Swasan OS - Vilasini Visits - Guardian Angel I

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Nyna 😳

This. Is. So. Freaking. CUTE. There was playfulness and a kind of charm in those sentences, it lifted up my mood!

The idea of angels making SwaSan and RagLak do all those things was so refreshing and innovative, I loved it!

The advice to Sanskaar about not blaming himself for whatever happened with Swara was perfect. It's true, Swara ultimately made choices that escalated her initial suffering/problems and he needs to accept that.

That last sentece.. "Yes..she still does fit perfectly". Omfmdfnnkm. Gosh! Swara was meant to be in Sanskaar's arms and hold his hand hers. They fit like a puzzle, I swear. ❤️

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

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nida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

wow

what a unique out of the box idea😃

guardian angels🤗

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Woe brilliant and so different such a nice read to read about these situations and confusion being cleared loved sanskaars guardian angle what a cutie...

Superb os...

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Nynaeve

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Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Res Nyna dear. Will unres soon. My network is acting up.
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Dearest Nyna

What an awesome OS. Such an unique idea to relieve the swasan journey👏. I really said "Zooterkins" to check if it is true, no harm in trying though right. 😆
Won't do, each one of has a personal invisible guardian, but the magical summoning words are different😆 So I guess (hope) ''Zooterkins' would not work for anyone but Sankaar😉

I loved Sanskar guardian Angel Vilasini ,she is too witty and she loves Sanskar😃 . Her take on Sanskar falling for kavitha was too good. She tried to ask Sanskar parents guardians to help them split up thankfully none of them were the reason for her death or else Sanskar would take a revenge journey towards the guardian Angels.😆

Vilasini is cute, right? (her name means ''playful' which is quite suitable here) And as for Sanskaar's guardian angel loving him, who doesn't😆 Yes, the angels cannot really interfere too much, so Kavita's ''supposed death' was not their doing.

Her love for Sanskar and her tears that he choose to spend five years in revenge. I love this understanding side of her too. 😊
She is a guardian angel, and she loves him, so it is obvious that she would be miserable. But since there is a limit to which angels can interfere, she could nothing but wait and watch.😭 and hope that Sanskaar soon sees reason.

Kosmos how can you make such a big blunder😡. But i love him too. The sweet sunset stealing nincoompoop. Well what does nincoompoop means? Why i am falling in love with this Guardian Angels. I am officially crazy🤪 . Well that my problems moving on.😆😆

Kosmos - is a nincompoop, (it is a 17th-century old English word meaning a foolish person, but in a harmless way) I love this word.

Thankfully arrows can be dislodged .Good for us😉 .So the cupid struck them at the hospital scene, maybe it stuck us that why we all fell in love with SwaSan at the precise moment.😳
I think Cupid used an extraordinary amount of magic dust, too many of us fell in love with them at that moment. Even today that scene makes me

And i absolutely loved Vilsani take of SwaSan journey. And the last scene was so beautiful. She does fit him perfectly. ⭐️
She does, doesn't she (which what Shruti (Lannister) had commented on a couple of posts regarding this scene ) Yes she does

Love ,

Nita

Thank you - for reading and such lovely comments. Wonderful waking up to them😊

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: mystery75
wow
what a unique out of the box idea😃
guardian angels🤗

You liked it, thank you! (and having guardian angels - does sound nice😉)

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: raaz19
Woe brilliant and so different such a nice read to read about these situations and confusion being cleared loved sanskaars guardian angle what a cutie...
Superb os...

Dear Raaz,

You are right! if there was indeed a guardian angel who knew that Sanskaar journey was to be with Swara, then that is how the events must be. (Of course, even if Kavita had actually died, you cannot blame them, their interference is quite limited, but explaining it to Sanskaar would be difficult)

And Sanskaar's angel being cute, well, she is Sanskaar's angel so she has to be cute. Or wait, maybe he is cute because she is, any way you see it, both are cute😉

Thank you for reading and your comments

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Zephyr8

Right you are...I'm Sagarika. Oh do let me know for sure if and when you write about Kosmos. Thanx Nyna😊

Dear Sagarika,

Will do and as I said - you would be the first to know

Nyna

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TRPS

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Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Nyna! 🤗
don't know you remember me or not, We had a conversation in your former thread. :) but again, after that, because of studies' commitments, I can't come here or read stories. but don't know why, yesterday just a hunch or what, I opened it! An ishmaart move by me! 😎 😃
Whoa! Impishly cute this OS is! I so much loved it and especially this imagination of yours! 😊
Vilaasani (ermm..though so good that Sanskaar is not into Vilaas by any chance . 😛 ) her changing colors as changing Sanskaar's emotions and back stories and incidents and cosmos, (seems Vilaasini is in love with him) some traits like Swara, 😊 all were so good! I had a huge grin while reading it and it was funny too. 😆
I like the way you started it and ended! indeed, Swasan are Magical and guardian angel of each other and Swara perfectly fitting into Sanskaar was so sweet and cute. 😊
really very nice and innovative piece of writing Nyna! and I learned a new word too! 😉 Keep writing! 😊

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coolgal270

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

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Nyna, as you already know, I am a big fan of your writing!! you are simply amazing!! I have no words to properly describe how effing brilliant this is!!

Loved the concept..the whole meant-to-be, soulmates, cosmic-connection kind of a thing explained through the eyes of an other worldly being, a guarding angel, Vilasini..I totally LOVED it!! It was etheral and made sense...it 'explained' things clearly.. The signs that we 'humans' tend to ignore, something like destiny, fate, soulmates even, is such an important and 'real' thing in a parallel world..and it intersects with us without us realizing it...

This is what I understood from this OS of yours and I totally am in love with this concept! I so wish that it is true in real life!!😆

How nicely you summed up SwaSan's journey through the eyes of their GA, including the goof up where cupid struck Swara for laksh.. 😆That was so nicely done! I loved even the characterization of both the Angels..Vilasini is a calm, composed, serious... and Kosmos is a little...umm...fumbling kinds, rt...I mean someone like Sonam kapoor in khoobsoorat?😆 falling, fumbling, care free types?

Thank Gods Vilasini stopped kavita sanskar marriage!!Oh I am in her debt for eternity!! Thank you thank you dear guardian Angel (GA).. Plus she is really attached to Sanskar, isnt she? I mean who can resist?😆😳

Loved the whole OS yaar..cant really say what particularly... oh, actually one scene which stands out for me, as ALWAYS, is the hospital lift! I loved how Vilasini emphasises on the fact that she fit into his arms so perfectly, and he knew it even then!!and thats when the cupid struck!! and then if they would have actually listened, they would have heard the violins!! Aww!! Simply heart-melting stuff!!

so it was kosmos idea of fake marriage!oh how i love this Kosmos! Please i want to give a jhappi to him! That was one oscar-worthy idea!!😆 also enjoyed how she softly chastises Sanskar for his lame attempts to label his love as friendship😆 and the way Vilasini and Kosmos both got worried when Swara took so much time to realize her feelings...😆😆 Oh I loved the whole convo!!

And all the guardian angels celebrated the sindoor marriage? Awww.. just like we did! I think i like your GAs Nyna, we all would be grt friends!!😆😃

And finally when the GA leaves and Sanky lifts swara to 'confirm'😆, it was a seeti-bajao moment... a true Enchanting Pal,as I would say 😳!!

Thanks for the PM Nyna.. I truly enjoyed this OS and wish to read more from you!!

lots of love, Sumi!!

Edited by coolgal270 - 9 years ago