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Supriya

@smnsupp

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Awesomeee

It really expresses every incident in their lives

It was soo soothing and of course the "cute" part in the end

was really fabulous!!!

One of the best OS I've read!!

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Too good too good! Amazing words, beautiful expressions, out of the world imagination! 👏

Will be looking out for more of your works : )

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: smnsupp
Awesomeee
It really expresses every incident in their lives
It was soo soothing and of course the "cute" part in the end
was really fabulous!!!
One of the best OS I've read!!

That makes my day😳😳😳😳😳 And could you let me know your name?

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: SwaSanForLife
Too good too good! Amazing words, beautiful expressions, out of the world imagination! 👏
Will be looking out for more of your works : )

Thank you, for reading and your lovely comments - they really do make my day😳

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy
Res 😊

Unres👏

I don't remember the emoticons you mentioned in the forenote but I'm sure it did contain one for
" Brilliant, witty, refreshing and sweet"

Thanks so much for the pm nyna. Though I reserved this even before I check my pm.
When I knew there's this new story and it was you I just reserved it right away. Knew it was going be something I should never miss.
I'm glad I didn't miss this out.

Such a witty and sweet way to summarise the journey of destined souls. Thankyou so much for this piece. Loved it to bits.

@kosmos - Ah the trouble you had to go through. Poor him. But it's worth it kosmos and we so Thankyou for doing what should have been done.

@ nyna - Give me more. Please:)

Love
N

Dear Nalini,

I am thrilled and when you said you actually reserved even before my pm, I almost died (out of happiness and embarrassment 😳)

And reading your comments, I think I will stay that way for some more time.

Yes Kosmos did go through a lot of trouble, I am sure we can forgive him for stealing sunsets😆

I had planned an additional para on Kosmos and Vilasini which would have been the ending, but then somehow it appropriate to end it where I did.😊

love,

Nyna

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hello...just chanced upon this one and loved it. A happy read with a different concept. Witty and fun. I think I really liked Kosmos...could you write something from his point if view too.

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Zephyr8
Hello...just chanced upon this one and loved it. A happy read with a different concept. Witty and fun. I think I really liked Kosmos...could you write something from his point if view too.

Dear Sagarika (right?),

Glad that you enjoyed this tale.😆

POV of Kosmos - will try and if I do manage, you would be first to know.

Nyna

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Res Nyna dear. Will unres soon. My network is acting up.

unres

Dearest Nyna

What an awesome OS. Such an unique idea to relieve the swasan journey👏. I really said "Zooterkins" to check if it is true, no harm in trying though right. 😆

I loved Sanskar guardian Angel Vilasini ,she is too witty and she loves Sanskar😃 . Her take on Sanskar falling for kavitha was too good. She tried to ask Sanskar parents guardians to help them split up thankfully none of them were the reason for her death or else Sanskar would take a revenge journey towards the guardian Angels.😆

Her love for Sanskar and her tears that he choose to spend five years in revenge. I love this understanding side of her too. 😊

Kosmos how can you make such a big blunder😡. But i love him too. The sweet sunset stealing nincoompoop. Well what does nincoompoop means? Why i am falling in love with this Guardian Angels. I am officially crazy🤪 . Well that my problems moving on.😆😆

Thankfully arrows can be dislodged .Good for us😉 .So the cupid struck them at the hospital scene, maybe it stuck us that why we all fell in love with SwaSan at the precise moment.😳

And i absolutely loved Vilsani take of SwaSan journey. And the last scene was so beautiful. She does fit him perfectly. ⭐️

Love ,

Nita

Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sagarika (right?),

Glad that you enjoyed this tale.😆
POV of Kosmos - will try and if I do manage, you would be first to know.

Nyna

Right you are...I'm Sagarika. Oh do let me know for sure if and when you write about Kosmos. Thanx Nyna😊