment .hoping it would get better ..sorry for delay ..will reply soon. thanks once again just wanted to let u all know all your words means a lot ..typing from.mob so please ignore typos

Love

Lucky

PS. Will be posting chapter 3 this weekend Max by Sunday ..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hey all

Thanks for lovely comments ..my net connection is sucking at this moment .hoping it would get better ..sorry for delay ..will reply soon. thanks once again just wanted to let u all know all your words means a lot ..typing from.mob so please ignore typos

Love

Lucky

PS. Will be posting chapter 3 this weekend Max by Sunday ..😊


Another Sunday treat -😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res for 2B

Dear Lucky,

Nynu🤗

Unres - again first to res and not the first to unres😭

Ayyo ..Does it really matter? I totally get the schedules of working people, you take out time to read and post such beautiful comments , thats more than enough yaar ..😛🤗

Oh, yes he is completely bowled over and has bitten the dust (literally😉) by a doe-eyed damsel who is hurt for having hurt him, even if it was not intentional.

😆😆 Cant put in better words than you😉

Lucky, the way you wrote about those kids and how Swara makes them feel - no wonder they adore her, she has simply won their hearts by just being her loving self. Even Sanskaar could see it though he is losing himself to her eyes (drowning in them more like it - her eyes are what he first noticed).

Swara's eyes .. I dont know yaar I have a special liking for them , may be it has got to do with helly's eyes ,definitely one of her best features, just wanted to highlight the same.and hes gonna get lost in them more often from now😉😆

There is no way Father Benedict or anybody else will order in his perfectly balanced, presently chaotic life. Once she steps in it would be a roller coaster ride for him leaving him wondering as to why he ever wanted a ''balanced' life, how boring! With her life would be unpredictable and absolute fun- most of the time.😊

😆 Well he was hoping father would , but tough luck and ek baar swara made an entry no chance at all😆

Father Benedict enters at the precise moment that Sanskaar is about to state his full name, so she has not learnt that he is a Maheshwari - that sounds to be ominous and I suspect has something to do with the reason that Swara has left Kolkata?

You caught me again, yes she will not know he is maheswari till some more time and it has its own reason and implications in future , Until its revealed I would love to see the guesses coming in😉

Sanskaar embarrassed to remove his shirt and Swara finds that funny - maybe it was good - wonder what her reaction to a shirtless Sanskaar would have been

😳 Shirtless sasnkaar ..I dont know about swara, But I may faint😆 and ek baar tho I am going to make him go shirtless😉 in fanaa

So they both find the other nice, with a nice smile and cute / interesting and are actually hoping to meet again. And their love story starts.

Love might take some time to crop in but yes their story started😳

It was such a warm and lively chapter and your style is such that I could almost visualise Swara, Sanskaar and the two dozen absolutely adorable kid

🤗 Well that was the intent so glad to hear that you loved it so much, thanks nynu


love,
Nyna




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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Interesting...👍🏼


Thanks mystic😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hey lakshmi.. Sorry for not commenting before.. Was busy with my Bros Marriage... Soo now..

Res...

Unres...

Lucky.. 🤗 ... I read the whole parts.. It blowed my mind.. Awesome mannn...your description about swasan their characters... How they differ from each other where just superb.. That cricket ball turned to dodge ball was awesome.. There first meet tooo... 😳 .. I loved it...

Then.. I'm scrolling down for next after finshy read on part 2(b)... 😆 ..

Update soon...

With love...

Kam...



Hey Kam🤗

Thanks a lot, yaar glad you liked it so much and will wait for your comments on 2 (b)

Love
Lucky

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