Swasan OS - Vilasini Visits - Guardian Angel I

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Beautiful OS Nyna!! Sweet and cute just like Sanskaar!<3..lol! I just loved the concept. I really like Sanskaar's guardian angel- Vilasini. Zooterkins!!??!! I don't know why this word feels so familiar! I just don't know why!! But the fact that there is a word which we utter and then forget, all this seems too familiar!

Anyways, letting go of deja-vu. Vilasini's explanation regarding Kavita was too good!! Thank God she'd been there. And her attachment towards Sanskaar was something I felt really sweet. She feels his pain and happiness. Like a true guardian. The ways he explains that she can't hear him but feel his emotions was good! I liked it

Kosmos is sooo cute<3 I love Swara's guardian although he made her fall for Lakshya, (idiot) but still, it was okay! He steals sunsets?? OMG... Again some familiarity strikes, I don't know why I feel that something like this I've read before! But yeah, I do like an imbecile yet cute angel! Nincompoop, reminds me of the Bishop's Candlesticks- a play I had read years ago and first time came across this word. Describes Swara's angel!😆

The angels did so much efforts, to save Swara and somehow make Sanskaar reach there! To imagine if something like this was ever there! Woah.. And that magical scene, when he lifts her up as if she were a fragile doll. I liked this comparison! Fragile doll. cute eh<3 And that time Cupid sprinkled his magical dust! God, this feels so magical😆(Jeez what am I saying) The violins!! I couldn't help laughing and feeling so cute at the same time!! Oh God<3

Well as fake marriage was my favourite track, I love you once again Kosmos! That sindoor filling scene is an evergreen one and I love the angels for that. Even I would have partied with them lol.!
Alcohol?😆 Aw.. But that confession was seriously the best love confession ever!! Couldn't have had anything better than this<3

Finally when she said that you are her guardian angel, that part was the best of the OS Nyna! The most beautiful of all and the truest of course!! The love that SwaSan have for each other is their biggest strength with them being each other's angels! Lovely paragraph and when finally he lifts her up!! Wonderful and actually perfect ending!

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Nupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Soundharya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome yaar

U rocked ...

Ur update really covered the whole year ..!!

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

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I don't remember the emoticons you mentioned in the forenote but I'm sure it did contain one for

" Brilliant, witty, refreshing and sweet"

Thanks so much for the pm nyna. Though I reserved this even before I check my pm.

When I knew there's this new story and it was you I just reserved it right away. Knew it was going be something I should never miss.

I'm glad I didn't miss this out.

Such a witty and sweet way to summarise the journey of destined souls. Thankyou so much for this piece. Loved it to bits.

@kosmos - Ah the trouble you had to go through. Poor him. But it's worth it kosmos and we so Thankyou for doing what should have been done.

@ nyna - Give me more. Please:)

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sujay kumar

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Nyna you nailed it with this os 👏
Seriously what a brilliant os 👏
I loved it from the core
What a brilliant journey of swasan you show with beautifully written
I like vilasini his guardian 👏
And her take on kavita was too good 👏
I seriously loved it
Nyna you are a brilliant writer 👏 do write a new os soon

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01
Awesome yaar
U rocked ...
Ur update really covered the whole year ..!!

Thank you😳😳 and we still want more of SwaSan

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Love You for the PM :)

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I would love it if you reiterated it after reading too😳😳

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Take your time. BTW you should actually be preparing for your exams😊

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tootiefrootie11

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"Angels are like diamonds. They can't be made, you have to find them. Each one is unique."- Jaclyn Smith

And Sanskaar's angel, just like him is spellbindingly unque, as is this wonderful OS you have crafted Nyna.

I love the concept, I'll explain more in my PS! But the execution is lovely too of course. Vilasini is so graceful and I love the touches you imbued this whole piece with. Starting firstly with Zooterkins- 😆. This instantly reminded me for some reason of Bedknobs and Broomsticks? One of my all time faves along with Sound of Music 😃

Then came the journey of SwaSan- perfectly timed for the 1 year anniversary of a show that gave us a couple that define so much for us- through the eyes of this guardian angel and it was so beautiful and poignant- I am in love all over again. I love the way Vilasini describes the magic that was created, and her utter love and investment into her precious charge, and through him for his soul mate as well. I loved how seeing those incredible moments through her eyes made it so magical and alive.

The touches of humour and wit were perfectly inserted and spaced out- they really gilded the lily IMHO. I loved the contrast between Vilasini's cool sophistication but intensity to Chronos's well meaning but rather bumbling yet good natured efforts- a total reflection to SwaSan's own mix 😉😆. Oh and lest I forget- the whole way of depicting the guardian in changing hues as per the memories was a master stroke 👏👏.

I fear I am getting repetitious but I think you get the picture here that I really found this very endearing and heart touchingly significant. The piece de resistance for me was the outlook on the first incredible sindoor marriage! ⭐️ I too have always felt the rest was all fluff after that and found the rest of the ceremonies all a let down but that sequence to me, is one of the sterling moments in the show that will always make me love SwaSan so I loved it getting that prime importance.

Wonderful Nyna- do write more- you know how much I love reading, be it your comments or through work like this 🤗

Love, Shru xoxo

PS: To share- as one of my currently shelved writing projects (due to DK mainly!) is a book- it is envisioned eventually as perhaps a trilogy but the whole thing is an entire fantasy fiction- my favourite genre- it is centred around lo and behold- a form of guardian angels- although they are not what we traditionally think of as GAs as such 😃

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