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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Nyna my dear...🤗 🤗
As I am traveling, I'm unable to respond in the detail I want to. But this was so awesome. It was witty, touching, humorous, all at the same time. I loved reading about Vilasini and Kosmos. 😆

And that line of Vilasini's : about how humans normally accept but don't understand; whereas Swara (during the sindhoor marriage), understood but did not accept---was so nuanced, so wonderful.

Kosmos being fascinated with sunsets and occasionally stealing one. 😆 I loved that touch about how the Guardian angel kept changing hues as per the tone of the memories...for a person who shares your fancy for chromatic descriptions, you can imagine how thrilling this would have been. 😉

The whole concept of the interplay of their guardian angels...and in the end, the way Vilasini says Sanskaar has become Swara's guardian angel...was superb.

Hats off to your creativity and imagination, Nyna. I am waiting eagerly for your tale of Aakhrand and Archini. 🤗

And yes, Swara certainly is made to fit perfectly in Sanskaar's arms, isn't she? 😳

Loads and Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Nyna my dear...🤗 🤗

As I am traveling, I'm unable to respond in the detail I want to. But this was so awesome. It was witty, touching, humorous, all at the same time. I loved reading about Vilasini and Kosmos. 😆

And that line of Vilasini's : about how humans normally accept but don't understand; whereas Swara (during the sindhoor marriage), understood but did not accept---was so nuanced, so wonderful.

Kosmos being fascinated with sunsets and occasionally stealing one. 😆 I loved that touch about how the Guardian angel kept changing hues as per the tone of the memories...for a person who shares your fancy for chromatic descriptions, you can imagine how thrilling this would have been. 😉

The whole concept of the interplay of their guardian angels...and in the end, the way Vilasini says Sanskaar has become Swara's guardian angel...was superb.

Hats off to your creativity and imagination, Nyna. I am waiting eagerly for your tale of Aakhrand and Archini. 🤗

And yes, Swara certainly is made to fit perfectly in Sanskaar's arms, isn't she? 😳

Loads and Loads of Love

Viji


Viji Sweetheart,

I am aware that you are traveling, so the fact the you have read and taken the time to comment, that in itself is more than enough, so here you go:
All for you!

Regarding Swara understanding but not accepting - that is what we have always felt, her reluctance at accepting that she could be falling in love with Sanskaar was based on her past bitter experiences at love (Shekhar, her dadaji, Lakshya - they all let her down, all her life till then there was never a positive relation with any man in her life)

Kosmos stealing sunsets - somehow that makes him a little more lovable - and considering he is Swara's guardian angel, he would be lovable despite all his foibles😆

I am thrilled that you liked the concept of the guardian angel being able to change hues as per their emotions - I simply could not resist all those colours😳 (I thought I could argue a logical basis - they are being of light so if colours influence human moods, then moods would influence their colours - hoping it would pass muster😉)

Yes, Sanskaar is her strength and the love of her life so that would make him her guardian angel!

And she does indeed fit in his arms (why can we not have a couple more of such 'lift' scenes.

love,
Nyna

Sigh! Aakrand and Archini - they are troubling me - I have ideas in vivid technicolour hues but when I start penning down all that comes out are ink devils😡😡

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful, witty, humorous and touchy OS. Loved the conversation btw Sanskar and Vilasini. Loved it. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Beautiful, witty, humorous and touchy OS. Loved the conversation btw Sanskar and Vilasini. Loved it. 😊


Thank you so much for reading and your comments. BTW could you let me know your name, only if you do not mind😊

Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Nyna! 🤗🤗🤗
Such a delightful combination of fantasy, philosophy and romance! A Guardian Angel's view of proceedings in the lives of Swasan!! Fabulous!

Love,
Bubble
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soapbubble

Nyna! 🤗🤗🤗

Such a delightful combination of fantasy, philosophy and romance! A Guardian Angel's view of proceedings in the lives of Swasan!! Fabulous!

Love,
Bubble


Dear Bubble,

Thank you - coming from a writer like you, it means all the more😊

love
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Thank you so much for reading and your comments. BTW could you let me know your name, only if you do not mind😊

Nyna

Dear Nyna
Wlcm. And my name is Aheli.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Dear Nyna

Wlcm. And my name is Aheli.😊


Great to ''meet' you, Aheli! It is a beautiful name (meaning pure, right?)

Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Great to ''meet' you, Aheli! It is a beautiful name (meaning pure, right?)

Nyna

Thanks Nyna. Nyc to meet u too!!😊 And yes, u r ri8. 'Aheli' means 'Pure'. And thanks for complimenting my name.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Nyna!
I don't know how this idea came into your zany mind...but its out-of-the-world.(pun intended)👏

I love this fic..especially the take on Kavita.
Your writing was suitably umm..detached in an otherwordly dimension.

Yeah thats how I would describe it. of course even I have no idea what I just meant.

Decoded it means..I loved it.😃

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