Swasan OS - Vilasini Visits - Guardian Angel I - Page 4

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Won't do, each one of has a personal invisible guardian, but the magical summoning words are different😆 So I guess (hope) ''Zooterkins' would not work for anyone but Sankaar😉.. I Need to find my magical summoning word, going to start saying random words till it works😆

Vilasini is cute, right? (her name means ''playful' which is quite suitable here) And as for Sanskaar's guardian angel loving him, who doesn't😆 Yes, the angels cannot really interfere too much, so Kavita's ''supposed death' was not their doing.Playful suits her..You got a point who doesnt . 😉

She is a guardian angel, and she loves him, so it is obvious that she would be miserable. But since there is a limit to which angels can interfere, she could nothing but wait and watch.😭 and hope that Sanskaar soon sees reason.

Kosmos - is a nincompoop, (it is a 17th-century old English word meaning a foolish person, but in a harmless way) I love this word...I knew this word, it just slipped my mind on what it means ..And yes now i remember😃

I think Cupid used an extraordinary amount of magic dust, too many of us fell in love with them at that moment. Even today that scene makes me ... I think so too ...That scene was so awesome

She does, doesn't she (which what Shruti (Lannister) had commented on a couple of posts regarding this scene ) Yes she does .

Thank you - for reading and such lovely comments. Wonderful waking up to them😊.I had a wonderful time reading this OS too. So now we are even 😆 Love - Nita

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

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Nyna you nailed it with this os 👏
Seriously what a brilliant os 👏
I loved it from the core
What a brilliant journey of swasan you show with beautifully written
I like vilasini his guardian 👏
And her take on kavita was too good 👏
I seriously loved it
Nyna you are a brilliant writer 👏 do write a new os soon

Originally posted by: TRPS

Nyna! 🤗
don't know you remember me or not, We had a conversation in your former thread. :) but again, after that, because of studies' commitments, I can't come here or read stories. but don't know why, yesterday just a hunch or what, I opened it! An ishmaart move by me! 😎 😃
Whoa! Impishly cute this OS is! I so much loved it and especially this imagination of yours! 😊
Vilaasani (ermm..though so good that Sanskaar is not into Vilaas by any chance . 😛 ) her changing colors as changing Sanskaar's emotions and back stories and incidents and cosmos, (seems Vilaasini is in love with him) some traits like Swara, 😊 all were so good! I had a huge grin while reading it and it was funny too. 😆
I like the way you started it and ended! indeed, Swasan are Magical and guardian angel of each other and Swara perfectly fitting into Sanskaar was so sweet and cute. 😊
really very nice and innovative piece of writing Nyna! and I learned a new word too! 😉 Keep writing! 😊

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Pssst, if you do find it let me know (not the word, the fact that they are real) I shall start practicing what I write😉

Nyna

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear Toshika,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I missed you - and I do remember you. I am so glad you took a chance and read it.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Vilasini means playful (that is the meaning considered while naming her😊) so even if Sanskaar imbibes some of her playfulness, we would not mind it😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Yes, you caught on the fact that she changes colours to reflect her moods - first one👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">As to Vilasini being in love with Sanskaar, nothing strange, she would know him from the time he was born, imagine how irresistibly cute he must have been then</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hope your studies are going well!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Love,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nyna</font>

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

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"Angels are like diamonds. They can't be made, you have to find them. Each one is unique."- Jaclyn Smith

And Sanskaar's angel, just like him is spellbindingly unque, as is this wonderful OS you have crafted Nyna.

I love the concept, I'll explain more in my PS! But the execution is lovely too of course. Vilasini is so graceful and I love the touches you imbued this whole piece with. Starting firstly with Zooterkins- 😆. This instantly reminded me for some reason of Bedknobs and Broomsticks? One of my all time faves along with Sound of Music 😃

Then came the journey of SwaSan- perfectly timed for the 1 year anniversary of a show that gave us a couple that define so much for us- through the eyes of this guardian angel and it was so beautiful and poignant- I am in love all over again. I love the way Vilasini describes the magic that was created, and her utter love and investment into her precious charge, and through him for his soul mate as well. I loved how seeing those incredible moments through her eyes made it so magical and alive.

The touches of humour and wit were perfectly inserted and spaced out- they really gilded the lily IMHO. I loved the contrast between Vilasini's cool sophistication but intensity to Chronos's well meaning but rather bumbling yet good natured efforts- a total reflection to SwaSan's own mix 😉😆. Oh and lest I forget- the whole way of depicting the guardian in changing hues as per the memories was a master stroke 👏👏.

I fear I am getting repetitious but I think you get the picture here that I really found this very endearing and heart touchingly significant. The piece de resistance for me was the outlook on the first incredible sindoor marriage! ⭐️ I too have always felt the rest was all fluff after that and found the rest of the ceremonies all a let down but that sequence to me, is one of the sterling moments in the show that will always make me love SwaSan so I loved it getting that prime importance.

Wonderful Nyna- do write more- you know how much I love reading, be it your comments or through work like this 🤗

Love, Shru xoxo

PS: To share- as one of my currently shelved writing projects (due to DK mainly!) is a book- it is envisioned eventually as perhaps a trilogy but the whole thing is an entire fantasy fiction- my favourite genre- it is centred around lo and behold- a form of guardian angels- although they are not what we traditionally think of as GAs as such 😃

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

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Beautiful OS Nyna!! Sweet and cute just like Sanskaar!<3..lol! I just loved the concept. I really like Sanskaar's guardian angel- Vilasini. Zooterkins!!??!! I don't know why this word feels so familiar! I just don't know why!! But the fact that there is a word which we utter and then forget, all this seems too familiar!

