Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sanjana_cool
hi...it is a beautifully written tightly gripping story
I love the contrast you have shown between sanskar and swara , and their contradictions on the feasibility of the concept of perfection...simply amazing!
sanskar' s lavish yet grounded, perspicacious yet sympathetic and almost perfect characterization is charmingly fascinating
would anxiously wait for the further parts
kindly do PM me when you update!

love
sanjana❤️

Hi Sanjana

Thanks a lot for taking out time to go through SS and thanks for all lovely words😛

sasnkaar is one in SR whom I love immensely and I am just pouring all my love for him in this SS Glad you found it fascinating .. 😊

And I read a part of your FF Love that slaughtered me..though couldn't drop in but I really liked it

When are you posting next part?

Thanks once again , and will definitely PM you next update😊

Lucky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hey Lucky!!!😊
Awesome update. Loved they way SwaSan met or bumped into each other for the first time.😉 So sweet and cute.😳 Loved Swara's concern for Sanskar.😃 Plzz update the next part soon. And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

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Hi Aheli

Thanks a lot

so you liked their first meet haan 😳 so glad to hear that😛

Will try to update next part tomorrow

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Lucky,
unres page 11

love,
Nyna

Replied with love on PG 14😛

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: aditi07
Awesome FF.. loving the story and character build up.. gradually and nicely!!
Very well written, and interesting fresh take on both..

Pls update soon and add me to your PM list.
Cant wait to read further 😃

Hi Aditi

Thanks a lot

hope to see you more around here and will send you a buddy request😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Unresed my post lucky.. On page 11...My angel mate...

replied on pg 14 my fellow angel mate😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: ANSHEL
ufff wat an udate nd now my restlessness at is peak 4 d next one ... luvd the subtle, simple yet funny way their meet proceeded ...giggles ..snifles ..smiles nd apologies...smellss delicious..ummm ..luv how sanskaar wanted to console her wen in he is the one hu is hurt mmm...so they have a cosmic attraction

Hi anshel

your comment always leaves me smiling.. Thanks a lot

Swasan and cosmic connection go hand in hand,😉

Thanks once again😊

Lucky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...
Aaaw they met!!
Finally. I can't tell you how happy I'm 😆

I so love this Swara.
And Sanskaar... my poor baby I hope he is not hurt too bad. 😭

His monologues are amazing btw. Such a treat to read. :)

Please please update soon.
As impatient as ever.

Nandu🤗

Nandu

Yes Yes they met finally 😛.. I am telling you again yaar your happniess and excitement..😛 infectious😉

So much love for sanskaar haan .. dnt worry, he's not hurt that bad just a sore shoulder😉 he might miss out on gym for few days..😆 Hope u dnt mind

Monologues you liked them😛 of course you will love anything that has to do with sanskaar 😆

will update tomorrow and thanks dear

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Lucky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: sneharay
Beautiful update.. 😊

Thank you sneha😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

@ Viji🤗

Since we agreed on policy of no thanks here comes hugs for you ..🤗🤗

Lets start with our darlin sasnkaar😳

Yaar I had enough of ruthless angry young business tycoons in the dailysoaps

I wante our sanskaar to be different and Cant tell you how happy I am that sunny boy is being loved so much for the same in Fanna😳

Ahh kinght in shining armani🤣 thats awesome I love the title you gave him .. well we can say he is modern day knight and he would come in BMW instead of white horse for his lady😉

Swara's past is the key to whole plot ..You will get to know but only after few more chapters 😉 and your guess is right about DP, might be bit of a problem in future for swasan but whats a love story without putting up some fight against odds😊 hain na?

That shirt part is my fav. and shirtless - All I can think is salman ..like he is synonym for that so had to add him and well our hero is bit embarrassed about showing off his well toned body before pretty girl, I am planning to take his shirt off atleast once in fanaa😆

Cant say more about how you captured those nuances of subtle attraction b/w swasan ..in your words it's even more beautiful..glad you liked the family dynamics, that's like crux of the SS😊

Yes I am on leave but not on vacation yaar, back to home since I wanted a good amount of rest

🤗 for the wishes and for such a lovely comment

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Lucky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Hi Lucky,
Saku🤗

You reminded me of my 17 year old self, I hit someone with a ball too, (That someone was an old colleague of dad's) and he was pretty much cool about the bruise as well. I guess partly because the hit was good and partly because I was on the edge of tears.

😆😆 Sounds fun and interesting😉

I really enjoyed this chapter part A and B so much that I'm feeling too bad I couldn't reply earlier. Wasn't home, this is the first comment I'm writing after returning. Hope you will forgive me.

Thats absolutely fine yaar..no worries on that part You dropped by, means a lot😊

I really find the way you built up the characters very interesting. And the pace is captivating too, neither too slow, nor too fast, it's quite refreshing. I had spent a few good hours before this chapter wondering how you're going to bring them together, now I will spent a few over the next couple of days wondering where and how they will meet again.

It was a crunchy chapter, please return with more soon.

wow You were thinking about fanaa.. 😛😛🥳Will not keep you waiting more, will post an update by tomorrow

Love,
Saku