Swasan OS - Vilasini Visits - Guardian Angel I - Page 5

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Dear...wow...

OMG... it was spectacular... im speechless...

Thank u for this...

love

Talia

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice 👍🏼

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Nyna 😳

This. Is. So. Freaking. CUTE. There was playfulness and a kind of charm in those sentences, it lifted up my mood!

The idea of angels making SwaSan and RagLak do all those things was so refreshing and innovative, I loved it!

The advice to Sanskaar about not blaming himself for whatever happened with Swara was perfect. It's true, Swara ultimately made choices that escalated her initial suffering/problems and he needs to accept that.

That last sentece.. "Yes..she still does fit perfectly". Omfmdfnnkm. Gosh! Swara was meant to be in Sanskaar's arms and hold his hand hers. They fit like a puzzle, I swear. ❤️

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Nynaaa my dear... what was that..?? I mean "What"-- "was"--- "that"..?? 😃

Such a beautiful, awesome, wonderful, cute angelic OS..

It was such a delight to read it yaar..Truly mind blowing..⭐️

I am a great fan of fairy tales and this one was as beautiful as one..Dreamlike

I was smiling all the while I was reading it...I have a sweet request, please do write more stories..I would love to read them yaar🤗 you are so talented..😃

The angel with changing colours of its light..wow..simply wow..I would love to see mine..I was wondering about many things..Will it be a he or she..? and how will it look like? Is it with me right now..and all..😳

I loved every bit of this OS yaar..Simply amazing..Hats off to you..🤗

Love
Naina

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik

Nyna🤗 I know i was supposed to be busy over the weekend, but couldn't resist stealing a few minutes to read this one😛 And am i glad i did that?? This was so so sooo adorable.. I was shining a bright shade of carmine gold while reading this one😉😃 Loved how you have interwoven the concept of destiny being planned but one's choices shaping it as well.. And guardian angels being light!!👏 Their aura changing with the emotions they feel... wonderful yaar.. This os has such a feel good factor, I feel all warm and cuddly😆 Especially the last swasan part More more, i want more OSs😆😆😆 And thanks for the pm😃

Love,

Akshata😊

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Shru,

Thud...That was me - fainting out of joy at reading your comments...recovered just a while ago (typical reaction, when a writer of your calibre calls my OS wonderful) I had mentioned in my introduction, that 'we write by the light of every story we read.' Your stories are a significant part of that light.

Your quote is beautiful and yes I do agree, Sanskaar and his angel are unique.

Zooterkins - does sound nice (I wanted a swear word, which would be what one would utter on being hurt but should not be a swear word as such - guess this did fit the bill😊)

SwaSan - both the couple and their journey is magical - it really does not need much of an effort, right, to fall in love with them? Over and over again.

Vilasini and Kosmos - well considering who their wards were, it was but natural, that their guardians reflect some of those characteristics. So Kosmos had to be slightly bumbling (which was my attempt to show Swara's fumbling detective skills) but absolutely lovable and loved by most. Sanskaar is a cool dude (for all his brazen charisma) so I made Vilasini similar. I was not too sure about the angels changing colours to reflect their emotions (I felt it right, as they were beings of light, it would be a given that they to show their emotions by changing hues) but when you call it a 'masterstroke' , I am thrilled, (I have already given myself a few 'self-pats' on my shoulder, we Librans do tend to be a little vain 😉)

And finally the sindoor scene - I do remember writing about it on Viji's post also - that scene and the resounding mantra of '"Mangalam..." give me goosebumps each time I think about it. This is by far my most favourite scene and none of the other SwaSan scenes come a close second. (When writing about it, I went back to Asha's post and watched this scene - a couple of times).

We did have two SwaSan weddings subsequently, both ruined by Ragya, albeit for different reasons, so they do not even figure in my list of favourite scenes.😡😭

love,

Nyna

PS: Fantasy genre with Guardian Angels! Please treat this as my confirmation for purchase of a pre-booked order for your GA trilogies. Only one condition - they have to be 'author signed' copies.😊

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Aha Nyna- a Libran!!! I should have guessed! It's my favourite sign in the Zodiac 😃. I am a very earth bound Virgo and have always had a great rapport with charming, diplomatic and graceful Librans:) One of the main leads in the script I am jointly working on with my friend and my personal fave male character is thought of by us as a Libran 😃.

Oh and meant to say- the names - Vilasini and Cosmos are very fitting too 😉. And please- you are embarrassing me about my work- itna bhi khaas nahi hai but love you for saying it nevertheless 😳. 😆😆 re the book(s)- done- when (!) they get published (and trying to believe they will as per the Secret!) a signed copy is yours 😆

Lots of love always xoxo

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear Toshika</font>[/DIV]

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Oh no, we cannot have the guardian angels falling in love with each other,we humans cannot be trusted completely in the matters of the heart😉. Imagine a Ragya /Swalak/KavSan type of battle between the guardian angels🤢</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">But Vilasini and Kosmos share a lovely bond - after all, they are the guardians to the most magical couple, so their bond would be magical too.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Regarding stealing sunsets, that was based on a book (The Tamuli - by David Eddings) where one of the Gods of a particular sect is busy collecting sunsets. I simply loved the idea of a God with a human failing. And sunsets are beautiful, most can agree on wanting to be able to steal one and keep it with themselves.😊</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">The reason both act like their wardsis that either you are given an angel as per your personality or because our guardian angels are always with us, maybe our characteristics rub off on them 😊</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">love</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nyna</font>