Anyways, letting go of deja-vu. Vilasini's explanation regarding Kavita was too good!! Thank God she'd been there. And her attachment towards Sanskaar was something I felt really sweet. She feels his pain and happiness. Like a true guardian. The ways he explains that she can't hear him but feel his emotions was good! I liked it

Kosmos is sooo cute<3 I love Swara's guardian although he made her fall for Lakshya, (idiot) but still, it was okay! He steals sunsets?? OMG... Again some familiarity strikes, I don't know why I feel that something like this I've read before! But yeah, I do like an imbecile yet cute angel! Nincompoop, reminds me of the Bishop's Candlesticks- a play I had read years ago and first time came across this word. Describes Swara's angel!😆

The angels did so much efforts, to save Swara and somehow make Sanskaar reach there! To imagine if something like this was ever there! Woah.. And that magical scene, when he lifts her up as if she were a fragile doll. I liked this comparison! Fragile doll. cute eh<3 And that time Cupid sprinkled his magical dust! God, this feels so magical😆(Jeez what am I saying) The violins!! I couldn't help laughing and feeling so cute at the same time!! Oh God<3

Well as fake marriage was my favourite track, I love you once again Kosmos! That sindoor filling scene is an evergreen one and I love the angels for that. Even I would have partied with them lol.!
Alcohol?😆 Aw.. But that confession was seriously the best love confession ever!! Couldn't have had anything better than this<3

Finally when she said that you are her guardian angel, that part was the best of the OS Nyna! The most beautiful of all and the truest of course!! The love that SwaSan have for each other is their biggest strength with them being each other's angels! Lovely paragraph and when finally he lifts her up!! Wonderful and actually perfect ending!

Originally posted by: TRPS

Hey dear! missed you too and believe me, I really enjoyed reading this one. 😃sooo cute! oh! errmm.. I thought Vilaas , you know bhog-vilaas that wrong sense one! 😳 now I got the right meaning, so, I definitely won't mind! 😉 feeling honored being the first one to catch it. arre! no doubt she is in love with Sanskaar( no doubt Sanskaar must have been irresistible cutie kiddo :) and to be honest, I so want to see childhood photos of Swasan :D ), but I was asking is she in love with kosmos! the way she was smiling while remembering his antics (his smile and habit of stealing sunsets, by the way, is there a significance or reason behind it? ( and he has cute antics like Swara as Vilaasini is like Sanskaar.) , I thought they are the couple like Swasan and Vilaasini-kosmos! :D :P

and yeah! study is going well and hope, you are doing fine too. 😊
Love,
Toshika.

Originally posted by: coolgal270

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Nyna, as you already know, I am a big fan of your writing!! you are simply amazing!! I have no words to properly describe how effing brilliant this is!!

Loved the concept..the whole meant-to-be, soulmates, cosmic-connection kind of a thing explained through the eyes of an other worldly being, a guarding angel, Vilasini..I totally LOVED it!! It was etheral and made sense...it 'explained' things clearly.. The signs that we 'humans' tend to ignore, something like destiny, fate, soulmates even, is such an important and 'real' thing in a parallel world..and it intersects with us without us realizing it...

This is what I understood from this OS of yours and I totally am in love with this concept! I so wish that it is true in real life!!😆

How nicely you summed up SwaSan's journey through the eyes of their GA, including the goof up where cupid struck Swara for laksh.. 😆That was so nicely done! I loved even the characterization of both the Angels..Vilasini is a calm, composed, serious... and Kosmos is a little...umm...fumbling kinds, rt...I mean someone like Sonam kapoor in khoobsoorat?😆 falling, fumbling, care free types?

Thank Gods Vilasini stopped kavita sanskar marriage!!Oh I am in her debt for eternity!! Thank you thank you dear guardian Angel (GA).. Plus she is really attached to Sanskar, isnt she? I mean who can resist?😆😳

Loved the whole OS yaar..cant really say what particularly... oh, actually one scene which stands out for me, as ALWAYS, is the hospital lift! I loved how Vilasini emphasises on the fact that she fit into his arms so perfectly, and he knew it even then!!and thats when the cupid struck!! and then if they would have actually listened, they would have heard the violins!! Aww!! Simply heart-melting stuff!!

so it was kosmos idea of fake marriage!oh how i love this Kosmos! Please i want to give a jhappi to him! That was one oscar-worthy idea!!😆 also enjoyed how she softly chastises Sanskar for his lame attempts to label his love as friendship😆 and the way Vilasini and Kosmos both got worried when Swara took so much time to realize her feelings...😆😆 Oh I loved the whole convo!!

And all the guardian angels celebrated the sindoor marriage? Awww.. just like we did! I think i like your GAs Nyna, we all would be grt friends!!😆😃

And finally when the GA leaves and Sanky lifts swara to 'confirm'😆, it was a seeti-bajao moment... a true Enchanting Pal,as I would say 😳!!

Thanks for the PM Nyna.. I truly enjoyed this OS and wish to read more from you!!

lots of love, Sumi!!