Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august)

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: lucky.m

nynu🤗🤗

Lucky 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Unres page 8 (First to res but not to unres😭 )

love,

Nyna

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
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Dear Lucky,

Nynu🤗🤗

"He was the epitome of professionalism. He was perfect. He was Sanskaar" Parties bore him and business meetings interest him. And something missing in his personal life"

Can I have one, made to order, for myself, and myself only? Sigh, where are the men like these in the real world.!😳

Me too me too😛.one for me as well too much competition for sunny😆 kaash yaar..koi sanskaar jaisa miljaaaye .life banjayegi😉

Corporate Social Responsibility - eh! sounds very good but I wonder how it turns out in future once he meets the "face" of the Orphanage he wants to help out with, definitely an angel with a little of the devil in her.😉

😆😆 CSR ..well for time being thats the name given but like you said this angel with a little of the devil may soon cast her charm letting ..Well if you notice that's why he was not made face😆 for this project so that he can concentrate more on you know😳😆 who

So the stage is set for meeting Swara - and what a meeting it promises to be - he has been bowled over😊

I love that line bowled over..yeah totally he is and not once can happen many times , vice versa as well

I simply love the way this tale is unfolding - sparks promise to fly.

Thanks sweety😊🤗 glad you are liking it😊

love,
Nyna

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Love loads😊

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Lucky 🤗

Unres page 8 (First to res but not to unres😭 )

love,
Nyna

Nynu🤗

chill maadi, thats ok re😊

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Neha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

nice start and concept...r u a business student sis?

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Asyalover
nice start and concept...r u a business student sis?

Hey Thanks..May I know your name

I was a student MBA ( HR)couple of years back,well some habits die hard😆😆 you know

updated next part ..and hope to see you around

Lucky

Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Res for 2B

Dear Lucky,

Unres - again first to res and not the first to unres😭

Oh, yes he is completely bowled over and has bitten the dust (literally😉) by a doe-eyed damsel who is hurt for having hurt him, even if it was not intentional.

Lucky, the way you wrote about those kids and how Swara makes them feel - no wonder they adore her, she has simply won their hearts by just being her loving self. Even Sanskaar could see it though he is losing himself to her eyes (drowning in them more like it - her eyes are what he first noticed).

There is no way Father Benedict or anybody else will order in his perfectly balanced, presently chaotic life. Once she steps in it would be a roller coaster ride for him leaving him wondering as to why he ever wanted a ''balanced' life, how boring! With her life would be unpredictable and absolute fun- most of the time.😊

Father Benedict enters at the precise moment that Sanskaar is about to state his full name, so she has not learnt that he is a Maheshwari - that sounds to be ominous and I suspect has something to do with the reason that Swara has left Kolkata?

Sanskaar embarrassed to remove his shirt and Swara finds that funny - maybe it was good - wonder what her reaction to a shirtless Sanskaar would have been

So they both find the other nice, with a nice smile and cute / interesting and are actually hoping to meet again. And their love story starts.

It was such a warm and lively chapter and your style is such that I could almost visualise Swara, Sanskaar and the two dozen absolutely adorable kids.

love,

Nyna

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kamila.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Hey lakshmi.. Sorry for not commenting before.. Was busy with my Bros Marriage... Soo now..

Res...

Unres...

Lucky.. 🤗 ... I read the whole parts.. It blowed my mind.. Awesome mannn...your description about swasan their characters... How they differ from each other where just superb.. That cricket ball turned to dodge ball was awesome.. There first meet tooo... 😳 .. I loved it...

Then.. I'm scrolling down for next after finshy read on part 2(b)... 😆 ..

Update soon...

With love...

Kam...

Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Hey lakshmi.. Sorry for not commenting before.. Was busy with my Bros Marriage... Soo now..

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Hey kamila ...🤗

no probs yaar , congratulate you brother on my behalf and best wishes for his married life😛

Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Res for 2B

always first nynu🤗🤗

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kamila.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: lucky.m

<font size="2">Hey kamila ...🤗</font>

<font size="2">no probs yaar , congratulate you brother on my behalf and best wishes for his married life😛</font>

Sure will convey your Wishes to him... I better call you lucky it sounds good... 😃

With love..

Kam..